yea dont leave fake or hate feedback and i did this song on a mixtape so ima type everything and ma homie D-Dime aint on the site so i wrote his part on here

Mjust23-"yo,wats u nigga"
D-Dime-"nuttin jus chillen"
Mjust23-dem east coast niggas still talkin
D-Dime-iight,lets rip em
Mjust23-Fa'sho

Verse 1 Mjust23
(spit it slow)
Nigga fuck York......we got Too $short
have em screamin bail abort.........give ya man some support
cause he bleedin out the chest........shoulda worn a lyric proof vest
leave ya lungs in a mess............steal ya vital organs and leave the rest
hit the faggots wit a south paw
leave the maggots lookin like cold slaw
homie u dont no me...........pussy u cant hold me
if u could u wouldnt try to be...........and u wouldnt try wit me
leave u curved like a curcize c............blood niggas be all that u wanna b
i make niggas shake in they tims..............thats a.t.l. crunk off the limbs
jumped all ya friends.........killed all ya mens
pump the ak wit a 47..............leave that nigga imprinted wit a size seven
five bloody faggots feels like heavon........chris then reverse bac to devean
dumbass wanted to test the heat........fell in love wit music so i fuck the beat
among the west wit the best im the elite..........fuck wit me and suffer defeat
not on the mic but u lose in real life.........so u wont have enough time to recoup the knife
bitch go somewhere wit that..........only sell the crack
never scrared bullets fly but only at rats..........menace to society dog i str8 jack
only if u burn nigga pick up ma slack..............and sammy sosa yo ass wit a baseball bat
im a pleasure to rock a l.a. hat................since niggas stop protectin they back
cause they thought shit was koo.............get educated in bangin nigga blood red skoo
and nigga stop that noise cause ima clap at ja roo
and make faggots rippel like whinie the poo

hook
wood wood wood wood wood wood wood wood wood wood wood

verse 2 D-Dimes
(spit it fast like busta)
nigga back up its all good
and turn back around and rep yo hood
45. glock i could
6 gage i should
now i hate ny and rep the wood
rat race on foot land and air
bitche lesbo step that pair
perfect match
watch ma hatch
grab and snatch
blue and red dont match
so pick up food
im not in a god mood
big booty thats lewd
fast ob the mic
im outta site
ma nigga mjust yea we doin it rite

hook and fade

this shit was mediocre...not that hot...it kind of got borin and repetitive after a while...nuthin in the verse really jumped out at me...
second guy was shit....he was jus talkin about his guns....and wut he does...not the city or town yall from...

overall...6/10.

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i cant hate ima just take the feedback like a man.............still uppin

yo dat would be a cold diss..........nice structure do.................yo keep doin wah chu do hallor

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LINKS TO MY SONGS:
http://www.soundclick.com/Car Shows...id=3438907&q=lo

Tha Battle (Tech Skillz Diss 2)
Tech Skillz Diss
Fuk Tha Rules

thanx dog uppin for feedback

it was terrible..................really

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still uppin

shit was half way decent but i wouldnt by the shit or go in public on stage with shit but not bad yall got some work to do but keep that up and new york will be scared to fuck wit the Wick West

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-Aristotle-



"Your Favorite Rappers Favorite Rapper"

that shit was aight u can elevate alot tho and work on the strucuture

i give it a 6/10

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uppin

I thought it was decent.mjust,your verse was average.your structure was ok but you shouldve left some of your lines out.The other guy was straight ass.The hook was gay as fuck,and D-dimes shouldnt have been on there.Repetitive at parts,just talking about guns and blah.You bois need to elevate a bit more then make something half decent.5/10.

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uppin