[~*Lady Fiya*~] vs One-Man-Band
 

Battle Rules:

6 - 20 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
No D/r

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Minimum posts to vote: 100

Check in by: 08-10-04 at 07:33 PM

Must drop verse in 720 minutes after check in.

One-Man-Band has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-08-04 10:58 PM.

Hits phat, this miss aint close to me... flip wacks n' rip, I roast wit ease
Nobody's feelin ya in this game... so why not quit rap n' stick ta poetry!?
Ya quicks are slows to me... Im like lightning, deployin' my jolts by ya
Maraud this fraud... aint gon say you bite.. but we all know ya boy is ya ghost writer!
its known women toast lighter, fiyas bitchin n' shook red.. got this bitch on a hook, dead.
makin Fiyas game look ugly as fuck.... n' I ain't even diss on her looks yet!
Listen ya rook, vets is runnin the tracks, we headin fa finish so ill race you there
fuck you up ma... grab ya face n' tear.. rip it off, along with ya facial hair
ya covered in slits, bitch... there aint no way ya duckin on this
my punches'll hit square in the dome, n with ya huge chin how the fuck could they miss?!
jus one strike n' off wit ya dome, hittin n' flippin til I soften ya bones
Fiya ain't jus a ho, that slut been tapped more times than mafia phones!!
rockin' ya stones...when I rupture its hell, bitch... better buckle ya belt
crush wit dispels, cos like ya sex life, ya raps aint ever gettin' lucky or felt
But im feelin ya poetry... why not use all that emotion when ya rappin a verse?
I know... cos this heres a mans game, whore, so stick ya pen n' pad back in ya purse
ya crap just gets worse, Ill rip ya wit two shots, im too hot.. knock out both a ya chins
leave a infectious growth in ya shins... unlike you i dont talk pussy, bitch im boastin to win

burn off most a' ya skin, but I aint feelin ya spits, my punches left this bitch reelin from hits.....
Spillin ya ribs...Leave ya FLAT footed after I replace ya heels wit ya TITS!!!



as always if you didnt get my shit dont vote...

some of the lines have to do with her pic.. which is linked...

and just so ya know... im not sexist or anythin... big ups to the ladies... its just a diss

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[~*Lady Fiya*~] has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-09-04 07:39 PM.

vet? didn’t know you exist, just like ur type gettin’ mo’ microscopic
leveled on petri dishes, ya tryna fit like fat people on island tropics!
truth you can’t dodge it, ya multis can’t replaced ur nonsensed logic
lackin’ knowledge, think u know me cuz you researched my audit?!*
this fraud tryna be clever, lost 2 rulers-->ya lines equal no measure!**
beat ya ass w/ pleasure, shrink font size 2 make his verse look better!
u gifted? your scrolled-lyrics are what RV uses to wipe our ass with!
ur rules: 20 lines in length, notice he couldn’t limit the fuckin’ width!
loose structured, this dumb ass accept this battle just to get tortured!
round 2?! my avatitties tired of feedin’ you, it’s done u’re nurtured!
underrated? u battle newbies-> tha best way 2 respect, recognition!
more offense-> your text is rated under any html and java scriptions!
ya can’t decently spit in time-limit if God was 2 pause every clock!
...verse stopped->ur way to come hard & fresh= ur freezer + ziplock!
your best lines--> empty ONEs not even your ‘fans’ would stand in!
this MAN dial-up to broadBAND, 2 get his rhymes off ‘demandin’!***
wanderin’ all over the board FINALLY by HardWood you got fostered!
they made you feel at home, but actually lost your name in the roster!


