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prapper1 08-03-04 09:12 AM

ill-grammatix vs prapper1
 
Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 08-06-04 at 09:12 AM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

System 08-03-04 09:13 AM

prapper1 has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-03-04 09:13 AM.

prapper1 08-03-04 09:15 AM

ayo it even wit '2 lesbians' u wouldnt 'fit-to-be-strapped'
u a 'clown', wit '2 hands' an a 'audience' 'i-couldnt-be-clapped'
well deminished man u finished, u freeze like 'ted-williams-head'
ur flow is real slow, u couldnt spit it faster if u was '10-miles-ahead'
if i was sponsered by 'Rolex', i still wouldnt 'find the time to save u'
ur vocabulary skillz will jump 5 points if u 'mind the rhyme i gave u'
i'll 'beat u' like 'couples in georgia' the time grows weary tick ticks!
the only way u'd beat me is if ma 'raps died', and that is 'ill-grammatix'
tha 'pussies' 'looser than his pants', but i'll wait with 'arms wide open'
i'll still throw betta 'punches' than you, wit only '2 arms tied broken'

System 08-03-04 09:15 AM

Ill-Grammatix has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-03-04 09:15 AM.

prapper1 08-03-04 09:24 AM

aight im waitin fo tha verse man.. netime ur ready

Ill-Grammatix 08-03-04 10:17 AM

prappa = p.diddy -slash- parappa da rappa/
an actor playing the part of a rapper put out to pasture/
i'll blast ya with multiple lines with multis intertwined/
take ya stale rhymes, redesign 'em, and leave e'm fresh in ya mind!/
what you do? battle a noob? to get that 1-0 stat?/
with a 122 posts you should be better than that/
now you stepping to Ill-Grammatix like there's sum'n I'm lacking/
Like I don't know rappin'; but later you'll be askin' "What happened?!!"/
did you imagine a match-up where I.G.would just slack up?/
i'm so far ahead of you if I backed up you couldn't catch up/
you wack fuck, i'm done with you, records now 1-1/
now "go runteldat" like Martin, cuz you just got sonned!

Quake 08-03-04 11:36 AM

Voted For: prapper1

Flow: prapper1
Struture: prapper1
Punches: prapper1
Personals: prapper1
Metas: Ill-Grammatix
Multiez: prapper1
Creativity: Ill-Grammatix
Enjoyment: prapper1

VOTE: prapper1

Ill-Grammatix 08-03-04 12:59 PM

you gotta be shittin me...lol... it's all good though ...^ rock the vote, baby!

7*0*8* 08-03-04 01:04 PM

Voted For: prapper1

punches: prappa
wordplay:prappa
mets: prappa
multi's:I.G.
flow: prappa

MONSOON 08-03-04 01:14 PM

Voted For: prapper1

liked half the verse, you seemd to keep it on the same pace
it was entertainin and creative, not much vocab
or big time punch lines but this verse was good for my opinion of a win

MONSOON 08-03-04 01:16 PM

chek out my battle return the fav
monsoon vs icepic

Ill-Grammatix 08-03-04 01:27 PM

ok... i think omma have the mods look at these herb votes! you guys are fucking terrible!...lmao... no hate to you prappa... i'm just saying though... are they reading the verses or what? one guy didn't even critique my shyt!he never even said if there was anything wrong with my drop... that's some punk shyt if you ask me... he couldn't find anything wrong so he just left it blank.. honest votes people... don't hate.

Ill-Grammatix 08-03-04 01:31 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by MONSOON
Voted For: prapper1

liked half the verse, you seemd to keep it on the same pace
it was entertainin and creative, not much vocab
or big time punch lines but this verse was good for my opinion of a win

you tellin me he won and you only liked half the verse?....yo... i think me and you gotta battle coming up!!!

prapper1 08-03-04 03:02 PM

hey homie dont be mad im beatin ur ass im winnin hahahaha

prapper1 08-03-04 04:15 PM

aight comon i need to win. uppin uppin

Adam 08-03-04 05:19 PM

Voted For: Ill-Grammatix

Ill-Grammatix had a better flow and way better rhymes then prapper1, just enjoyed reading the verse....didn't throw as many punches at prapper1 but your flow and rhymes just went so good that you took this battle

v/Ill G

Adam 08-03-04 05:19 PM

Drop an honest vote on my battle please

http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=139360

prapper1 08-03-04 06:50 PM

okay it could go either way uppuin on this shit

SONIC 08-03-04 10:51 PM

Voted For: Ill-Grammatix

Flow: Ill
Structure: Both
Multies: Ill
Punches: Papper
Personals: neither


Ill you barley god this with good flow and multies, a couple a punch lines helped you.. prapper just work on your flow and wordplay, but i vote for Ill..

return favor in this battle wiil u? thanx
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=139363

BrOTheRP.A.R.A. 08-03-04 11:17 PM

Voted For: prapper1

this was a tight battle yer both even you both had flow and rhyme but prapper one came out a little more stonger so i give it to him

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

prapper1 08-03-04 11:46 PM

aight i need just one more vote close this shit out

DV8 08-04-04 12:04 AM

Voted For: Ill-Grammatix

im gonna go with ig on this cause his verse flowed good not da best structure but i liked his punches they were personal n i found all of his lines made sense...prapper you had nice wordplay but a couple of your lines really dint connect..i liked your closer but thats about it..that rolex line n your 2nd line could've been writen alot better...
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prapper1 08-04-04 10:16 AM

ok now its a competition hey may the best man win uppin for votes

~Luciano~ 08-04-04 10:24 AM

Voted For: prapper1





prappa = p.diddy -slash- parappa da rappa/
an actor playing the part of a rapper put out to pasture/
5/10
i'll blast ya with multiple lines with multis intertwined/
take ya stale rhymes, redesign 'em, and leave e'm fresh in ya mind!/
4/10
what you do? battle a noob? to get that 1-0 stat?/
with a 122 posts you should be better than that/
4/10
now you stepping to Ill-Grammatix like there's sum'n I'm lacking/
Like I don't know rappin'; but later you'll be askin' "What happened?!!"/
4/10
did you imagine a match-up where I.G.would just slack up?/
i'm so far ahead of you if I backed up you couldn't catch up/
4/10
you wack fuck, i'm done with you, records now 1-1/
now "go runteldat" like Martin, cuz you just got sonned
4/10


ayo it even wit '2 lesbians' u wouldnt 'fit-to-be-strapped'
u a 'clown', wit '2 hands' an a 'audience' 'i-couldnt-be-clapped'
6/10
well deminished man u finished, u freeze like 'ted-williams-head'
ur flow is real slow, u couldnt spit it faster if u was '10-miles-ahead'
5/10
if i was sponsered by 'Rolex', i still wouldnt 'find the time to save u'
ur vocabulary skillz will jump 5 points if u 'mind the rhyme i gave u'
6/10
i'll 'beat u' like 'couples in georgia' the time grows weary tick ticks!
the only way u'd beat me is if ma 'raps died', and that is 'ill-grammatix'
6/10
tha 'pussies' 'looser than his pants', but i'll wait with 'arms wide open'
i'll still throw betta 'punches' than you, wit only '2 arms tied broke
5/10

came down 2 harder punches and better wordplay

prapper1 08-07-04 10:11 AM

ok i guess this shit is back up.. w/e man drop somethin

Real Thorough 08-07-04 01:31 PM

Voted For: prapper1

Return the honest vote please....

metas - prapper
punches - nice on both but prapper took
flow - prapper
and struc - a tie.
My vote stands and v/Prapper1


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