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ATMOSPHERE vs Grimez City
Battle Rules:
30 Lines Max 2 hour time limit No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting topic: What its like in the hood durin winter Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 08-08-04 at 02:51 PM Must drop verse in 120 minutes after check in. |
ATMOSPHERE has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-08-04 02:22 PM.
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Grimez City has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-08-04 02:45 PM.
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Its cold as fuck no heat piplines are broken,starvin around christmas time no presents to open/
head hurtin in the hood now niggas provocin,no hands around ya throat but mad polution makes you think you choken/ my boy died last night on chestnut swurving up on all the black ice/ my nigga was pissy drunk befor he left the party i begged him to act right/ but in the hood old heads is so sure of they self,talken up in the barber shops/ my conect said take the bus now im forced up on the charcter sell da rocks/ this is a cold winter colder than the rest niggas is mad buggin/ don't care to much for family cuz im catchen beef wit my older cuzin/ gotta find a quick fuck cuz the stress and hormoans are jumpin,love jones in the bed thumpin/ her man found out i was hitten in the hood some one said sumthin,she lyin tellen him she did nothin/ i love this place,even tho its full of hate,i live by god and the daily date/ life short money slow so i force myself to move at a faster pace/ me and quan at my spot apartment 245,fried beef outside my door quan gota desert egal on his side/ BOOM BOOM what we herd spinnen off was them boys ride/ They was gone but on the door a note read we'll get yall next time/ its seams like im scare but my mind aint playin tricks on me/ got my ear to the street so i can hear the bull shit homie/ damn i need to go to sleep without it being forever/ come on get a grip the pieces are forming together/ i need weed and black n' milds i got those let me relax this shit hurts/ this is my wint in the hood from december 1rst to the 31rst |
topic: wuts it like in the ghetto during winter time Its almost Christmas, n i really wish I jsts had a wishlist... But mah dad 3 days ago lost his good small ass buisness... It's cold outside, its jst a little lower then 30 degrees... We so poor, we can't even afford a small heater for three... Shyt! We even more poor!! we ain't even able to afford payless... Since there's no paycheck, theres is no chance dat they'll rest... But i shouldn't think about dat, cuz foreal i should jst have fun... But i can't stop thinkin, now i gotta work though i am jst 2 young... I remember readin fity cents album sayin "get rich or die tryin"... But why should I even try wen i don't even got a chance at survivin... Damn!! not even one person in dis block has more money then me... N i ain't got a dime! my life is more wost then a man dat can't speak... The only way to live is to sell the things that i adore the most... Like my favorite belt, mah coat, shyt all of my favorite clothes... Damn Im cold, but no ones gonna help so i guess we all alone... [Hear window break, n a gun shot] Jst heard another gun shot outside in mah next door neighbors home... Why ain't i surprised, i hear somethin like dat like almost every day... Shyt! After livin here for a little while you'd know the ghetto way... like everyday u'll hear a chick get raped in the news fox channel... But thats nothin cuz niggas be shootin if they even loose a battle... But too bad here durin the winter we can't have ne snow fights... Dats cuz there ain't know snow, shyt feels like there's no light... I just wish the sun could rise, so mah bad days can go gone... Damn, last time makin good memories, its jst been way 2 long... If I could have 1 wish, I'd be arrested in the mornin before seven.... Cuz compared to here, jail for-a-day is really more like heaven.. Because atlast in jail i could get a lil somethin jst to eat... Damn, its been a while since I've tasted a good meal full of meat... This is the way i live every day in the hood full of a couple killers... Damn, come to think of it, all dis shyt happend in jst dis one winter... |
I'd Like To Say We Both Had Some Nice Shit We Should Colab Some Time If Its Coo Wit You
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Voted For: ATMOSPHERE
1st verse was good but veered off in the middle of the verse,i liked your idea's n opener/closer..tight shit...but you dint keep on track well enough...atmos:decent verse nothing 2 special although you stated on topic n hit some koo..lines.i would've liked ta see you both narrow it down ta explaining 1 day in stead of all them in1 ..i thnk it would've made for a better read...both good but i was jus feeling this 1 more.. |
thanx 4 da vote ^^^ uppin for more...
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Voted For: Grimez City
best lines throught the battle: nice topic.. but in the hood old heads is so sure of they self,talken up in the barber shops/ my conect said take the bus now im forced up on the charcter sell da rocks/ ^ really visual.. nice use of words.. i think u won Grimez becuz, u had good imagery, ya structure was a lil' off which i give to atmosphere, but as far as the topic goes.. u stuck to it well.. ATMOSPHERE's best lines happened to be.. If I could have 1 wish, I'd be arrested in the mornin before seven.... Cuz compared to here, jail for-a-day is really more like heaven.. ^ nice visual but throughout i give it to Grimez City.. keep up the work and pee my battles y'all.. so Grimez u got this one! holla |
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dammint we need votes uppin for votes fa real......... yall ask me i do the same
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Voted For: ATMOSPHERE
vote atmosphere both had the right flow goin for the topic,but i just feel atmo put more emotion and imagery into his verse.i felt it more,and expressed his self better to the topic the other dude need to elevate but good job by both atmosphere |
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Voted For: ATMOSPHERE
atmo... woah..nice verse u really impressed me with that...very good imagrey...very good flow..good all around lyrics...just all around good verse..no realy forced rhymes.. stayed on subject..evrything fit like a puzzle peice... grimz wack structure....fix that asap..bad flow..bad lyrics...forced and stretched lines..all around gay..for real though..gay....just keeep workin and im confident youll get this rap-thing down..lol...sorry i gotta vote for atmo |
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Voted For: Grimez City
both were pretty equal... seems like you both tried to put the same spin on it. I kinda liked Grimez joint just a little better because his ideas were formulated better. his storyline had a better flow to it. I also have a younger brother by the name of quan so that kinda tripped me out..lol... had nothing to do with the vote, though... two good drops... almost hard to pick a winneer but i went with grimez... |
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Voted For: Grimez City
damn this was a good battle grimez you just wrote the trashest verse i raed all day in a battle and now you do this??!!who wrote for you?lol naw this verse is fire good image story line and im feeling the whole drop .minds good drop you was on point and you had everything on point too this is a hard pick but i gotta go with grimez here cuz his image came accross better fo real i felt his shit more so he gets the vote but this can go either way yall niggas did this respect |
Voted For: ATMOSPHERE
ingenius expressed much more of the hood.. but grimez ures ainnt bad but im feelin genius here so yeah.. peace |
Voted For: ATMOSPHERE
yea, this was a nice battle. But I think Atmosphere edged it out in the end. GC, nice verse overall. You had nice flow. But it went off in a few places. Your imagery was pretty good too. Nice stuff overall. Atmospher, nice verse too. You had very good flow. I liked it, it went good all throughout the verse. Tight stuff. You had goodimagery too. overall, tight verse. v/Atmopsher. no hate |
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