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marvolousj1009 vs SONIC
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10 - 20 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 08-05-04 at 09:46 PM Must drop verse in 40 minutes after check in. |
MARVOLoUsJ1009 has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-05-04 05:12 AM.
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SONIC has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-05-04 05:16 AM.
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wont be hard da merk u quer,every marvjay verse u fear-
u cant be da "the realest" know y?? cuzz he merked u here- yea u know marvolousjay1009 dat dude dat use ebonic's- dont rap own apart. in "seattle" u should be a "super-sonic"- u got it fukked up i am vet u probly mad dem yung cats fold- but i "sleep on ya bar's" like "barney when he drunk at moe's"- not hater fam u is souped,i'll have dudes stamp u with boots- gota new s/n cuzz i "lied" w/ ya girl,u cant "handle da truth"- funny thing is only newbie's & fags read da metaphor's- ima "5 mic" rapper sonic u 1 mic short i neva met-a-four- yeah dunny i a few keep guns so if i go da cali aim n pop it- "sonic" ya punk ass gon need a "doctor" & it aint "robotnick"- nuff said...all keyed my 3rd bar....i mean barney fromd a simpsons he always sleepin at da bar u'll get it |
I'll give this bitch Punches to his chest until his Eyes Pop Out
Weaklin GOT knocked out by someone that I've Knocked Out http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=136429 I Totally Own Mc's who go Toe to Toe Wit Me U must Like my Poetry, coz in all my battles u Vote Fa Me U Take lyrical shots but when I shoot You can't Dodge da 9 Sonic Came to steal yo Eyes right from yo sockets, Rob u Blind U'r the Nerd Type, U'll choke off the smoke when I Burn da Mic U'r like a Kid born with Hand Arthritis, u never Learned to Write Your trying to beat a champ, but you ain't tryin Hard Enough If U took on the soul of BIG yo rhymes still won't be Marvolous I know than U didn't expect the Best, u lost so Let it Rest Like retired Vietnam soldiers Ur just another Unrespected "Vet" I Abuse u More, Yo rhymes are more Irritatin than Pubic Sores So The only way U'll Sell a CD is if u worked in a Music Store This is "My House" bitch, I get both Beds, you Choose da Floor And I bet he uses weak personals that's been Used Before You're below me bitch, I'll always Be Dominant with rhymes, this dude recycles more than an Ecologist So now you know, I control this shit like Crime Bosses While "MarvolousJ" will keep gettin merked til he gets "1009" Losses |
lmaooo damm nigga u spit a album...but hey its all good
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Voted For: SONIC
Damn good battle over here. Some good punches and personals goin back and forth. Both of which were even. I think both were on the same level on punches and personals. Both closures were tite. Both of them were personals too. Both had a good structures too. This was a nice battle cuz almost every line from both were punches. However I think Sonic took it because he had a hard hittin line throughout the whole verse. He also wrote more than Marv so he had more disses in his. If Marv had writtin like 6 more lines, i think that he would have won. But, I gotta give it ta Sonic for the tite verse. Good shit ta both. Vote-Sonic |
i vote for sonic cos his personals and punches were tight(9)....and they hit harder than marvolous'...and his strucrure made his verse have a cool flow too...when i read marvolous' verse i was like "huh??????".......yo u gatta work on ya punches and ur personals..but ur structure was ok....
v/sonic |
shit i cant vote........wdf?.........dayummmmmmm!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!
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^^^??? fukk u mean huh?? dogg but uppin 4 more votes man.......
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Give it up for "Hardwood Class-Sickz" newest and almost best member, it's me!
