sinner vs Infamuz
 

Battle Rules:

6 -12Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
30 minet checkin
60 minet post
hurry up plese though

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 08-10-04 at 11:47 AM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

my bad i fucked up on the check in and shit..........

Sinner has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-07-04 11:49 AM.

Infamuz has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-07-04 12:03 PM.

let the battle commence...... i'll ruin this bitch in defence
you'll be baffled when I knock........ you outta yer sense

your just a noob your an't........ shit to me in comparision
you'll get ur crew and your hole............ verse picked on

what a name you have it's so gay what is it? infamous
what the fuck does that stand for that you r an anus?

i'll burry you in sand pits so....... I won't have to look at you
fucking put you in sement till you start.. 2 look like a statue

you must think your the best mc alive with your corny rhymes
there just useless try biting someone because u can't do lines

i'll finish you wid my closer........ and end dis loser for eternity
send a diss of yours saying that......... your verse was shitty

im here...
im on top...
im infamuz...

you bitch ass cant say shit, cuz even the mic rejected you/
this nigga is all pumped like mr. gadget fuckin inspected you/
but ya ego will drop when infamuz steps in ya ,radius/
take ya best shot cuz its yo last fuckin shot~at~this/
wanna take a 'hit', my 'shit' is mo serious than peer presure/
'unless~ya' got something , but ya dont, thats a fucking test ~duh/
this nigga, sinner smells of pussy, mother fucker he aint on fire/
this g-unit wannabe just started, shit he might as well retire/
if god dealed him a flush, it wouldnt suit this guys attire/
sorry i had to do it you were in my lyrical guns line~of~fire/
he wakes up and is still dreaming about beating~me/
thought i was talking bout dreams not fucking fantasys/

upping for votes..................................

Voted For: Infamuz

Yo infamuz had dis shit. Word play had to go to Sinner though. But infamuz had so good punches that hit harda. Linez was more complex... and i was feelin his flow more. Both drops was pretty good. Infamuz had tha opener an both closerz was a lil weack but infamuz had it.

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nice uppin..........................................

okay wateva about punches and flow upping for votes....

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This was feedback posted for Sinner
 

Dis battle was good
the only problem is that I cant vote yet
Ill be sure to vote on dis one

Voted For: Infamuz

give diss battle 2 INFAMUZ
he had better wordplay wit
da suit line n cards dat was
tyght n his flow was better
both nice verse just IFAMUZ
came a lil stronger
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thanx
1

uppin

Voted For: Infamuz

Infamuz............Structure was good..........flow was on target.......no multies......punches were good......personals were decent.......vocab and wordplay was good

Sinner..........sructure was o.k.....flow wasn't there......no multies......punches were aight....

This battle wern't great but i think sinners flow messed up....punches and personals wern't great from either.......

Vote: Infamuz

Voted For: Infamuz

a kinda weak battle in my opinion. Infamuz takes it easily but your vocab needs to improve. Not bad from you overall, tonne's beta than Sinners. Punches, flow, vocab and complexity goes to Infamuz but improvements need to be made in all departments

V/ Infamuz

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Voted For: Infamuz

Lol... i vote for infamuz.... he had better punches and he had better lfow... Sinner you were alright... but Infamuz, got you By his punches ,... but good job both of you!

PLease return tha fava!!.. heres the link! I only neeed one more Vote!!!!

Voted For: Sinner

WACK BATTLE

Both verses came weak man, Sinner had better punches in a way, though in other ways Infamouz came better. Wit the best line which was Infamouz closer, but the middle of his verse was shitty. Sinner you battling me and Red or what?

v/ sINNER

rETURN THE FAVOUR PLEASE, LINKS ARE IN MY SIG

Voted For: Infamuz

in - nice opener, dope structure, nice flow and some wicked wordplay, nice rhymes, punches and personals...really dope drop...

sin - kinda weak verse, coulda came harder, punches weren't that hard and the wordplay and multis didn't flow as much as infamuz did....

v/infamuz