Justify vs Khaos_daRenegade
 

Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
verse due in 30 mins

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 08-09-04 at 09:04 AM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

Justify has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-06-04 09:06 AM.

Khaos_daRenegade has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-06-04 09:13 AM.

Record 0-1, dont come at me with that senitmental shit
Yeah Life's Unfair to bitches whos raps are ludicrous
Your a traitor rap, why dont you try a shot at punk rock
Since your lifes so hard, you got their concept on lock
You probly got a rich family, livin in the lap of luxury
Another thug wannabe, we got enough of those on rv
Your a hustler? Then why you online battlin emcees
Why dont we see you droppin hot shit on mtv?
Cuz your flows wack, and you write in a fuckin paragraph
You just joined and already startin down the wrong path

the flow n structure thing i new from openmics hes posted and the other shit...just check his profile

Alright man...wheres your verse...waitin for it...

waitin............................................

im bout to tell dis kid sumthin he dont know..
nobody give's a fuck about the 304...
after dis battle you'll be on a r.i.p logo...
or on da bottom of my shoe like a sneaker sole...
peep sayin everybody can justify yo raps...
under oath, they all testified dat they wack...
yo flows unemployed, they just not workin...
sit back while mine's open u up like curtains...
u sqirmin, cuz im somthin like a itch on da cock...
ima let u listen to da metal, i aint talkin bout rock...
its a few ways u could win,syke, just-if-y(just if i) stop..
im from were da bulls at and i aint talkin bout stock...

Khaos, buddy...you broke a battle rule............

what rule did i break..............................

You dropped almost an hour after checking in...but its all good..i dont like to win on techinicalities...so we're takin votes...uppin

my comp was fuckin up i couldnt drop but y u didnt post yo verse

I did post my verse fam....its about 6-7 posts above yours...i dropped mine in like 20 minutes

i do not see your verse on my computer??????????????

This was feedback posted for Khaos_daRenegade
 

Nice verse I cant vote yet
but dis is goin to be da first one I vote on

This was feedback posted for Justify
 

NICE BATTLE
sorry I cant vote yet but when I can Ill vote on urs

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=137643
^ ^^ ^ ^ ^ ^

been sleepin for awhile....uppin..................

Voted For: Justify

Justify
Punches were hard & they landed...
Structure was pretty decent...
Flow was pretty good...
Vocab was good too...and easy to read it...

Khaos
Punches were good too not as hard as Justify's tho...
Structure was good..
Flow was decent and tha...
Vocab was pretty decent...

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

Uppin...Quit sleepin on this....damn kid..........

Voted For: Justify

you DEFINATLY took this.. i liked most of your lines.. tried on the personals

khaos your opener didnt rhyme, didnt make much since. your punches, didnt rhyme. and some rhymed but crappy rhyme -raps,wack' ? I liked how you punched hard though

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Voted For: Khaos_daRenegade

close to call, justify cooked up a storm but da_renegade took it.
Flow was better, punchlines better. Cant say a lot else

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uppin for honest, explained votes...all you freepostin bitches step off...honest votes will be returned..holla

yo....can we please get some votes on this...honest, explained votes will be returned..holla

Voted For: Justify

not a real good battle IMO...

Jus, ya verse was okay...but it definitely could use some improvements...structure was on point tho...didnt really see any personals...punches were decent but real basic, nothin outstandin...but u had some real decent vocab...overall u had good consistency...

Khaos, ya verse was aight too, but coulda used some improvements also...structure wasnt bad...i saw a personal attempt wit the nameplay, but it was weak...u had the same deal wit Justify punch-wise, nothin real outstandin...overall, u started off weak, but then u got a lil better in the middle...anyways,

V/ Justify by a hair...i felt he was more consistent...just my honest opinion...

Voted For: Justify

Khaos_daRenegade:
alright verse bad punches didnt hit that hard...vocabulary weak...metas pretty good...no real hard hitting wordplay...didnt real come that hard...all around kinda a big time ass kicking you got lol sry to say...

Justify:
alright verse nice punches...came pretty hard with stucture and flow...vocaulary came pretty tight to...all around ass kicking you gave him lol...good verse nuff said...

vote: Justify

Voted For: Justify

votes here:

ya structure took this, ya had the correct line stretch that made ya punches land nicely, ya personals i didnt get, but no one really takes the time to check links any more, thats my pointer. ya had a good closure, and a nice opener.

best lines:
Cuz your flows wack, and you write in a fuckin paragraph
You just joined and already startin down the wrong path

^^nice bar, ya came hard here. nice job overall.
ya had the win b/c ya structure landed ya punches nicely. hot verse. work on comdey lines, word.

vote: justify.

feedback for Khaos: ya lost.

Voted For: Justify

Justify: good wordplay...good structure...good punches...good flow...it could have been betta...but it was way betta than his shit...

KD: wut r u thinking elavate man...think about if u got somethin to rhyme with before u write it...god damn...???...

Uppin for votes...if your gonna vote...take the time to explain so they dont get DQd....all honest, explained votes will be returned

Voted For: Justify

I'd say justify took this battle with ease....

khao's verse was horrible..........punches don't seem to hit, got a screwed up structure, flow was too short and choppy towards the end...

justify got nice flow and structure, and decent and wayyyyy more harderhitting punches

so overall, my votes goes to justify