$ Wordman $ vs BostonLyricist
 

Does Not matter who spit's first, Just make sure it's in by Tonight!!!


Peace!!

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Check in by: 08-03-04 at 08:41 PM

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BostonLyricist has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-03-04 02:49 PM.

$ Wordman $ has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-03-04 04:02 PM.

Iam Lyrically Versitile to go up agaist any of yah bitten writting Styles!
Lip-Signing 8-mile, is the only way yah compile, a Decent Battle, From a Text-File
Reading this Battle is Leaving yah Foaming Yellow Bile!!
Like you Just Contracted a Severe Case of West Nile!
Iam Pounding you to the Ground, Like i did ta RiFF Raff
How you Gonna Win this battle when he Sluaghtered you 5-0
like a unstable bar Graph
Iam Drowning yah with this Text, like a Urnal cake in a Piss stall
Your Battle Record shows it all, i dont have to tell you suck just ask the 8 -ball
Yah Not Ill, yah dont full-fill the skill needed to obtain a dollar-bill
Dont Blame me, For hatting yah life, if only yah mom took that abortion pill.

jus ah liitle somethin somethin

thats my wordman im bout ta decompose your body without error
You probably fat like joe all squad no terror,check ya mirrior
cut your index finger off do your moms a favor
cause she hates that you cheat on her wit the male neighbor
the $ on the side of your name stands for money
but actually for you means a dollar let you stick me were it aint sunny
I now its funny but I put on a straight face
You beatin me is like mase forgettin to say grace
My record is withered and battered and has a few flaws
But not as bad cause….
During christmas for ya kids you dress up as mrs clause…...

holla at cha boi

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aight lets get some votes in here........................

uppin for votes...........................................

Uppin, drop a link.... i ll hit yah wit a honest vote....

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Aight Peeps Lets get some votes up in here!!!!!!!!!!!!!

uppin for some votes, Give a honest vote, and one will be returned!!

Voted For: BostonLyricist

i gotta vote wit boston on this... wordman, i know you can rap but dont be so cocky and not write nothin... you cant vote for someone who dosent write anything or you'll get reported(obviously). anyways, since boston is tha only one who wrote, this goes to boston.

damn, my bad... wordman's battle didnt even show up when i voted. i woulda voted for wordman tho for better wordplay and metaphors... i like tha personal in boston lyricist tho... my bad wordman, it really didnt show up

Voted For: BostonLyricist

Word
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BL
thats my wordman im bout ta decompose your body without error
You probably fat like joe all squad no terror,check ya mirrior
Okay, This Was Aight.

cut your index finger off do your moms a favor
cause she hates that you cheat on her wit the male neighbor
Lol.

the $ on the side of your name stands for money
but actually for you means a dollar let you stick me were it aint sunny
No.

I now its funny but I put on a straight face
You beatin me is like mase forgettin to say grace
No.

My record is withered and battered and has a few flaws
But not as bad cause….
During christmas for ya kids you dress up as mrs clause…...
Lol.

This was feedback posted for BostonLyricist
 

quick comment not vote so dont dq me
boston good verse, u pmed me for a battle
i got 4 about to happen but i wont forget you ill send you a pm

Uppin for votes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Voted For: $ Wordman $

ahh nice drop by wordman, was really feeling it, good flow, good rhymes, good punches, structure and all, nice drop

BostonLyricist - meh, not bad man, flow and shit, i ain't really feeling it

v/wordman - better flow, structure, better to read

Voted For: $ Wordman $

feeling wordmans more better flow better rhyme, was feeling the 8-ball line that shit was tight,
BostonLyricist yours was good 2 was just feeling wordmans more

yo you wanna drop an honest vote on this please

http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=139878

Voted For: $ Wordman $

wordman hit harder but not by much...flow was stretched... a few lines could've been worded better for effect purposes... personals were better...closer was weak

BL... filler verse... dress like MRS Clause?!!! what's that got to do with anything?... good opener... everything fell off after that... work on structure, personals, punches... but stay gully with ya openers... why'd you diss ya own record?... ya bringing attention to yaself... don't do that!

vote/wordman

Uppin this Battle!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Voted For: $ Wordman $

ur flows were str8 culda ben betta some punches were rw sum were just wak as fuck word got the closing on his ass but boston opened pretty ill i say overall ill give it to word

return tha favor http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=140202

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Voted For: $ Wordman $

personals - word
punchlines - boston
wordplay - word
stucture - boston
overall - word

Word gets it because i gave more point for personals and wordplay.. those are important and he had it where boston was lacking. the opener was tight and he kept a good flow.. boston's verse was coo but the punches actually barley hit, they were just better than his but he won in more categories.
so wordman, i vote for you cuz..

keep it gangsta and return the favore in my thread, thanx..
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=140352