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B-MAC 08-09-04 11:45 AM

BeStRaPaEVER vs $ Wordman $
 
Battle Rules
10 Lines Max
No crew votes!!!!!!!!!
No Hate Votes!!!!!!!( this means if you got beef wit me Dont Fucken Vote)
No feeding!!


Aight you spit First!!!!!!!

Peace!!!


Minimum posts to vote: 40

Check in by: 08-12-04 at 11:45 AM

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System 08-09-04 11:45 AM

$ Wordman $ has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-09-04 11:45 AM.

System 08-09-04 05:31 PM

BeStRaPaEVER has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-09-04 05:31 PM.

BeStRaPaEVER 08-09-04 05:42 PM

im gone give it to you in a herd man im just the best and thats the WORD MAN/
but u cocky im not still no change in it and if its in ya own hands then ill put ya brains in it/
you speekin the word ya scrpt fast to change and the dro so green it leaves ya lips wit grass stains/
boy when i see u in ya car dont start breakin fast cuz the shells like windex ill spray glass/
and young kidd you is quik to be missin u get gunned quik and i aint talkin bout disses/
while ya flows dont bother me n ya girls all mobbing me ull be makin the news like whitney and bobby/
and im not out for the fame u know u'd be broke after a week like a ps2 game/
and ya know i dont care anymore gut check olsen twins ya wieghts not there anymore/
its un-fair how you known n u know ya boy stay wit more grass then a lawn nome nigga

BeStRaPaEVER 08-09-04 05:45 PM

hurry n come back im me at LDUABGREP71 when u done so i can read it
chea chea read the name

B-MAC 08-10-04 08:48 AM

What are you SAying??? Just Spit man... !!!!!!!!!!!

B-MAC 08-10-04 10:28 AM

Iam Lyricaly GIfted to Shine any Moment any Time
evasion, From this Extortion, I Bring To Yah Sceme OF Rhyems
Yah Lyrics Suck to Much To even Get that One Time*(Loseyour Self)
Your Less Known In here , then the Entire Organized crime
Literally, Every BAttle i Do, I key'in while I Verbalize
words you Jawt, Nominate you For da Nobel PriZe
You ant No Straight G, Yah whole Life Is decriminalized,

Nobel Prize: a award for peace

BeStRaPaEVER 08-10-04 01:50 PM

ok WORD MAN good battle its ova tho i got you man no problizy

MARVOLoUsJ1009 08-10-04 02:00 PM

Voted For: $ Wordman $

damm wordman got str8 2 da point but u shoul of kept ya line limit even u stop at 7 but u took dis shit easily...cuzz i really couldn't understand best's verse stucture was madd nasty dunn fix dat shit and y u at it fix ya name pleez u no where near da best rapper...4real...but word takes dis shit all he needed was a good structure cuzz best aint have no bar's...

hit dem joint up in my sig ya'll...WUN

B-MAC 08-10-04 02:49 PM

thanks For the Vote man.... Uppin for More.. Leave a LInk

B-MAC 08-10-04 03:42 PM

Uppin this shit... Leave a Link.. I ll hit yah back..

Big Bad Wolf 08-10-04 03:58 PM

Voted For: $ Wordman $

Yo close ok battle. Wordman had dis for 2 reasons. Wordplay was way better. AN structure was way better. Best fix your structure kid. Otha than that your rhymes was cool. Keep elvatin. Word Nice punches too. V/Wordman

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Logic The Goonie 08-10-04 05:05 PM

Voted For: BeStRaPaEVER

iight close battle but imma go with bestrapa cuz damn wordman ur flow was hard to follow and shit and the punches didnt make that much sense and shit.bestrapa it culda been better, it was just ok pawtna. fav lines from both:
word-Literally, Every BAttle i Do, I key'in while I Verbalize
words you Jawt, Nominate you For da Nobel PriZe
bestrapa-while ya flows dont bother me n ya girls all mobbing me ull be makin the news like whitney and bobby/

no hate. brutally honest(lol) aiight one.

D-Blue 08-10-04 05:45 PM

Voted For: $ Wordman $

wordman took dis shyt he had betta evritin personalz punchez, n structure while da otha nigga wuznt as great gud battle ya 2

retur a favor at ma 2 battlez in am signature

B-MAC 08-11-04 08:37 AM

Uppin For More Votes....!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

BeStRaPaEVER 08-11-04 11:40 AM

uppin for votes lets get this shit done wit man pleez

B-MAC 08-11-04 11:54 AM

Uppin for Votes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

B-MAC 08-11-04 04:08 PM

Uppin for votes.. Leave a Link and it will be returned..

BeStRaPaEVER 08-11-04 05:47 PM

uppin for some votes aint that hard to pick who won man lets close this shit out

B-MAC 08-11-04 07:46 PM

uppin for some more votes.. leave a link...........................

Pro. 08-11-04 07:51 PM

This was feedback posted for BeStRaPaEVER
 
bestwrapper-
multis-bestwrapper
structure-bestwrapper
punchez-n/a
overall-(candywrapper) I mean bestwrapper

Nynth Degree 08-11-04 07:59 PM

Voted For: BeStRaPaEVER

Ok, my vote here is going to BeStRaPaEVER simply because he had an overall better drop. He had a few punches that were ok, and $Wordman$ didn't really have any at all. However, I think you should both work on your structure and styles a little. And Best, when you said you weren't cocky, I sure hope you were joking...I mean, look t your name. But no hate though, that was an ok battle between the 2 of you.
Vote - BeStRaPaEVER

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JaneDoe 08-11-04 08:13 PM

Voted For: BeStRaPaEVER

open- both
close- Bestrapaever
personals- Wordman
metas- Bestrapaever
punches-Bestrapaever
multis-Wordman

win- Bestrapaever

I really like Bestrapaever's style. its different from what i usually see. plus your punches werent that hard but you usually had them in every line of yours

B-MAC 08-12-04 08:36 AM

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50Cal. 08-12-04 10:00 AM

Voted For: $ Wordman $

best half ya shit aint rhyme and ya punches was madd weak vocab was lackin2/10
word good vocab your punches also lacked both of yall had good flows but i liked word man verse better it was either to follow and it aint seem forced

DiSeAsE 08-12-04 10:08 AM

Voted For: BeStRaPaEVER

umm u both didnt even have 10 lines... v/bestrapever
his flow and structure was fucked up but it had like 2x more punches and personals.. i sort of understanded it better even if the structure was off.... anyways both of your verses sucked and BestRaperEver clearly took it as.. wordman had to short of lines and no punches.. v/best

B-MAC 08-12-04 11:49 AM

Uppin for more Votes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

DV8 08-12-04 02:11 PM

Voted For: $ Wordman $

wordman had punches they werent that great..it seemed like not alot of effort was put into your verse..your punches need a bit of work,need some wordplay...bestrappa...ok you did ok in the rhymin part..i liked your verse but not 4 a battl;e your had no punches n pretty stretched lines...you need ta elevate your punches alot....


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