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granmastr chi has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-30-04 03:24 AM.

DV8 has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-30-04 11:35 AM.

watch “chi’s-chin”(cheatin) get cut n served from all of my lines,
if da voters slap ya 4 every crap line, you’d get smacked 12 times,

this kid sets da ‘due date’ like it was a school project com’on” honestly”
“grandma’ n ‘chi’ ”must be’oprah’ fans da way his record is ‘win-frey’,

You ain’t a sensation kid it’s a ‘KO’ you need ta learn about elevation,
Ya destination is “fag station”, you can tell from ya corny animation,…^

Im spitting knowledge,da way im speakin my mind,I got brain on da tougne,
These lines scar,’drop like bombs’,deformin ‘prostitutes’ ‘so cover up’ n run

Im da ‘master’but wit da“E”I’ve smoked 2 other herbs now I got da ‘munch’chi’s
I could meet this kid on his level but they don’t make cords dat long 4 bungies,

If your stocks in ”chi” da markets falling n ya gonna loose ya whole set,
Ya’ll think he’s a ‘catfish platter’da way im serving diss pussy via da net,

yo,peeps read this carefully
thers a lot of personals,peace

In the begining i thought i might need ta bring my a-game
Quickly realized that your entire verse was so fukn lame

Thought to myself "why would you choose to battle me"
Thinks im a rookie i think youre bitch no chance this win will be free

Seriously,..is it already day three what a fukn waste of time(for me)
But not for this guy for him it's good practice cause he cant even rhyme

Now I think it's time you choose a new career cause you'll be on a permanent losing streak
So put a cup at your feet, get used to a new job beg'n on the street

And you think these peeps will vote for a guy with a name like dv8
You wanna put hot shit on paper grab a pad and menstrate

Personal-???? Where??? How my records? Win Frey?? Really though you should take a closer look, battled once and got one win.

Up'n this shit.

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when i did it a day ago you did'nt have a win im sure of it,it was a dq the other emcee dint even show.........

Voted For: DV8

I think we all noticed the personals DV8 didnt have to point em out...nice punches n personals and multis...good constant structure and nice flow

Chi-not feelin your punches...wack structure which totally messed with your flow..definitely need to elevate and expand yo vocab

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^^^give me feedback on my open mic Goin Crazy, thanks

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Didn't even show, you better check that one again, cause he dropped.

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What didn't even show? what are you talkin about kid?

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ya my bad he dropped but you did'nt get your win till..07/30/04...
n i posted it b4 you had your win or after i did my research..cause ya din't have that win at tha time...i don't make fake personals dawg........check the last date on it
i posted it da same da same day you got your win...check for yourself
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=121352

Voted For: granmastr chi

Close battle I'ma hafta break it down like this

watch “chi’s-chin”(cheatin) get cut n served from all of my lines,
if da voters slap ya 4 every crap line, you’d get smacked 12 times,
-not a bad first line but the second could have been worded better to finish the punch

this kid sets da ‘due date’ like it was a school project com’on” honestly”
“grandma’ n ‘chi’ ”must be’oprah’ fans da way his record is ‘win-frey’,
-Kinda of switched this time cause, the first line was straight butta this time but the second kinda fell off, I don't know his text record??

You ain’t a sensation kid it’s a ‘KO’ you need ta learn about elevation,
Ya destination is “fag station”, you can tell from ya corny animation,…^
-Again I have no idea his annimation looks like because I can't see it, so I don't really knwo what to say.

Im spitting knowledge,da way im speakin my mind,I got brain on da tougne,
These lines scar,’drop like bombs’,deformin ‘prostitutes’ ‘so cover up’ n run
-This line you fell of cause I wasn't feel'n this first line at all, and I didn't really get the second one. weak...

Im da ‘master’but wit da“E”I’ve smoked 2 other herbs now I got da ‘munch’chi’s
I could meet this kid on his level but they don’t make cords dat long 4 bungies,
-Ya I got where you were going but wasn't really feel'n it, the second line improved it by alot,

If your stocks in ”chi” da markets falling n ya gonna loose ya whole set,
Ya’ll think he’s a ‘catfish platter’da way im serving diss pussy via da net,
-nice punch good closer this was your best punch otta the whole thing, not bad..



In the begining i thought i might need ta bring my a-game
Quickly realized that your entire verse was so fukn lame
-not bad, nice wordplay, an average opener

Thought to myself "why would you choose to battle me"
Thinks im a rookie i think youre bitch no chance this win will be free
-Again not bad didn't really see where you were going after the first line but you shaped it up after the second.

Seriously,..is it already day three what a fukn waste of time(for me)
But not for this guy for him it's good practice cause he cant even rhyme
-This was a good line you really turned it around after this, good creativity.

Now I think it's time you choose a new career cause you'll be on a permanent losing streak
So put a cup at your feet, get used to a new job beg'n on the street
HAHAHA...Not bad at all You started off weak in this battle but these are the lines, as to why I gave the win to you. Good creativity as well as good flow.

And you think these peeps will vote for a guy with a name like dv8
You wanna put hot shit on paper grab a pad and menstrate
-This in my opinion was the best line in the whole battle, it was funny, creative and flowed well, too often you see people with sick punches but they don't flow.

All in all good battle to both of you but this one goes to Grand Chi, cause of more creatity and better flow, which in turn made his punches hit harder.

Return the vote...

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kid^^ your a noob n im gonna merk your ass for diss wack vote