intensify effect vs Da Jokah
 

Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
u spit first

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 08-08-04 at 11:25 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

Da Jokah has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-08-04 10:28 PM.

intensify effect has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-08-04 10:42 PM.

if u got ya verse then drop it.....

i will try to drop it as soon as i can.....

jokah look,
my punch-lines connect's, while u try'in to figuer out the number in a phone booth
so there aint no way u pass'ing this match...... like u was sponsored by truth

and u'r verse got the youth toss'in-me gloves befor i kill-bums
cuz this jokah heat about to retier like ricky williams

u spit with a stale-toung, no-wounder u AIM for a IM inorder to skip defeat
but i been turn'ing-tricks on the bored befor the X-games first-week

plus i kill queers and everyone knows this guy blows fellas
so i'll put a hole in ya chest big enough to make ya asshole jealous

i know why ya name jokah... cuz u know u aint a relevant spitter
be a quitter, cuz u about to get more negatives results then developing pictures......

BITCH.... BANG BANG EARLy....

my bullets will infect u..and intensly disect u//
ya fam rejects u...well ya ya aids effect u//

ight lets go

ayo man u kno i got enuff of tha dirrty green cash//
haha enuff to make ya girls legs spred like a rash//
my whole lifestyle has been straight up rags to ritches//
yur whole fam iz full up of dem kruked fags n bitches//
it aint a headache its my knowledge and iam sick in tha head//
this aint magic tricks but get so girl in ma bed it'll b a trick in tha bed//
fuck tha beef and turkey shit for dinner i want chicken in stead//
got mad connects, like ca computer-to-a-mouse//
we dont click right,u get left wit a shooter-at-ya-house//
yo iam a cat this dudes a mouse so he lookin fo some cheddah//
ya niggas kno straight up dat tha Jokah ..is way fuckin bettah//
than this cat...

e.z wun

uppin this

Voted For: Da Jokah

Da Jokah - sweet drop man, very nice flow with that verse, good structure and your punches and personals took intensify effect to school

intensify - wheres the structure man?? flow not really flowin either, good rhymes i guess and punches thrown not really connected

flow and structure - da jokah
rhymes and wordplay - da jokah
personals and punches - da jokah

one sided

v/da jokah

drop an honest vote on this battle please
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iight thanx for tha vote
uppin this shit

drop an honest vote on this battle please (punchline)
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=140992

my punches aint connect???
if u dont get my lines dont vote........

my flow was a little off in the begining but i upp'ed it towards the end....

i focus on punches not flow as u can see.....

FOR ALL VOTERS IF U DONT GET MY VERSE OR PUNCHES DONT VOTE....

bitch plz take ya shit else were... ur flow is wack and u aint punchin shit nuff said e.z


upiin this shit wun....

no your punches didn't connect very good they were gay, and i think you should head back to grade 3 and take spelling class again you herb...

uppin this shit

uppin this shit

uppin this
dont sleep

This was feedback posted for intensify effect
 

you need to elevate, put in some personels and multis aight

uppin this

Voted For: Da Jokah

Da Jokah took this with harder punches and better wordplay. Intensify said he blows fellas, and when i read that I kinda lost interest in the rest of his drop. But no hate though, good battle between the 2 of you.
Vote - Da Jokah

Yo, return the favor y'all with honest votes
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http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=138941

This was feedback posted for Da Jokah
 

Dis battle was ok
too bad I cant vote yet but Il will get back to u when I can

Voted For: intensify effect

jokah-
haha enuff to make ya girls legs spred like a rash
^^^original metaphor, but not a punch and the only thing i liked in ya verse

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i.e.

plus i kill queers and everyone knows this guy blows fellas
so i'll put a hole in ya chest big enough to make ya asshole jealous
^^^^not a diss, but origianl and i liked it.
i know why ya name jokah... cuz u know u aint a relevant spitter
be a quitter, cuz u about to get more negatives results then developing pictures......
^^^^an acutal witty PUNCH, prolly played thought, but good enough to win the battle.

yo i.e. how bout u set up a battle that the check in is later so i got time to check in ya dumb fuck

Voted For: intensify effect

i didn't like this battle in my opinion
This battle goes to I.E. for a better verse though i didn't like how he structured it
Da jokah your good keep elevating man
vote goes to I.E. for better punches and better overall verse

upp'in for more votes...

i see jokah got dick ryders haha so fuck a red-bull nigga.....

upp'in....

haha iight anyways uppin this

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will return the favor of a vote drop a link......

Voted For: intensify effect

Intensify effect barley took this one cuz.. Jokah had way better structure than you and his flow was also on point, it sounded better actually than your verse.. yet, the content of your verse gave your the win, the wordplay, the punchlines, etc.. your opener was tight, but the line was stretched, you see what i mean? but your punchlines hit harder than his overall, rhymes were on point to give for a more entertaining verse...

return the favor with an honest drop in this one cuz..
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=143655

thanks for the vote people ^^^ i will return the favor of a vote aight....

upp'in for more votes.....

This was feedback posted for intensify effect
 

thats cold u snapped in this battle if i could it be u

upp'in for more votes fellas.......................

Voted For: intensify effect

IE takes this one. I think that Jokah talked about IEs girl too much. That was kinda his downfall. IE had the harder punches in this one too. Good metas and wordplay. that asshole line killed it mayn. Good structure to Jokah, but IE had the better verse. No hate...good battle.

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^^^ thanks for the vote everyone.................
upp'in to finish this.....

lets get this one ova people..........................................

upp'in for 1 more votes poeple lets get this one ova............

Voted For: intensify effect

my punch-lines connect's, while u try'in to figuer out the number in a phone booth
so there aint no way u pass'ing this match...... like u was sponsored by truth
/\. not a hot opener

and u'r verse got the youth toss'in-me gloves befor i kill-bums
cuz this jokah heat about to retier like ricky williams
/\. 7/10 nice

u spit with a stale-toung, no-wounder u AIM for a IM inorder to skip defeat
but i been turn'ing-tricks on the bored befor the X-games first-week
/\. self glory blah

plus i kill queers and everyone knows this guy blows fellas
so i'll put a hole in ya chest big enough to make ya asshole jealous
/\. another self not a punch there

i know why ya name jokah... cuz u know u aint a relevant spitter
be a quitter, cuz u about to get more negatives results then developing pictures......
/\. Nice closer

ayo man u kno i got enuff of tha dirrty green cash//
haha enuff to make ya girls legs spred like a rash//
/\. aight opener

my whole lifestyle has been straight up rags to ritches//
yur whole fam iz full up of dem kruked fags n bitches//
/\. nice again

it aint a headache its my knowledge and iam sick in tha head//
this aint magic tricks but get so girl in ma bed it'll b a trick in tha bed//
fuck tha beef and turkey shit for dinner i want chicken in stead//
/\. wtf where's the punch?!?

got mad connects, like ca computer-to-a-mouse//
we dont click right,u get left wit a shooter-at-ya-house//
/\. ???

yo iam a cat this dudes a mouse so he lookin fo some cheddah//
ya niggas kno straight up dat tha Jokah ..is way fuckin bettah//
/\. ???

I thought Jokah had this...untill i read his verse

RTF on ma sig