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| Grimez City |
  
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3 | 37.50% |
| ATMOSPHERE |
  
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5 | 62.50% |
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08-08-04, 02:21 PM
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Above All Else
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ATMOSPHERE vs Grimez City
IP: B7C3 6749
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30 Lines Max 2 hour time limit No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting topic: What its like in the hood durin winter Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 08-08-04 at 02:51 PM Must drop verse in 120 minutes after check in. |
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08-08-04, 02:22 PM
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#2
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IP: B7C3 6749
ATMOSPHERE has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-08-04 02:22 PM.
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08-08-04, 02:45 PM
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#3
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IP: FBCD 3AD9
Grimez City has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-08-04 02:45 PM.
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08-08-04, 03:14 PM
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IP: FBCD 3AD9
Its cold as fuck no heat piplines are broken,starvin around christmas time no presents to open/
head hurtin in the hood now niggas provocin,no hands around ya throat but mad polution makes you think you choken/ my boy died last night on chestnut swurving up on all the black ice/ my nigga was pissy drunk befor he left the party i begged him to act right/ but in the hood old heads is so sure of they self,talken up in the barber shops/ my conect said take the bus now im forced up on the charcter sell da rocks/ this is a cold winter colder than the rest niggas is mad buggin/ don't care to much for family cuz im catchen beef wit my older cuzin/ gotta find a quick fuck cuz the stress and hormoans are jumpin,love jones in the bed thumpin/ her man found out i was hitten in the hood some one said sumthin,she lyin tellen him she did nothin/ i love this place,even tho its full of hate,i live by god and the daily date/ life short money slow so i force myself to move at a faster pace/ me and quan at my spot apartment 245,fried beef outside my door quan gota desert egal on his side/ BOOM BOOM what we herd spinnen off was them boys ride/ They was gone but on the door a note read we'll get yall next time/ its seams like im scare but my mind aint playin tricks on me/ got my ear to the street so i can hear the bull shit homie/ damn i need to go to sleep without it being forever/ come on get a grip the pieces are forming together/ i need weed and black n' milds i got those let me relax this shit hurts/ this is my wint in the hood from december 1rst to the 31rst |
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08-08-04, 03:45 PM
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IP: B7C3 6749
topic: wuts it like in the ghetto during winter time Its almost Christmas, n i really wish I jsts had a wishlist... But mah dad 3 days ago lost his good small ass buisness... It's cold outside, its jst a little lower then 30 degrees... We so poor, we can't even afford a small heater for three... Shyt! We even more poor!! we ain't even able to afford payless... Since there's no paycheck, theres is no chance dat they'll rest... But i shouldn't think about dat, cuz foreal i should jst have fun... But i can't stop thinkin, now i gotta work though i am jst 2 young... I remember readin fity cents album sayin "get rich or die tryin"... But why should I even try wen i don't even got a chance at survivin... Damn!! not even one person in dis block has more money then me... N i ain't got a dime! my life is more wost then a man dat can't speak... The only way to live is to sell the things that i adore the most... Like my favorite belt, mah coat, shyt all of my favorite clothes... Damn Im cold, but no ones gonna help so i guess we all alone... [Hear window break, n a gun shot] Jst heard another gun shot outside in mah next door neighbors home... Why ain't i surprised, i hear somethin like dat like almost every day... Shyt! After livin here for a little while you'd know the ghetto way... like everyday u'll hear a chick get raped in the news fox channel... But thats nothin cuz niggas be shootin if they even loose a battle... But too bad here durin the winter we can't have ne snow fights... Dats cuz there ain't know snow, shyt feels like there's no light... I just wish the sun could rise, so mah bad days can go gone... Damn, last time makin good memories, its jst been way 2 long... If I could have 1 wish, I'd be arrested in the mornin before seven.... Cuz compared to here, jail for-a-day is really more like heaven.. Because atlast in jail i could get a lil somethin jst to eat... Damn, its been a while since I've tasted a good meal full of meat... This is the way i live every day in the hood full of a couple killers... Damn, come to think of it, all dis shyt happend in jst dis one winter... |
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08-08-04, 04:05 PM
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#6
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IP: FBCD 3AD9
I'd Like To Say We Both Had Some Nice Shit We Should Colab Some Time If Its Coo Wit You
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08-08-04, 04:22 PM
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#7
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Uppin For Votes
IP: FBCD 3AD9
Votes This Is A Nice Battle I Think But We Need Votes...................................
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08-08-04, 04:37 PM
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IP: 88E6 6CAA
Voted For: ATMOSPHERE
1st verse was good but veered off in the middle of the verse,i liked your idea's n opener/closer..tight shit...but you dint keep on track well enough...atmos:decent verse nothing 2 special although you stated on topic n hit some koo..lines.i would've liked ta see you both narrow it down ta explaining 1 day in stead of all them in1 ..i thnk it would've made for a better read...both good but i was jus feeling this 1 more..
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08-08-04, 05:07 PM
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IP: B7C3 6749
thanx 4 da vote ^^^ uppin for more...
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08-08-04, 05:11 PM
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IP: 3240 794D
Voted For: Grimez City
best lines throught the battle: nice topic.. but in the hood old heads is so sure of they self,talken up in the barber shops/ my conect said take the bus now im forced up on the charcter sell da rocks/ ^ really visual.. nice use of words.. i think u won Grimez becuz, u had good imagery, ya structure was a lil' off which i give to atmosphere, but as far as the topic goes.. u stuck to it well.. ATMOSPHERE's best lines happened to be.. If I could have 1 wish, I'd be arrested in the mornin before seven.... Cuz compared to here, jail for-a-day is really more like heaven.. ^ nice visual but throughout i give it to Grimez City.. keep up the work and pee my battles y'all.. so Grimez u got this one! holla
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08-08-04, 05:20 PM
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thankx for da vote uppin for more..................
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08-08-04, 05:58 PM
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uppin for votes............................................. ................
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08-08-04, 08:56 PM
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IP: FBCD 3AD9
dammint we need votes uppin for votes fa real......... yall ask me i do the same
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08-09-04, 02:09 AM
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A Reflection Of The Past
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IP: CEF5 716F
Voted For: ATMOSPHERE
vote atmosphere both had the right flow goin for the topic,but i just feel atmo put more emotion and imagery into his verse.i felt it more,and expressed his self better to the topic the other dude need to elevate but good job by both atmosphere
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08-09-04, 03:20 PM
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IP: FBCD 3AD9
uppin for votes come on lets get this over.............................................. ...............................
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