demobx vs BostonLyricist
 

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Check in by: 08-05-04 at 01:08 PM

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BostonLyricist has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-02-04 01:09 PM.

demobx has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-02-04 02:05 PM.

No time to solicit time to get explicit split you in half get horrific /guts hanging as im spitting/ went big apple picking when u decided to battle/ nyc status leave ya dismangled /like hannibal leaves his victims in his stomach gutted carcass tangled /around my words cause you couldn't handle/ Became my prey /its a jungle in this bitch should have watched your back before you came to this shit in May/ Okay you say you from the "Mean streets of Boston" / Your life its costin /thinking your gansta could beat this newyorkin /Im extortin /execution style bring the revolution im shootin make you start abortin /feel the torment /cut off all your fat like George Forman /getting in your skin like a scorpion /I'm shortining your life span /
Like I can -and I am- as I am prophesizing the end of your lyrical plan./ banned forever left you mute/ a couple of lines back when I decided to execute /then next threw you down the garbage chute /your remains salute the rats, rodents meet your crew/ that you never knew /destiny inevitably set its fate on you /your calling to be left in the stench that you tried to spew /In this game its a clue game trying to figure out who did what -with what -and what triggered -you'll never figure it out cuz uze a pussy nigga And I bet you never figured that this killa Is the opposite of a dick Yes a chick put the poisen to your liva'

Boston vs the bronx hollah at me

dis boy a gay stippa n da bronx thats why he boogie downs//
a pussy rapper sniffed out by real mc bood hounds//
he slips himself a date rape pill and jacks off//
so when he wake up in the mourn he dont remeber he wacked off//
even if your ryhmes had a power button the wouldnt work//
you smell like couchie wit no panties, in a sauna underneath a skirt//
Even if you lived on the equator you wouldn’t be hot//
I tear apart brick city and make it a bus stop//
Boston vs the bronx watch me paint it green//
Have all its occupants including you lookin like a steven king scene//
Your fans fall asleep to your demo so your cd comes wit caffine//
Lyriacl sporadic shots to your temple explode your mind//
Your like the pacific coast time zone your always behind//
I finish you with a ryhme death blow to your vocals flood your lungs//
You’re a virgin to a win like sex to nuns//


Holl at cha boi

Voted For: BostonLyricist

Boston-you used a few personals about his location...overplayed the gay shit though, i didnt like that...some good punches..a decent strutcture n flow

demobx-your structure is wack as fuck dude...learn how to battle right...do it in lines and make sure they're the same length...you had punches n personals..but your structure was just way to wack

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Voted For: demobx

ima have to give this battle to demobox bcuz i was feelin him bringin back the o'l school G-rap style n makin it work
maybe need to work on the structure a lil more but otha than that the flow was nice n personals woere good
holla at me
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=136650
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=136344
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Voted For: demobx

Boston, you had a really tight punch with that "pacific time" line, and along with all your other lines you got my vote. Dem, you got a really strong flow though, and either of you hit me up if you ever wanna battle.

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=139258
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Shit, I'm sorry, that was the wrong link, that goes to one of my "open mic" verses.
Here's the battle vs. Avanish.
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Voted For: demobx

Oooh ight calm down man u went hard it paid off both verses I can dig demo u win wit ur constant punchin and jabbin BL u was good too but this verse had more punches personals and fire u had they fuel jus didn't use it as much as u cud and shud.
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=137982
Both of you shudn't put '/' or '//' at the end of your lines jus structure it so we can get your flow and rhyme BL you have a good structure minus da '//'. demo structure your rhyme betta so it it's easier to read nice verse tho' keep it up watch the structure of BL. return da fav. http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=137982

Voted For: BostonLyricist

he slips himself a date rape pill and jacks off//
so when he wake up in the mourn he dont remeber he wacked off//

that was pretty funny

Demi had a fucked up flow , structure and didnt really have a good battle verse either.

Vote Boston , funnier verse , more originol and better dissiing and wordplay

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Voted For: BostonLyricist

Id have to say both verses were pretty hot...so it was tough to pick. I read thru both of them, then I went back to read thru them again and I thought that Boston's was just a lot funnier...hes pretty tight with the metaphors also. The flow is on when you go bar by bar, but it kinda jumps around a little bit. It just seemed like he was much more creative with what he was saying. Demobx came with some shit, but he didnt really break the structure down well and it made it hard to read, you could get it if you went over it a few times but it was tough. The punches just really werent there, i mean as creative as boston came. I think Boston overall was better.

v/Boston

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Voted For: BostonLyricist



No time to solicit time to get explicit split you in half get horrific /guts hanging as im spitting/
5/10
went big apple picking when u decided to battle/ nyc status leave ya dismangled /
5/10
like hannibal leaves his victims in his stomach gutted carcass tangled /around my words cause you couldn't handle/ Became my prey /its a jungle in this bitch should have watched your back before you came to this shit in May/
5/10
Okay you say you from the "Mean streets of Boston" / Your life its costin /thinking your gansta could beat this newyorkin /Im extortin /
4/10
execution style bring the revolution im shootin make you start abortin /feel the torment /cut off all your fat like George Forman /getting in your skin like a scorpion /I'm shortining your life span 4/10/

Like I can -and I am- as I am prophesizing the end of your lyrical plan./ banned forever left you mute/ a couple of lines back when I decided to execute /
6/10
then next threw you down the garbage chute /your remains salute the rats, rodents meet your crew/ that you never knew /destiny inevitably set its fate on you /your calling to be left in the stench that you tried to spew
5/10
/In this game its a clue game trying to figure out who did what -with what -and what triggered -you'll never figure it out cuz uze a pussy nigga And I bet you never figured that this killa Is the opposite of a dick Yes a chick put the poisen to your liva'
4/10


dis boy a gay stippa n da bronx thats why he boogie downs//
a pussy rapper sniffed out by real mc bood hounds//
6/10
he slips himself a date rape pill and jacks off//
so when he wake up in the mourn he dont remeber he wacked off//
6/10
even if your ryhmes had a power button the wouldnt work//
you smell like couchie wit no panties, in a sauna underneath a skirt//
6/10
Even if you lived on the equator you wouldn’t be hot//
I tear apart brick city and make it a bus stop//
6/10
Boston vs the bronx watch me paint it green//
Have all its occupants including you lookin like a steven king scene//
Your fans fall asleep to your demo so your cd comes wit caffine//
7/10
Lyriacl sporadic shots to your temple explode your mind//
Your like the pacific coast time zone your always behind//
6/10
I finish you with a ryhme death blow to your vocals flood your lungs//
You’re a virgin to a win like sex to nuns//
7/10


This battle was ok and the punches werent really that hard on both sides and the wordplay was ok you both could of came with alot harder punches and alot better complexity and high vocab but it came down 2 better wordplay and harder punches

Voted For: BostonLyricist

kind of a wack~battle...

Boston gets my vote..had harder punches than dembox..a nice structure..a good flow....dem work on yo shit..yo shit was nice..but them punches could've been harder...