SONIC vs Durmil
 

Battle Rules:

10 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 60

Check in by: 08-06-04 at 02:36 AM

Must drop verse in 40 minutes after check in.

SONIC has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-03-04 02:37 AM.

My words are King Kong On Page, U'r in The Wrong Domain
Watch me Kill Durmil in "Two Lines", like some Strong Cocain
Blur Yo Optics with "Sonic" Speed, so U can't Focus In
Jus to kill u I'll breath all the air Around u and Hold It in
I'm Comin Equipped, Yo mouth's Dry, U have Nothin Ta Spit
Yo Skills are like Chinese girls with ass, They Don't Fuckin Exist
Durmil the "Canadian" Gerbal, who battles Newbies To Win
If U "See" a Furture For Him, U must of took a Hallucinogen
I told U, you wasn't prepared for the Attack n Got Served
I see yo SIG, Finally U met yo "Match" and Got "Burned" (Matches Burn)

Durmil has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-03-04 12:36 PM.

Ya name appeals to children and you're claimin ya sick kid?
Ya punches lack muscle like sonic's arm in ya avatar bitch!

You've been beggin to battle, and now It's time to leave ya scarred
1363 posts? Sonic does more 'worthless posting' then an 'NBA point gaurd'
You've been gettin wins off noobs, any Vet will say that you drop with shame
Fuck i've seen so many 'sorry' pieces its like your rappin with 'boardgames'
You'll never survive my scriptures, like 'dirty cum in your eye' ur 'blind to the sickness'
You've only beat bitches, But you'll always stay 'beneath Durm' like 'advisory stickers'

Should never have talked, i made ya 'piss on death' when i outlined your 'bladder with chalk'
Cuz the highway to failure has left this kid 'searchin for advice' like 'father-son talks'

Bar 3- By sorry pieces i mean bad battle drops....sorry is a boardgame...it shoulda been understood when read but i thought i'd explain it incase ya didnt get it

everything else should be understood...if not dont vote to keep it fair

Voted For: SONIC

sonic had betta punches way betta flow.durmil was setin up his punches like they were gonna land hard but i didnt feel da impact!> i thought u would be betta than this durm.

id apreciate honest votes from both sonic n durmil.
taking all challengers.

id come better? ive never even heard of you

do u even know what a well formulated punch is from a set-up? 0-0 battle record?
uve never even battle'd....i knew the post count should'a been higher then 60 for herb shit like this....what about personals and creativity?.....wow

uppin for some better explained broken down votes

Uppin

Voted For: Durmil

nice battle,but i think durmil got this..your punches were more thought out,first line connected with the 2nd in releventcy,dint like your opener but your punches n the post personal refering ta vets/sorry boardgame line deff hit nice,sonic you had a nice drop 2 but usually your first line had nothing ta do with your second its like you wrote your battle backwards jus using fillers for first lines...nice battle though..
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This was feedback posted for Durmil
 

My words are King Kong On Page, U'r in The Wrong Domain
Watch me Kill Durmil in "Two Lines", like some Strong Cocain
8/10
Blur Yo Optics with "Sonic" Speed, so U can't Focus In
Jus to kill u I'll breath all the air Around u and Hold It in
7/10
I'm Comin Equipped, Yo mouth's Dry, U have Nothin Ta Spit
Yo Skills are like Chinese girls with ass, They Don't Fuckin Exist
9/10
Durmil the "Canadian" Gerbal, who battles Newbies To Win
If U "See" a Furture For Him, U must of took a Hallucinogen
8/10
I told U, you wasn't prepared for the Attack n Got Served
I see yo SIG, Finally U met yo "Match" and Got "Burned"
7/10

overall

39/50


Ya name appeals to children and you're claimin ya sick kid?
Ya punches lack muscle like sonic's arm in ya avatar bitch!
7/10
You've been beggin to battle, and now It's time to leave ya scarred
1363 posts? Sonic does more 'worthless posting' then an 'NBA point gaurd'
8/10
You've been gettin wins off noobs, any Vet will say that you drop with shame
Fuck i've seen so many 'sorry' pieces its like your rappin with 'boardgames'
fed.. 7/10
You'll never survive my scriptures, like 'dirty cum in your eye' ur 'blind to the sickness'
You've only beat bitches, But you'll always stay 'beneath Durm' like 'advisory stickers'
8/10

