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JaC M. WrIgHt vs Ice Pick
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JaC M. WrIgHt has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-09-04 01:52 PM.
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Ice Pick has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-09-04 01:58 PM.
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Jerkin penises your a disgrace to -the- PEE-PULL (people)
Yo verses flow like water? only cuz I'm pushin H-2-ZERO (h20) Blaze-the-eagel, thru your chest, so your hearts dedicated-to-flippin-birds Like I dropped the "#1 dictionary down your throat" your OVER-RATED-SPITTIN-VERBS Rippin-dis-herb like I'm Splittin-a-blunt Ya 2 liner punches are pussy like ya fists-in-a-cunt Jack is ill? not unless you got warts-on-ya-digits This murder sorrows short like remorse-for-a-midgit! like plumber-dudes... you shitty, thas why you doin the NUMBER-2 the only time this nigga "LATEX" (lay text) is when he swallows rubber-balloons (condoms) literally carve your chest out leavin you a punk-wit-no-heart and spine ICE police your brain, put it on probation, you cant leave the WACK STATE-OF-MIND i'll knee Jack to the head leavin his face-mis-aligned only when doorbell ditchin has this cat seen harda-knocks No-glocks, he only seen clips in barber-shops... was gonna end it but no...Im GOIN FOR ANOTHER slice Im Raw-with-the-Steez, Bite my Style.. "Get E.coli"~ "Jack in dyselxic 'Eifel' Tower", theres "Death in your 'Life B'"~ Ur Meta-forced(phors) lines think they fly with Soar Eyes~ I "Slay the Alphabet", get Visine, I'm bout to "Redden your fuckin I's"~ |
Im Scolding With Speech A Omen SHowin Ya Legecy's Weak//
Im Like 'Moses with a Mic' Tha Way Im "Splittin tHe C""// Get Buried And Grieve U Not Even Worth Tha Respect// Plus all U doin Is 'Talkin Out Tha Ass' Like "Eddie Murphey In ShreK"// Get Burned with Tha tek Im Shootin to tha Sound Of My Music// But this Dont have to be a 'Audio Battle' to get "Beat By A Cue Stick"(Acoustic)// Its Confusin That Ya Dick Is SO 'Skinny' Its Amusin To Watch// Cause after Ya 'Girl Gave u Head' She Also "Used it as Floss"//(lol) Get abused From tha Boss Ill 'Cut Ya Gut With Knives' If U want It// U dont Even Have to be 'Nervous' To Get "Butterflies In ya Stomach"// Get Demolished U Dumb Bitch! Youll be Hunted By Thousands// And Ill treat Tha Child Like My Own Get it? He'll Be "Punished and Grounded"// U like how that sounded? Ill swing Tha Loiusville and Leave u in Coffins// When I Put Tha 'Bat To ya Chest' Like Tha "Hero Of Gothem"// U fearin me often Juss Listen and Follow Tha Sites Drill// Cause Even With 'Tylenol in a Rope' U couldnt "Tie-Pill"(type ill)// My Mic Kills Listen U Lyin To Keep It Real// But U Like 'Cancer Patients at Yard sales' You Juss "Dyin to Get a Deal"// u Hidin From Cockin Steel U aint Gangsta Im Known To Do This!!// Its Shown Im Ruthless When I Leave Ya 'Feet Cold' Like "frozen Rulers"// |
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Voted For: JaC M. WrIgHt
JaC M. WrIgHt- you verse was good...yo punches were hard & they landed..the structure went good wit the flow..and u had some personals in there... Ice Pick- yo verse was good also..yo structure was a little choppy..but your flow was ok wit it..and yo punches were pretty hard there.. Overall- JaC M. WrIgHt got this one becuz he had harder punches than Ice Pick..and that his structure went good wit his flow..and he had some personals...but basicly he had harder punches than Ice Pick and that he kept landed them wit it... Vote= JaC M. WrIgHt |
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vote GUN TALK IN BATTLES IS FAKE JAC M YOU SUCK AND YOUR VERSE SHOWS IT DUDE I BET YOU BIT THAT FUCKIN VERSE I EXPOSED 3 BITERS PN THIS SITE ALREADY YOU BETTER NOT BE THE 4th |
uppinnnn1......................................... ...ur jus a wack ass pussy dog ohhhh my names ice pick i expossedd thre... shut tha fuck up bitch u probably a fuckin computer nerd gettin all bitchy from not gettin a vote pussy ur record online dont mean shit in real life what u go around sayin im 29-5 online raps hahaha ur a bitch
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Voted For: JaC M. WrIgHt
both flows had strong metas but i felt JAC had more n his hit a lil harder Ice picks was tyght but JAC was just a lil better v/JAC vote on my battles DRAG~ON[P-S-A] VS ECKO(CS) http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=142722 definatfully(punchline) http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=142312 V0cab http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=141251 Jono http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=142463 Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Voted For: Ice Pick
I think ice pick took this one because of her consistant punches that were hitting extreamly hard. I like da punch about rubber baloon comdoms lol. This verse had the better flow punches structure and performance vote ice pik |
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NOT A CHICK what the hell isa up with this HOLY MOLY |
Voted For: Ice Pick
Daaaaamn! ...Ya'll Is Killin It... I'ma Tell Ya Sumthin Rite Now...I Wouldnt Like To Battle Ya'll.. Ya Both Hittin Hella Hard, An Ya Both Seem To Have TOP NOTCH Useage Of Ya Words... Ice Had Mad Punches, An His Structure Was Off The Chain, Humouress An Good Wordplay, All Round Style Was DOPE... 9/10 For That Verse ICE Jac, You Was Spittin FIYAH Too, I Couldnt Seperate Ya'll, Ya Had Killer Punches, Nice Strcuture An Good Wordplay, But Ya Lacked Humour.... So On The Simple Fact ICE Had Humouress Lines In The Verse Is The Reazon I'm Votin 4 ICE Good Lookin Tho'... One Of The Best Battles I Voted On, Loved It, Ya Both DOPE As Fuck... Return The Favor n Vote On My Battles P E A C E |
Voted For: JaC M. WrIgHt
Wow, this was a close one. Both of you had hella punches and some good multis also. Excellent wordplay from both of you as well, but JaC's punches came more consistently. Pick I liked the barber shop lie near the ed, but i your last 4 lines you tried to rhyme "E. coli" with "life, B" and that didn't really work too well. Or hey, maybe I just misread it, but this was one hell of a battle, good job both of you... Vote - JaC M. Wright Return the favor, honest votes only: http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=138941 |
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This was feedback posted for JaC M. WrIgHt
Just check'n out for new talent.
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This was feedback posted for Ice Pick
ice pick wins....
jac had moe clever lines and punches were better....but i caught him biting in a different battle so this battle really doesnt matter anymore does it (type ill and acoustic lines were nice) |
Voted For: Ice Pick
ice pick killed this battle i think his flow was jus way betta n vocab was nice his rhymes were iight n tha punchlines were iight to |
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need some votes come ppl quit bein so damn lazy!!!
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