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Verbal Abuse vs Ice Pick
Battle Rules:
6 - UNLIMITED Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting 120 Minutes To Key Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 08-02-04 at 10:51 PM Must drop verse in 120 minutes after check in. |
Verbal Abuse has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-02-04 08:55 PM.
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Ice Pick has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-02-04 09:02 PM.
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I've got elevated standards mixed with an inclined rhymin' attack//
Battle in SUB ZERO temperatures to Yank the SPINE OUT YA BACK// Have you lying out flat......Real emcees, are part of a dying breed..... what you really need-to-do// is stop gettin' your nuts pumped up when you're on weed and brew// You're transparent, I can see through you....I'm known for wreckin// Careers on the net...see me clear as a threat...catch shells from your own weapon// Severely I'll wet.....your sweat suit, let loose, holes appear in your flesh// A Fetish to fukk you up....chunk,a spear in your chest to leave you a mess// I've been pushed to the edge, took a sledge,hammer to the roof of your head// then split in three.....with the sharp wedge.......blade of an axe/// You write and recite,bullshit for free, while I get paid to spit facts// I'm raping these tracks....feel like the BFI man, Taking out trash// Fresh flavored, so I'm making it last....Chinese Issue A.K. sprayin' em fast// No hesitation or delayin' on my part, just start, squeezing// My A.K.'s got V.A. bleeding....you're lungs are opened so air's leaking// Leading to having difficulty breathing.....seeing you gasping and weezing// I ain't gonna just leave 'em.......Nobody knows where V.A. went// Placement....body parts scattered about under the pavement// Teeth and head elsewhere in a furnace getting cremated// You can get away with murder....long as it's pre-meditated// |
somthing quick
Dont matter wanted to get it over and done with hopfully you dont toake 3 hours for your verse when i dropped a keyd verse in 10 minutes |
Erm...
Herbs Can Only Diss. Investigate this kid, watch 'em elaborate with Lips. Spit fire to this ice block, and watch me evaporate this Bitch. Recap To Fake a Diss, just a simple Resolution... Darwinism explains this coward, your Liquid, Guess whos Fusion? Best at usin'...personals to dry up Reputations. Loss of water supply, when you step to verbal Invasions. Self reprisentation, get a medic...his sigs in Trouble. Ill drain out your Purpose, like kids in puddles. Fibs in Doubles, your at your Vertical Limit. People wouldnt feel your flow, like humid days in a convertable Civic. Addin foriegn liquid to this thread, might soften you Out. Finish my lecture, and discipline this child...as im washin your Mouth. |
uppin for votes. leave links...i need credits. so i will return the favor.
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Voted For: Verbal Abuse
damn in my opinion verbal killed it ... Ice Pick deff. had more lines but its not always quan. over qual. well sure as hell not in this case ... i saw some decent punches on Ice's side...some lines were a lil stretched but all in all it flowed ok ... verbal deff over powered him in the personal field which is what i think one it that and the flow and i was mos def diggin that closer .... hahahaha ... this was a nice battle stay up... |
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Voted For: Verbal Abuse
my vote goes to this guy because he had a better flow going with his,...and his vocab was serious too.... return da favor~~~~http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=138354 Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Voted For: Ice Pick
nice battle fellas, verbale abuse u was a decent flow, a few good disses and decent punches that was fairly effective plus u'r creativeness was slightly above average... 7.5 ice pick u had the better flow with more effective hit that was better to me, u'r creativeness was above average and every line was slick, plus u'r diss was decent as-well not a bad verse.. 8.0 outta 10 flow: ice punches: ice by far creative: ice vote ice: nice drop fellas |
Thanks for the real votes
I hate when people who want to battle me vote against me Fuckin pussy ass mother fuckers |
dont get upset ... your not going to win every battle ...
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Voted For: Verbal Abuse
Flow: Verbal Abuse Structure: Verbal Abuse Punches: TIE Personals: TIE Metas: Verbal Abuse Multiez: Verbal Abuse Creativity: Verbal Abuse Enjoyment: Verbal Abuse VOTE: Verbal Abuse Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
y'll return the fav and vgote in this battle plz
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=138618 |
Voted For: Ice Pick
yo diss battle was mad close..va came wit it..but ice pick kep it commin... metas was crazy...good structure for the type of flow you used..wordplay was real good..punches connected vote.... ice |
aight uppin again....no hate. leave links, ill drop an honest vote.