-I don't need to reach the line limit to merk a bitch!, wut's good, nigga?! j/p lol good luck, just blazin' NIKKA!-
*audit: records
**lost 2 rulers(vets),lost ruler- no measure
*** his name One-Man-Band, dial-up, broadband, ‘demandin’

if ya don't get the wordplay or punches, don't vote.. simple..
~L F~

^nice drop but damn, i'm a virgin STILL! and i ain't got no ghostwriter, One-Man-Band.. but nice drop overall nigga.. i respect ya gangsta.. lol it's all good, keep blazin'.. nice 10 bars..
~wun~

yeah you came hard too... nice shit... guess its up to the voters

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uppin

This was feedback posted for [~*Lady Fiya*~]
 

damn this battle was real close,but since im in her crew,i cant vote.anyways,fiya,your verse was incredible to say the least.Wordplays and multies were on almost every line,your structure was pretty damn good.I didnt really like the parts when you were dissing his name,but every verse has its flaw.
This might be one of your best battles ive seen.The only thing I didnt understand is when you said his text was rated under html and java scriptions but im sure its real good.lol.damn nice drop and keep on doin yo thang.
One man band,your verse was madd hot also.Make your font bigger,thats the only thing.

Voted For: One-Man-Band

[~*Lady Fiya*~] - very good drop....you had some good punches in there, you had some good multis, and some pretty good worplay, flow was off at sometimes and structure was so so

One-Man-Band - wow...insane verse...some of the best punches/multis i have ever seen....great flow, perfect structure and nice....and i mean nice personals

my favs :

Fiya ain't jus a ho, that slut been tapped more times than mafia phones!!

But im feelin ya poetry... why not use all that emotion when ya rappin a verse?
I know... cos this heres a mans game, whore, so stick ya pen n' pad back in ya purse

v/One-Man-Band

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Voted For: One-Man-Band

this was one sided for omb. damn when are u gunna run out of those fuckin multis? they was SICK! n e ways the vote goes to omb for bein better on every level but lady i liked the creativity and appreciate how u put in stuff u gotta b smart to get. fav lines frum both:
omb-But im feelin ya poetry... why not use all that emotion when ya rappin a verse?
I know... cos this heres a mans game, whore, so stick ya pen n' pad back in ya purse
lady-this fraud tryna be clever, lost 2 rulers-->ya lines equal no measure!**
beat ya ass w/ pleasure, shrink font size 2 make his verse look better!
iight vote on the battles in the sig. one.

Voted For: One-Man-Band

This was a close battle, but in the end One-Man-Band came out on top. Damn, y'all both got hot drops, but Band had better multis. Fiya, you had good punches also, but you don't need to explain 'em at the end of your drop. No hate though, good job to both of you.

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Voted For: One-Man-Band

yea..this was a hott battle..

i felt this was one sided for reall..

omg: flow was on point.. punches and personals made my stomach hurt thats how funny that shit was... that verse is one of the best iv seen around lately.. good shit .. keep it up..

lady fiya:i liked your verse to.. yours was more of a technical type strictly punches type vere.. wasent to much humor in it.. butthat structure was horrible.. i hated the way you had all them >-- <-- "->.?_ and shit in there... i felt like i was reading a instant message or something..that was your only downfall..it really fucked ur flow..cause it really came down to flow and punches..since oyu guys tied on that...flow is what i based this on.. band took it in the flow catagory by far.. good battle tho.. big ups to you both



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Voted For: [~*Lady Fiya*~]

I think that you won this battle becaue you had some nice punches the wordplay was really good i liked tha word play... your opener was hard.. nice shit you won this battle

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Voted For: [~*Lady Fiya*~]

wow, this was a tight battle fo real. Hot verses by both of y'all. Props to both. Let me break it down

OMB, you had a very nice verse. Hard to read by the small font, but I still managed to read it. You had some dope personals in yo verse. Better than hers, but you had like no hard hittin' punches involved in them. Perosnlas are dope, but mixed in wit good punches they are very good weapon to use in a battle. Overall, you did good in that category. Yo flow was very nice too. IT stayed tru throughout the whole verse. I think it jus went off in like one spot. But it was tight pretty much throughout the rest though. Overall, I give yo verse a 9.1/10

Fiya, you also had a dope verse. You had some nice hard hittin' punches. You had less personals, but yo punches were much better. So I think you edged out that category. Yo flow was awesome too. Yo verse looks like a square, meanin' hot flow throughout the verse. Really good job. You had a fiya verse. I give it a 9.5/10 Tight job

