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Check in by: 08-06-04 at 03:02 PM

Must drop verse in 60 minutes after check in.

afropimp has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-06-04 02:33 PM.

afropimp has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-06-04 02:34 PM.

u gotta drop verse or should i its up 2 u im a win ether way

haha don't be so sure of yourself biatch

Scriptive has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-06-04 02:53 PM.

do da damn thang drop yo shit so i can drop my shit than tha votes cum in & i win bitch

ok, battle accepted, now lets get down to business,
right now i would get down and pray for foegiveness,
better get running, your gonna get lyrically raped,
cooked grilled and baked, theres only one take,
from what im guessin afropimp suffers from constepation,
this guy didn't even stick it in, it's called, premature ejeculation,
there's plenty things i could say about you, i couldn't fit it all in,
for a start he's a thug wannabe, white and looks like tin tin,
haha... you aint a pimp, you don't got no afro, your a fake,
someone better put this guy in his place for god sakes,

now im put up against dis trick bitch scriptive/ he think he gon win dis/ wat kinda fuckin joke is this/ u aint gon be laffin wen im finish/ u gonna be cryin and bitchin/ wishin u neva met me/ my flow is cold like ice tea/ after u lose this battle cum 2 da streetz and fite me/ i freestyle i dont rite G/ so everythang i spit is from my head/ ur lines are pre written from shit u read/ u aint 50 u gonna try 2 get rich & wind up dead/ nuff sed/ dont get cocky cuz u beat that one mutha fucka/ cuz dis battle gon be alot muffuckin tougher/ tha obituary tha only place for ur scriptures/ cuz ur flows dead while mines are hardhitters/ i aint gon lie u got a lil bit of talent/ but just like a drunk ur flows way off balance/u from da uk dats cuz u gay/u play/2 dam much its all endin 2day/im afropimp & i just manhandled dis bitch/who rilly should be UNscriptive/

u got murk
nasty style i got a big ass fro dummuffucka and its nappy as hell

we now uppin some vote get sum vote in herre drop off sum ur batts well check em out peace

Voted For: afropimp

Ight that was tight both verse's were good, but I have to say my vote goes to Afropimp I liked he's way better .

Now return the favor

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Voted For: afropimp

im sorry fellas but this battle was weak, no dis
script this wasnt ya best and afro i neva read ya shit b4
struc no one
flow script
metas no one
punches afro barely
pers weak personals noone
overall likeability afro
thats no compliment but i believe ya both betta than this
Plus if afro was really keystling that explains it

Voted For: afropimp

Opener: Scriptive
Closer:Afro
Structure:Afro
Rhyems: Afro
Flow: afro
Personals: Afro
Punches: afro
Wordplay: Afro
Meta's: Afro

Aight this was a one sided battle in my eyes, Afro just came harder with better wordplay, and punches, Scriptive, yah rhyems, were to predictable, i could almost guess what yah next rhyem was going to be... keep elevatiin, anyway my vote goes to

AfroPimp

No hate!!!!


Return the Fav on one of my battles, Oh and AfroPimp wanna battle Pm me if yah want.. Peace

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