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aight uppin again....no hate. leave links, ill drop an honest vote.
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Upp for them real votes
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Voted For: Verbal Abuse
very close battle both writers putting down some good punchlines and flows. my vote swings in the favour of verbal abuse for his last 2 lines took it out for me. Addin foriegn liquid to this thread, might soften you Out. Finish my lecture, and discipline this child...as im washin your Mouth. Vote - Verbal Abuse |
thanx, uppin for more votes. wanna get this closed.
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Voted For: Ice Pick
open: verbal close: verbal personals: non metas: ice punches: ice multis: non this came down to a fuckin hair line of a win but v/ ice pick Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
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Voted For: Ice Pick
I've got elevated standards mixed with an inclined rhymin' attack// Battle in SUB ZERO temperatures to Yank the SPINE OUT YA BACK// Have you lying out flat......Real emcees, are part of a dying breed..... what you really need-to-do// is stop gettin' your nuts pumped up when you're on weed and brew// You're transparent, I can see through you....I'm known for wreckin// Careers on the net...see me clear as a threat...catch shells from your own weapon// Severely I'll wet.....your sweat suit, let loose, holes appear in your flesh// A Fetish to fukk you up....chunk,a spear in your chest to leave you a mess// I've been pushed to the edge, took a sledge,hammer to the roof of your head// then split in three.....with the sharp wedge.......blade of an axe/// You write and recite,bullshit for free, while I get paid to spit facts// I'm raping these tracks....feel like the BFI man, Taking out trash// Fresh flavored, so I'm making it last....Chinese Issue A.K. sprayin' em fast// No hesitation or delayin' on my part, just start, squeezing// My A.K.'s got V.A. bleeding....you're lungs are opened so air's leaking// Leading to having difficulty breathing.....seeing you gasping and weezing// I ain't gonna just leave 'em.......Nobody knows where V.A. went// Placement....body parts scattered about under the pavement// Teeth and head elsewhere in a furnace getting cremated// You can get away with murder....long as it's pre-meditated// 7/10 Investigate this kid, watch 'em elaborate with Lips. Spit fire to this ice block, and watch me evaporate this Bitch. Recap To Fake a Diss, just a simple Resolution... Darwinism explains this coward, your Liquid, Guess whos Fusion? Best at usin'...personals to dry up Reputations. Loss of water supply, when you step to verbal Invasions. Self reprisentation, get a medic...his sigs in Trouble. Ill drain out your Purpose, like kids in puddles. Fibs in Doubles, your at your Vertical Limit. People wouldnt feel your flow, like humid days in a convertable Civic. Addin foriegn liquid to this thread, might soften you Out. Finish my lecture, and discipline this child...as im washin your Mouth. 6/10 this was a close battle but it came down 2 better wordplay verbal u had perfect structure but ya punches werent hard at all Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Verbal Abuse Is Straight Up Bitch
Oh But He Can Keep His Friends Votes Though Right |
I dont get D/r hammie, no one likes me on this site. but that vote, all he put was a couple stats and copied the verses. you know that was an unexplained verse,
now for the voters that were feeling my rhymes, hit me up .. honest votes get a returned favor. |
aight thanx, ill be sure to hit up an honest vote, need to close this, a couple more votes.
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Voted For: Ice Pick
5th honest vote given to ice pick, ima go wit pick once again cuz he just better, ha destroyed you on the structure the rhyme sceme, methaphor, creativity goes to verb, but you got the wordplay, punches and personels, and you get the ending, he got the opener, but you had mo factors so you get my vote, verb, plz elevate |
LOL me elevate? ill take that into consideration. at least ppl are voting.
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Voted For: Verbal Abuse
this was close ! nice battle y'all ... both had nice punches and vocab ... both onnected well .. my vote goes to Verbal Abuse .. he edged this one .. return the favor http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=140675 http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=140383 http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=140123 |
thanx, one more to get this closed.
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Voted For: Ice Pick
this 1 gose to ice pick good ryheming good flow u no no h8 @ verbal abuse mc-chrissy-boy |
isnt chrissy a girls name?
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Voted For: Ice Pick
This one was kinda one-sided. Verbal has a complex vocabulary at times, and I thought he was doing pretty good...until I peeped Ice Pick's drop. Now Verbal, I like how you played off his name and all, but Ice came through with hot multis, harder punches, and remarkable flow. But no hate though, good battle between the 2 of you. Vote - Ice Pick Yo, return the favor y'all, honest votes only. |
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