^^^^^^^^I JUST PEEP DAT DOGG IS U DRUNK??? U FAR FROM DA BEST IN DA CREW |
Voted For: SONIC
Fuck you first and foremost.... but u took this...you had some good lines, and some weak shit, but marv had 3 bars of filler in a 5 bar verse...which made it weak...i liked lines like the vietnam shit, and the work at a music store one... The structure was good, flow had some flaws but overall good...so u get the vote... can u guys plz return the favor.... http://community.rapverse.com/showb...478963&posted=1 |
This was feedback posted for MARVOLoUsJ1009
I'll give this bitch Punches to his chest until his Eyes Pop Out
Weaklin GOT knocked out by someone that I've Knocked Out THAT,WAS NOT HARD HITTING AT ALL....U SHOULD HAVE USED THE SECOND LINE AS A SETUP...DISCARDED THE FIRST....N THROWN A PUNCH IN THERE...IT WAS WEAK LIKE THIS....N SINCE IT SEEMS LIKE U DONT KNOW HOW TO PUT A LINK IN PROPERLY.....ASKKKKKKKK SOMEBODYYYYYY http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=136429 I Totally Own Mc's who go Toe to Toe Wit Me U must Like my Poetry, coz in all my battles u Vote Fa Me WEAK.....AGAIN,ONLY GOOD ENOUGH FOR A SETUP LINE,NOT FOR A PUNCH U Take lyrical shots but when I shoot You can't Dodge da 9 Sonic Came to steal yo Eyes right from yo sockets, Rob u Blind WEAK U'r the Nerd Type, U'll choke off the smoke when I Burn da Mic U'r like a Kid born with Hand Arthritis, u never Learned to Write WEAK...CUZ SOMEONE WHO HAS ARTHRITIS CAN STILL WRITE....... Your trying to beat a champ, but you ain't tryin Hard Enough If U took on the soul of BIG yo rhymes still won't be Marvolous GAYYYYYYYYYY I know than U didn't expect the Best, u lost so Let it Rest Like retired Vietnam soldiers Ur just another Unrespected "Vet" GAY I Abuse u More, Yo rhymes are more Irritatin than Pubic Sores So The only way U'll Sell a CD is if u worked in a Music Store DECENT PUNCH...BUT THE SETUP? WTF....SOUNDS LIKE U KNOW ABOUT PUBIC SORES LOL...I'VE HEARD CD SELLIN N LINES LIKE THAT..NOT EXACTLY THIS ONE This is "My House" bitch, I get both Beds, you Choose da Floor And I bet he uses weak personals that's been Used Before WEAK You're below me bitch, I'll always Be Dominant with rhymes, this dude recycles more than an Ecologist GAY..I'VE HEARD ENVIROMENTALIST LINES ON THIS VERY BOARD So now you know, I control this shit like Crime Bosses While "MarvolousJ" will keep gettin merked til he gets "1009" Losses GAY ONLY THE CD LINE WAS WORTH MENTIONING IN THE ENTIRE VERSE......... wont be hard da merk u quer,every marvjay verse u fear- u cant be da "the realest" know y?? cuzz he merked u here- NOT HARD HITTIN.... yea u know marvolousjay1009 dat dude dat use ebonic's- dont rap own apart. in "seattle" u should be a "super-sonic"- HMMM...I GUESS WORDPLAY BUT NOT HARD HITTING u got it fukked up i am vet u probly mad dem yung cats fold- but i "sleep on ya bar's" like "barney when he drunk at moe's"- I GET IT,ITS DECENT...HEARD A LOTTA BAR LINES BEFORE....THIS WAS AIGHT THOUGH not hater fam u is souped,i'll have dudes stamp u with boots- gota new s/n cuzz i "lied" w/ ya girl,u cant "handle da truth"- HMMMM...DONT LIKE IT funny thing is only newbie's & fags read da metaphor's- ima "5 mic" rapper sonic u 1 mic short i neva met-a-four- WORDPLAY....NOTHIN HARD HITTING yeah dunny i a few keep guns so if i go da cali aim n pop it- "sonic" ya punk ass gon need a "doctor" & it aint "robotnick"- HUH? nuff said...all keyed WOW ,THIS WAS TRUELY WEAK......SHIT IT WAS REAL...I MEAN REAL REAL CLOSE.....BOTH OF U ONLY HAD ONE PUNCH EACH TAHT WAS DECENT.......NEITHER ONE WAS VERY ORIGINAL....I THINK MARV'S WAS JUST A TAD BETTER I GUESS.................SONIC HAD MORE PERSONALS....BUT HE USED THEM AS WEAK ASS PUNCHES....MARV HAD NO PERSONALS..BUT HAD BETTER FLOW N HAD MORE MULTIES.........................IMMA DECLARE THIS A TIE.................... |
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LMAO, i've read the roster, i'll battle anyone to prove it, starting with you.. |
^^^yea wutever son...go drop a vote on my battle plz.....
and how are you 37-1, last time i had looked u were 27-2...and the last time i looked before that, u were 14-4...but anyway...go vote on my battle |
^Don't question me, just know that most people can't beat me without cheating, put it like that..
