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-Zone Out- 08-11-04 07:34 PM

Lonely Dreams, Selfish Nightmares
 
Nightmares haunted the man's sleep,woke up in cold sweats
Countless nights under the sheets,but he couldnt sleep yet.
Every night,he relived that day,that evil man's face
It will never go away, nothin can take it's place
When his wife was raped, and his kids was sliced in half
Blood bath, he'll never forget that ominous laugh
Slaughtered like cows and calfs,and for what reason?
Cause some sick man was jealous of the family's season
When they had fun and played,happiness was amongst
And the married couple haven't had a fight in months
So the lonely husband conteplated, on getting his revenge
Concetrated on, the best way to get even
For years he search for the killer, with no luck
Until one day, he spotted a familar truck
Dumped in the lake, to hide any evidence
Although it was useless to cops, to him it served great revelence
With the rope tied, he pulled the vehicle out of the drink
Checked the large pick up, to anything that will link
he life theft, finally, he'll be off the streets
He found it!, the weight on his heart was lifted
As he looked in the sun visor after he turned and flipped it
The final peice to the puzzle, as he glanced at the mirror
Vengence was his, now that he knew the identity of the killer
That same night,he walked upped the path to a dark house
Kicked open the door,with a vengful smirk on his mouth
Walked up stairs,to the room where he assumed the man resided
1 gun shot ended it all.........


...............he commited suicide.


After looking in the mirror, the man found out who the man was that killed his family.
It was himself, in a envious rage of his divorce to his wife.
After losing custody to his kids.
And seeing them being raised by another man.
He decided since he could not have them, no one else will.
He ended his lonely dreams.
His selfish nightmares.

Enhance 08-11-04 08:01 PM

Read Rules.
One open mic per day
Closed.

I'll open this tommorow.

-Zone Out- 08-12-04 02:58 PM

I didnt open the other you dumb ass.
it was already made along time ago.
boy, you are dumb as shit!

-Zone Out- 08-12-04 03:00 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Masked
Read Rules.
One open mic per day
Closed.

I'll open this tommorow.

you dumb ass baboon.
it says in your rules 2 open mics per day.
wow, your little power trip is making you look more like an idiot than you really are.

Enhance 08-12-04 03:08 PM

Does it moron?

Enhance 08-12-04 03:09 PM

You May Post One Open Mic Piece Per Day.
One Collab Will Also Be Accepted...But If You Have Too Many, You're Goin Down, Hoecake.
Any Other Threads You Create Will Be Closed

you fucking blind shit...

-Zone Out- 08-12-04 03:10 PM

2.You can only make 2 open mics a day because of these ruff tuff morons i see around making 10 opens mics per day

thats in your "important notice' thread.
now who's the blindshit.
since there is two different rules, I choose the rules I want to follow.
bitch.

-Zone Out- 08-14-04 08:42 PM

yeah, you better had re-opened it.
you jackass.

!Mc Merc! 08-14-04 10:48 PM

kyro, your a crybaby, wanna battle, and i will annoy if you dont

-Zone Out- 08-15-04 01:50 PM

^HELL NAH
YOU WOULD MERK ME WITH YOUR MERE PRESENCE.
Uppin.

Enhance 08-15-04 02:22 PM

& auctually i dint have to re-open this i just did so you would shut up.

optimized 08-15-04 02:28 PM

yo son that was hot son 4real and i feel that u got real deep son that flow was sick the lyricks was fire keep doing ya danm thing

-Zone Out- 08-16-04 08:09 AM

uppin for some more feedback
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YuNg_GuN 08-16-04 09:11 AM

nice shit yo

-Zone Out- 08-19-04 08:47 PM

word.
this was some "nice shit, yo"
wasnt it?
upping.

-Zone Out- 08-20-04 12:24 AM

upping this over trash.

Kry-O-Gene-X 10-30-04 12:05 AM

uppin this shit.
.................
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PrahJect 09-17-05 03:28 PM

this was good...keep it up likin the multies and the flow here

Zone Out 01-25-06 10:27 PM

uppin this old shit
lol @ the date

tornado480 01-26-06 12:21 AM

Sincere love can blend blood into kisses best fear thugs
They may not let go leave your coo-chee wet doe rubs
Thighs listen to club vibes oh he want to grub my pies
Wear loose perfumes that produce blooms in boy’s eyes
TORNADO they scream and beg for the cream between
My legs I stay a queen on edge, go to extremes with dream
Boy’s cock triggers to duty when they see vigor and beauty
My butt brisk and round even Chris Brown may try these fruity
Kisses, boys pause to kiss me but I have cause to disagree
Some flaws on their list of glee one boy threw a kiss and it miss me
TORNADO any way sitting in the park plenty blessed in a mini
Dress I’ve had it with publicity it just static electricity even Winnie
The Poodle get wet puppy dog sex and bark in the park after dark
Boy walks started to groove strong and move my bones and start
Like a chiropractor

the'holy1 01-26-06 10:52 PM

i like this, i do this kind of story telling raping too playa, i have a song with sort of a similar topic so this gets mad props, its always cool to see how a fellow lyricist has diffrent out comes in the song, diffrent words being used diffrent ways etc keep that shit up son


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