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Old 08-11-04, 07:34 PM   #1
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Lonely Dreams, Selfish Nightmares

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Nightmares haunted the man's sleep,woke up in cold sweats
Countless nights under the sheets,but he couldnt sleep yet.
Every night,he relived that day,that evil man's face
It will never go away, nothin can take it's place
When his wife was raped, and his kids was sliced in half
Blood bath, he'll never forget that ominous laugh
Slaughtered like cows and calfs,and for what reason?
Cause some sick man was jealous of the family's season
When they had fun and played,happiness was amongst
And the married couple haven't had a fight in months
So the lonely husband conteplated, on getting his revenge
Concetrated on, the best way to get even
For years he search for the killer, with no luck
Until one day, he spotted a familar truck
Dumped in the lake, to hide any evidence
Although it was useless to cops, to him it served great revelence
With the rope tied, he pulled the vehicle out of the drink
Checked the large pick up, to anything that will link
he life theft, finally, he'll be off the streets
He found it!, the weight on his heart was lifted
As he looked in the sun visor after he turned and flipped it
The final peice to the puzzle, as he glanced at the mirror
Vengence was his, now that he knew the identity of the killer
That same night,he walked upped the path to a dark house
Kicked open the door,with a vengful smirk on his mouth
Walked up stairs,to the room where he assumed the man resided
1 gun shot ended it all.........


...............he commited suicide.


After looking in the mirror, the man found out who the man was that killed his family.
It was himself, in a envious rage of his divorce to his wife.
After losing custody to his kids.
And seeing them being raised by another man.
He decided since he could not have them, no one else will.
He ended his lonely dreams.
His selfish nightmares.
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Old 08-11-04, 08:01 PM   #2
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Read Rules.
One open mic per day
Closed.

I'll open this tommorow.
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Old 08-12-04, 02:58 PM   #3
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I didnt open the other you dumb ass.
it was already made along time ago.
boy, you are dumb as shit!
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Old 08-12-04, 03:00 PM   #4
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Quote:
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Read Rules.
One open mic per day
Closed.

I'll open this tommorow.

you dumb ass baboon.
it says in your rules 2 open mics per day.
wow, your little power trip is making you look more like an idiot than you really are.
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Old 08-12-04, 03:08 PM   #5
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Does it moron?
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Old 08-12-04, 03:09 PM   #6
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You May Post One Open Mic Piece Per Day.
One Collab Will Also Be Accepted...But If You Have Too Many, You're Goin Down, Hoecake.
Any Other Threads You Create Will Be Closed

you fucking blind shit...
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Old 08-12-04, 03:10 PM   #7
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2.You can only make 2 open mics a day because of these ruff tuff morons i see around making 10 opens mics per day

thats in your "important notice' thread.
now who's the blindshit.
since there is two different rules, I choose the rules I want to follow.
bitch.
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Old 08-14-04, 08:42 PM   #8
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yeah, you better had re-opened it.
you jackass.
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Old 08-14-04, 10:48 PM   #9
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kyro, your a crybaby, wanna battle, and i will annoy if you dont
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Old 08-15-04, 01:50 PM   #10
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^HELL NAH
YOU WOULD MERK ME WITH YOUR MERE PRESENCE.
Uppin.
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Old 08-15-04, 02:22 PM   #11
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& auctually i dint have to re-open this i just did so you would shut up.
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Old 08-15-04, 02:28 PM   #12
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yo son that was hot son 4real and i feel that u got real deep son that flow was sick the lyricks was fire keep doing ya danm thing
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Old 08-16-04, 08:09 AM   #13
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uppin for some more feedback
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Old 08-16-04, 09:11 AM   #14
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nice shit yo
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Old 08-19-04, 08:47 PM   #15
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word.
this was some "nice shit, yo"
wasnt it?
upping.
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