EmerginMC07 vs Damage Control
 

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Check in by: 08-12-04 at 11:01 AM

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Damage Control has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-09-04 11:02 AM.

EmerginMc07 has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-09-04 11:02 AM.

iite i will spit first, n wil get dis battle over wit

u wana battle? wat da fuck is rong wit u? u must b goin insaine,
bones startin to rattle, my ryms guna get u, in dis battle wat u hopin to gain?,
wit a 9 in my right lookin to kill here u cum redy to have yo brains spill , dont think i will?
im a sharp knife u a dull drill ur gettin scared now can u feel da thrill? ur scared stiff ur jus standin still,
yo blood will flow on to da screen like a seaboard right thru da keyboard shit u got da voters n me bord,
yo shit is old like a used ford n mine r sharp like a new sword yo dawg u need help find da lord,
u a thug since when?, u need a religious bath gota rinse agen, damage control finnaly admitted he's gay amen!,
u finally came out n decided not to stay in, u cum out wit a grin, den behind u cums out a man,
dis clown to easy dawg bilieve me ur ryms r like nails on a chalkborad n mine r smooth n breezy,
he loves dick n begs "feed me" like a fuckin stray dog sayin "keep me" n den his dad answers back "please me"
hes ben around, actaully hes ben down, n noooo it wasnt a pussy that he found,
wit a princesess crown n a bitch gown dis dude cudnt figure out a verb from a noun,
fuck man i dint want to destroy u n im sure yo boss dint wana unemploy u n im sry my ryms had to cloy u,
n guess what dis battle will annoy u, like wen yo dad decided to ploy u, n oo yea 1 more suprise ppl dont enjoy u,


yo yall let me no wat u think of that, jus wanted to try dis 1 out, iite dawg spit dat shit n afta he done doin his lil rym, im uppin dis shit for votes!

heres my verse

call me a teacher cause im givin this kid a lesson,
while his lines are like play-doh it'll be easy for me to stretch em//
somebody better bless em, cause his defeat will come with ease, and the only way you'll ever get "a head" is down on your rusty knees//
it seems to me you took me as joke and carried me lightly,
but by now i can tell your curled up in a corner saying "I'm frightened//
like the grim reaper when you die you've obviously ran out of luck, this kids punches dont effect and like kanyes' two words "You Suck"//
i deliver multis and tons of belligerent vocab, this kids lost this battle like an easy to pick scab//
and its a drag that i really have to waste such lines and valuable time,when hotness compared you couldnt even heat an iron//

-1-

good luck lets see what you got

definetly not my best but we all have some off days uppin for votes

iite we uppin vor votes dawg!!!!!!!! lets go ppl vote on dis

Voted For: EmerginMc07

I felt Emirgin a bitt more in this one, i think he took it.

Check ma battles and give an honest vote

we still uppin for votes, lets go!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

iite dawg can we get sum votes? i left da link evrywhere? cmon man

uppin!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!upin!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Voted For: Damage Control

Aight i liked Both of yah Verses, it was a pretty tight battle, EmerginMC07 you had alot of punches but they werent very hard, you gotta work on re-wording them to make them be more effective, yah lines were kinda strecthed also, but yah had good Rhyems, and i could see what you were trying to get across.. DAmage control you had good Structure, and yah Flow was tight, yah punches were aight, Not that hard, but a inch harder then EmerginMC07 and thats what decidely took the battle, Good Work guys, keep at it

Damage control takes my vote!!!
No Hate, Just Stating..


Peace!!!!!

Return the Fav, on one of my battles!!

man uppin this thang for votes les hurry and up and get this shit counted

uppin for votes man i know ya'll see this vote man and we'll be sure to return the favor

stiiiilllll uppin for votes come on hit this joint up with some votes

yo man we uppin dis fuckin batle honest votes no bribin ppl for votes lets go man shit well return da favor

Voted For: Damage Control

Damage - your flow was really good.....nice wordplay (playdoh..etc.) ur closer shoulda been harder but still pretty good....

EmergeMC - structure kinda threw me off...some of ur rhymes seemed a little forced at tymes...try not to tlak about spilling brains and shyt like that....its not battle material....keep battling and elevate

v/ Damage Control

by tha way yall should vote on my battle in which a very lonely link can be found in my sig..... thanx

Voted For: EmerginMc07

"and its a drag that i really have to waste such lines and valuable time,when hotness compared you couldnt even heat an iron//
it seems to me you took me as joke and carried me lightly,
but by now i can tell your curled up in a corner saying "I'm frightened//"-damage control

yo u didnt rhyme in those lines...lmmao

i give this vote 2 emerginmc cuz he had more punches n multi's plus he actually rhymed all the way through his rhyme
structure n flow was equal on both verses but u gotta work on voab n make surre ur bars r rhymin

still upin for votes come on ya'll dont sleep on this battle

Voted For: Damage Control

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=138937
YO FUCKIN RETURN WIT AN HONEST VOTE.

call me a teacher cause im givin this kid a lesson,
while his lines are like play-doh it'll be easy for me to stretch em//
somebody better bless em, cause his defeat will come with ease, and the only way you'll ever get "a head" is down on your rusty knees//
^^^^yo these two bars win the battle, this is how its done. wordplay used as punches shows that your good. only thing better is doin that wit personals and since emergingmc didnt do that i gotta give it to damage control. but yo dc, u gotta make them hit harder by makin them personals.

both of u need to get ya strutures strait. dc yas was ite, but a few of ya lines was stretchd and mc all ya lines was stretched.

yo come on people vote on this dont sleep it was a pretty good match

all ya'll fuckin heads on here cant even place a vote on this i know ya'll see this this shit to all those who have voted much respect for ya'll but for the rest lets get some votes in this bitch please

yo man honest fukin votes lets go dis shit is a close battle i give props to my man rite there cmin dawg wat yall think HONEST fuckin votes!!

Voted For: EmerginMc07

Hey I think Emergin took this ...he had beter lyrics and more word play ...my votegoes to emerginmc

Voted For: Damage Control

meh..this wasnt a good battle...

damage control...punches were weak and played..
the *a head* was played to hell..you need to work on
creativity and wordplay....

emergin....need to work on that strcuture..
good metas..but your punches were meh..
didnt hit hard enough..
...you have potential..elavate

aight yo thanks both of ya'll for droppin votes on this but we need some more uppin once again

Voted For: Damage Control

Both these rhymes were weak. Damage control happened to have the better of the two rhymes. His flow was better than Emergin's which i couldn't even follow, it was all over the fuckin place.