Scriptive vs afropimp
 

Battle Rules:

10-14 lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 08-06-04 at 03:02 PM

Must drop verse in 60 minutes after check in.

afropimp has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-06-04 02:33 PM.

afropimp has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-06-04 02:34 PM.

u gotta drop verse or should i its up 2 u im a win ether way

haha don't be so sure of yourself biatch

Scriptive has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-06-04 02:53 PM.

do da damn thang drop yo shit so i can drop my shit than tha votes cum in & i win bitch

ok, battle accepted, now lets get down to business,
right now i would get down and pray for foegiveness,
better get running, your gonna get lyrically raped,
cooked grilled and baked, theres only one take,
from what im guessin afropimp suffers from constepation,
this guy didn't even stick it in, it's called, premature ejeculation,
there's plenty things i could say about you, i couldn't fit it all in,
for a start he's a thug wannabe, white and looks like tin tin,
haha... you aint a pimp, you don't got no afro, your a fake,
someone better put this guy in his place for god sakes,

now im put up against dis trick bitch scriptive/ he think he gon win dis/ wat kinda fuckin joke is this/ u aint gon be laffin wen im finish/ u gonna be cryin and bitchin/ wishin u neva met me/ my flow is cold like ice tea/ after u lose this battle cum 2 da streetz and fite me/ i freestyle i dont rite G/ so everythang i spit is from my head/ ur lines are pre written from shit u read/ u aint 50 u gonna try 2 get rich & wind up dead/ nuff sed/ dont get cocky cuz u beat that one mutha fucka/ cuz dis battle gon be alot muffuckin tougher/ tha obituary tha only place for ur scriptures/ cuz ur flows dead while mines are hardhitters/ i aint gon lie u got a lil bit of talent/ but just like a drunk ur flows way off balance/u from da uk dats cuz u gay/u play/2 dam much its all endin 2day/im afropimp & i just manhandled dis bitch/who rilly should be UNscriptive/

u got murk
nasty style i got a big ass fro dummuffucka and its nappy as hell

we now uppin some vote get sum vote in herre drop off sum ur batts well check em out peace

Voted For: afropimp

Ight that was tight both verse's were good, but I have to say my vote goes to Afropimp I liked he's way better .

Now return the favor

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Voted For: afropimp

im sorry fellas but this battle was weak, no dis
script this wasnt ya best and afro i neva read ya shit b4
struc no one
flow script
metas no one
punches afro barely
pers weak personals noone
overall likeability afro
thats no compliment but i believe ya both betta than this
Plus if afro was really keystling that explains it

Voted For: afropimp

Opener: Scriptive
Closer:Afro
Structure:Afro
Rhyems: Afro
Flow: afro
Personals: Afro
Punches: afro
Wordplay: Afro
Meta's: Afro

Aight this was a one sided battle in my eyes, Afro just came harder with better wordplay, and punches, Scriptive, yah rhyems, were to predictable, i could almost guess what yah next rhyem was going to be... keep elevatiin, anyway my vote goes to

AfroPimp

No hate!!!!


Return the Fav on one of my battles, Oh and AfroPimp wanna battle Pm me if yah want.. Peace

aight uppppppppppppppinnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn

Voted For: afropimp

scriptive got murked no punchlines it was all oneside like word sed no comp better luck next time. good job afro. do u no him cuz how u gonna call him out on bein wite wit no fro. afropimp gets me vote fa sho biiiiiiitch

haha who the fuck is you chitownsoulja...

youve ogt no vocabulary nor has afropimp.... there was no wordplay or nothing... there was punches... but they sucked ass. like your mother hoe........

bitch dont get mad cuz fro fucked you up sry ass hoe ill murk ass 2 bitch well battle 2morrow fa sho or r u scared?

yeh ok just ot let you know when im on fire cos bitches like you piss me off peep me recent battles.... we will then see if u scared.

i aint never scare i peep this battle makes me wanna leave u alone

leave me alone... bitch ill be all up on your ass like your mother was on me last night..... biatchhhhhhhh

Voted For: Scriptive

Afropimp-Okay I know you're new to RV....but come on man...im not even goin into your punches or anything deeper than your structure...you wrote in a paragraph...write bars....like everyone else on RV does...

Scriptive-decent structure with a nice flow, some played concepts...not many good punches but there was a few...you get this for actually having a structure

Sinner...dont act like your big shit, cuz your not....try challenging someone who's elevated and actually knows how to battle and see how much shit you'll be talking then

on every muthafuckin thang i love that was a hate vote just like the one against chitownsoulja u hatin muffucka cuz u no my flow murked his ass u fuckin hata overrated sun of a bitch ill fuck you uo u fuckin pussy i told u 2 vote on mine cuz i new u was on a hatin tip biiiiiiiithc

It's not a hate vote you fucking moron, you have no structure, plain and simple..you wanna talk shit to me, we will battle and ill get an easy win...CUZ YOU WRITE IN FUCKIN PARAGRAPHS

Voted For: Scriptive

multies none
close sscript
open script
punches afro
structer script

v/ script

afro, you got to make you lines the same lenght

Voted For: afropimp

my vote goes to :afropimp
opening/closure:afropimp
structure:afropimp
better ryming:sciptive
better topiks:afropimp
my vote:afropimp