Should never have talked, i made ya 'piss on death' when i outlined your 'bladder with chalk'
Cuz the highway to failure has left this kid 'searchin for advice' like 'father-son talks'
8/10

overall

38/40

v/Sonic

Voted For: SONIC

Good battle. Some ill rappers here..Respect for both. Durmil had some good lines with the point guard one and the boardgames one too. But I think Sonic took this with an easier structure ta follow. Some of Durms lines were a little stretched. Sonic came hard in every line and came with some creative stuff that was kinda amusing. Durm had some good metas but Sonic came with better punches. I think Sonic takes this one.

Vote-Sonic

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joker how the fuck did i feed? i couldnt even see his verse b4 i dropped thats the way the new battle system works....

can some vets get in here and vote on this?

What In The Fuck Are You Talking About?^
You're A Fuckin Wierdo, He Never Said That You Fed, He Was Giving You Feed Back, Damn! Quit Complaining About Every Vote..

Voted For: SONIC


My words are King Kong On Page, U'r in The Wrong Domain
Watch me Kill Durmil in "Two Lines", like some Strong Cocain
7/10
Blur Yo Optics with "Sonic" Speed, so U can't Focus In
Jus to kill u I'll breath all the air Around u and Hold It in
6/10
I'm Comin Equipped, Yo mouth's Dry, U have Nothin Ta Spit
Yo Skills are like Chinese girls with ass, They Don't Fuckin Exist
7/10
Durmil the "Canadian" Gerbal, who battles Newbies To Win
If U "See" a Furture For Him, U must of took a Hallucinogen
8/10
I told U, you wasn't prepared for the Attack n Got Served
I see yo SIG, Finally U met yo "Match" and Got "Burned"
7/10

Ya name appeals to children and you're claimin ya sick kid?
Ya punches lack muscle like sonic's arm in ya avatar bitch!
5/10
You've been beggin to battle, and now It's time to leave ya scarred
1363 posts? Sonic does more 'worthless posting' then an 'NBA point gaurd'
3/10
You've been gettin wins off noobs, any Vet will say that you drop with shame
Fuck i've seen so many 'sorry' pieces its like your rappin with 'boardgames'
5/10
You'll never survive my scriptures, like 'dirty cum in your eye' ur 'blind to the sickness'
You've only beat bitches, But you'll always stay 'beneath Durm' like 'advisory stickers'
7/10
Should never have talked, i made ya 'piss on death' when i outlined your 'bladder with chalk'
Cuz the highway to failure has left this kid 'searchin for advice' like 'father-son talks'
6/10


came down 2 harder punches and better wordplay

^well thank you..

durmil=physcho.

>.........................

Voted For: SONIC

both yaw verses was tight as hell
flow/sonic
punches/durmil
struc/sonic
wordplay/sonic
vote/sonic

Looks like you're gonna lose Durmil, lol... I told ya'll, I'm the Dopest..

uppin

haha are u fuckin kiddin me? lololol

look at these votes...not a single person has encorporated personals or opener's closers in this...hahaha the one person that brought in wordplay actually gave it to you with ur simplistic shit...haha its pretty funny actually

so u enjoy this lil FL spoof full of herb votes...haha

What ever you say, but yo verse sucked ass kid, seriously. The Structure was horrible and your rhymes were way more basic than mine.. you only had two punchlines out of all that fuckin kaos.. I'm taggin you as a Jacker, You've been Ripped bitch, face it, now fuck off..

Voted For: SONIC

Sonic gets my vote ovr flow, structure and punches..good opener and closer...i liked the word play you had in the closer...you had a good vocab and a couple multies

Durmill i wasn't feelin ya...your punches were good but your structure fucked up your flow...it hurt ya verse...you had ok word play...you had no good multies...really no multies at all...your verse was good but Sonic came harder

v/Sonic

Either one of you vote on me against Lekchur i dunno if you did and vote on me against Ruf Tuff Thug...and then i will owe 2 votes for your battles