white_boi vs EmerginMc07
 

Battle Rules:

6 Lines max
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 08-12-04 at 12:45 PM

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white_boi has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-09-04 12:49 PM.

EmerginMc07 has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-09-04 12:51 PM.

iite imma spit first, den u gon den well get dis dam battle out da way

yoo dis battle ova befo it began dis dawg may say he a thug but he saw a pit bull n he ran he was scared fuckin pussy,
afta readin dis yo lips will b all crusty cus u no u is rusty afta readin my shit ur whole like and brain cells will b mushy,
hittin u harder den a 100 mph fastball afta u read dis imma watch yo ass stall u only have 45 minutes buddy,
y may not b able to respond afta readin dis yo lick yo lips can u read no more? or has yo brain completly turned to puddie?,
hello! guess u def, dam!, i was guna rip u up fasta den a comedian on def jam but u can read rite? well unles u blind,
Read dis its ova quit rappin ur career is ova jus obey da comand like a dawg roll ova u had yo chance u blew it now its my time to shine.

yo we should make the maximum lines infinite cuz 6 aint enough

imma have way more than 6 lines it better not make me lose cuz 6 is pussy

dawg i sed a 6 lina, dat means 6 lines jus quick n to da point, wat is yo shit prewritten?, jus make it 6 lines

ayyo prepare for your death cuz youz about to get murked
you better hold your breath cuz all this shit gonna hurt
so go get your dress, bowtie, panties and skirt
cuz you goin on a date wit elmo and bert
in front this whole comunity of "RV"
imma make you look like the most stupidest MC
you claim to be an MC thats finally emergin
youz 15 and youz prolly still a virgin
imma beat you down you gon need a lyrical surgeon
cuz imma make you wanna die and make it urgent
you gon commit suicide by drinking laundry detergent
your gunna have to quit work at construction
after this battle youll have ability reduction
so you can stay at home, get fat, and youll need lypo suction
right now youz about to witness abduction
cuz i abducted this battle and its now all mine
cuz this right here is now my last line

my bad too late i didnt mean to i jus never read it i dont like no quick shit

you might wanna extend your verse... its up to you and dont worry theres plenty of time so thas okay

and no dis aint prewritten, if it was prewritten i would have you disabled and unable to move cuz youd be in so much shock

iite dawg dont get hard, u will get merked, uh nice verse, n naw it aint prewritten i see dat, we uppin for votes

Voted For: EmerginMc07

both verses were good in my opinion but emergin came at him
wit a sick verse....white_boi's verse was nice but a bit simple
plus emergin's verse made me laugh betta...lmmao peace

Voted For: white_boi

Dis battle was weak as shit. Both didnt come hard at all but i say white boi had dis shit. His lines was better an a lil funnier. No good punches. Wordplay white boi got it. Flow WHite boi. Structure white boi. Ay work on yallz shit an come harda nex time.emergmc yo fix your structure an your linez was basic. No hate V/White boi

Voted For: white_boi

ahhhhhhhhh hahahahahahahahahaha, man whitboy owned you buddy, damn whiteboy, twelve years old wit rhymes like that, he had a few sick lines, and there was a few that i wasn't feelin, all in all though you won this shit....

you claim to be an MC thats finally emergin
youz 15 and youz prolly still a virgin
imma beat you down you gon need a lyrical surgeon

that was so fucking sick fo a kid his age, n yo, i was feelin whiteboys flo, he had better structure, killed him on the personells, his rhymes were more thought out so he had a better rhyme sceme, he had better punches, Mc07, you needa work on your structure, it was really akward to read, and your punches were just stupid, you had no personells, and cuz of the structure i wasnt feelin the flo of it, and your rhyme sceme was just so basic, dont hate cuz i know how to vote trust me................................................ ..............
Flow: White boi
Punches: White boi
Personnels: White boi
Rhyme sceme: White boi
Word play: White boi
Opener: white boi
Ending: didn't like either of there endings
Structure: White boi
Vote: White Boi

Voted For: white_boi

white boi, u said alot of dumb shit wit these
so go get your dress, bowtie, panties and skirt
cuz you goin on a date wit elmo and bert
....after this battle youll have ability reduction
so you can stay at home, get fat, and youll need lypo suction

das jus some dumbe shit. and then.......
cuz i abducted this battle and its now all mine
cuz this right here is now my last line

u finish wit a nice punch not stating the obvious.

but u had harder hitting personals and shit wit.....
imma make you look like the most stupidest MC
you claim to be an MC thats finally emergin
youz 15 and youz prolly still a virgin

.........
emerging....

ya shit is way to stretched, u need a new fuckin structure and sum vocab. then personals. i jus aint feelin none of your disses at all, the way u say the shit jus aint good and what u say aint good. aint feelin none of it.

no hate jus honesty, RETURN THE FAVOR, HIT THIS UP
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=138937

Voted For: white_boi

This was an ok battle....U had bettter punches and structure, and a few peronals but over all it was medioker..nah mean. Ok battle. U got my vote though...cuz u got him.

ayyo shit this is my battle so i might as well take victory now...

Voted For: white_boi

oooookay i guess ill vote for white boi even tho hes duckin our fuckin battle. n e ways both was weak but since ur noobies its not THAT serious for now. white boi wins for better punches, and structure and more creativity(nevr thot i wuld say that) but this aint a hate its just real. drop a vote on the link in the sig but be HONEST cuz it was real close. one