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iight...can u go return the favor tho.....
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up and away
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damn noone in elevated votes..
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vote people....
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Voted For: MARVOLoUsJ1009
I gotta give marv my vote this is not a d./r vote or anything but im feeling his verse a little bit more ....i liked his punches and shit....sonic ur shit was mad htot 2 but i did not feel it like i was feeling marv....ur struc was on and ur punches and wordplay was on but i think marv got this battle because of his better punchlines and wordplay they were just mad hott and i gotta give it up for both of ya this was a hott battlle! |
He thinks he nice ...to be true...he been getting d/r votes..i peeped 3 pbattles....and the flow intelligent battle was all d/r...lol...flow killed him..but...im the up and coming vet in hardwood so ill battle you for a spot
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Killa Cam Flow, you are garbage, it's always the motha fucka with 14 losses and no respect that hates. you just don't like my arrogance, half of ya'll on here just suck, point blank.. I didn't even used to vote on peoples battles, you can ask marvolousj, i never returned any of his.. bitch, i'm just better than you, you have to battle two times more than me just to get the same amount of wins..
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This was feedback posted for SONIC
Tight battle
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Voted For: SONIC
marv- honestly i did not feel a single one of your punches, and half the shit u said wasn't even a punch like...... yea u know marvolousjay1009 dat dude dat use ebonic's- dont rap own apart. in "seattle" u should be a "super-sonic"- .......and u had gay ass metaphors like that barney line, and that other "handle the truth" punch about his girl...... all shit about someones girl is played. ......and prolly why he sonic is because mentioning shit about it is gay.....like yeah dunny i a few keep guns so if i go da cali aim n pop it- "sonic" ya punk ass gon need a "doctor" & it aint "robotnick"- _______ U Take lyrical shots but when I shoot You can't Dodge da 9 Sonic Came to steal yo Eyes right from yo sockets, Rob u Blind .....nice wordplay, but not a punch, turn it into one or don't use it. I Abuse u More, Yo rhymes are more Irritatin than Pubic Sores So The only way U'll Sell a CD is if u worked in a Music Store ..... U'r the Nerd Type, U'll choke off the smoke when I Burn da Mic U'r like a Kid born with Hand Arthritis, u never Learned to Write ^^^^nice witty punches like them, i gotta give ya the battle hit my battle up agianst e-dubs on elevated, LINKS IN MY SIG ........RETURN THE FAVOR |
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..........not gettin another vote from me, i like arrogance but, i like people returnin the favor wit a honest vote more. |
Voted For: MARVOLoUsJ1009
ok sonic good verse nice punches and flow and i like the struture 7/10..........but marv you had a super punch in that 1st bar personal 10/10 that was gansta ok second bar good 4th bar personal as well but some dudes might not catch it good punches all through and a nice easy to read structure good ender good verse 8/10 vote-marv and sonic dont say its a dr he won this you is good but you slacked here and he got you |
lmaooo picture u aint gettin ya battle voted on cuzz he dont vote...n ur a dick head u rap like manny fresh so u wouldn't get nothin i said..n my first bar was betta than his whole verse click dat link
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damn!!! dis shyt was hott as hell...Sonic!! much respect now.. u pretty good.. hahaha, damn marv, u good also, but sonic really did kill u on dis one...
iight: meta, i really didn't understand ur verse dat much, i ain't stupid, jst it was pretty hard to follow... sonics was alot easier to follow and his shyt was jst pretty much alot harder then urs punch: sonic flow: sonic personal: both structure:both metas:sonic vote: sonic |
Voted For: MARVOLoUsJ1009
sonic was banned...his unsername was deleted and everything like feebles |
Damn marvolous got merked here.Sonic merked this kid easy with superior personals,punches,and structure.Flow was good on both sides.Marvolous,you need to work harder if ur gonna take on the likes of sonic.I dont get how sonic became a guest tho.Anyways,marvolous,ur structure and everything else needs hard work.The only line in ur verse i was feeling was the realest line.Goodluck to both in the future.
This thing wont let me vote...sry. |
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