Props to both of y'all, but my vote goes to FIya, no hate. pc

Voted For: [~*Lady Fiya*~]

vet? didn’t know you exist, just like ur type gettin’ mo’ microscopic
leveled on petri dishes, ya tryna fit like fat people on island tropics!
^^nice personal +good opener
truth you can’t dodge it, ya multis can’t replaced ur nonsensed logic
lackin’ knowledge, think u know me cuz you researched my audit?!*
^^ok..again /personal
this fraud tryna be clever, lost 2 rulers-->ya lines equal no measure!**
beat ya ass w/ pleasure, shrink font size 2 make his verse look better!
^^personal/nice
u gifted? your scrolled-lyrics are what RV uses to wipe our ass with!
ur rules: 20 lines in length, notice he couldn’t limit the fuckin’ width!
^^my favourite line in the battle,nuff said
loose structured, this dumb ass accept this battle just to get tortured!
round 2?! my avatitties tired of feedin’ you, it’s done u’re nurtured!
^^ok was'nt feelin it as much as the rest
underrated? u battle newbies-> tha best way 2 respect, recognition!
more offense-> your text is rated under any html and java scriptions!
^^decent,had ta read it twice..got lost..lol
ya can’t decently spit in time-limit if God was 2 pause every clock!
...verse stopped->ur way to come hard & fresh= ur freezer + ziplock!
^^nice..
your best lines--> empty ONEs not even your ‘fans’ would stand in!
this MAN dial-up to broadBAND, 2 get his rhymes off ‘demandin’!***
^^nice...
wanderin’ all over the board FINALLY by HardWood you got fostered!
they made you feel at home, but actually lost your name in the roster!
^^good closer...pretty funny

nice verse.."width"ahh fuck LMAO...lots of personals n original punches..nicely structured a few lines that were jus ok but still good...

OMB.....................................
im not gonna paste n copy but i will still go bar by bar..
1,good opener ...ok personal..not hittin really hard though
2,nice,good personal,this hit well....
3,ok..1st line was koo,2nd was aight..could've been written betta 4 da punch though....
4,ok,was weak compared ta ya others though/facial hair..lol
5,ok..was'nt feelin it..even with the picture(weakest line)
6,i liked this.."mafia phones"..good punch...
7,seemed like a filler line a bit...but ok punch..
8,ok,was'nt feelin that line very much,maybe its jus me....
9,nice first line,second was'nt as good but overall nice punch,
10,nice closer funny shit....
aight i got every last one of those lines n you had some pretty koo shit in there,sometimes it seems like you use mad fillers ta get you point across though..i don't like that 2 much..more wordplay was needed in punches.....but nice verse omb......
OVERALL......WOW...props ta both....both deserve the win..
but im gonna give my vote ta fiya cause she came with an obtene amount of original punches with really good structure n alot of wordplay involved in them...omb your structure with some weaker punches was your downfall....no hate nice battle
VOTE/FIYA.................THIS WAS A KILLER CLOSE BATTLE..

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Yo, Fiya... WTF.... yesterday i won this battle???

removin that herb vote was aight... but calamity isnt even in my crew??? im in hardwood... not Audiology... so whyd ya remove that one??

Voted For: One-Man-Band

ok punches were like pretty equal.....so i don't know how to choose....OMB had a lot of good multies....ok structure.....nice wordplay and mettas.....good vocab....over all a very close battle

LF.....you had equal punches to him....he had better multies.....you had better wordplay and structure....he had better mettas and vocab....so since the punches were equal....he takes this by multies, mettas, and vocab

v/ OMB

Very VERY close battle....i'd like to see a rematch

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Voted For: One-Man-Band

damn this was a close and tite battle
all of you were good and were dope
One man: your verse was sick nice drop ya structure was ok and same with ya flow but your personals were very good liked all of them, ya punches were sick too
Fiya: you a good femcee nice shit nice drop and verse ya structure was very very good and same with ya flow all good punches and personals
V/one man band for better verse overall

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