Verbal Abuse vs J DOT
 

Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

this is the real one

Minimum posts to vote: 100

Check in by: 08-13-04 at 01:03 AM

Must drop verse in 15 minutes after check in.

J DOT has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-13-04 12:34 AM.

Verbal Abuse has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-13-04 12:37 AM.

J dot...

Erm, Its True Youve Beaten Me.
Well... Ive Elevated, And Im Back.

Good Luck.

Guuh Erm...

Sprinkling Hate n Herbs to Steak My Terms. It Would Bite To Have A Tie.
Its Bad To Lie. If You Ever Text A Veteran Verse, Be Sure To Prep Your Alliby.
I Scowered Roster To Roster, For JDOT's Tollerable Lyrics. Theres Few In The Mood.
No Wonder His Sig Dont Rep His Family Fued, These Members Have Crews In Their Crew.
This Much Is True, Your Just In The Rookie Division Of A Rookie Crew.
Cmon...Look At ch'You, You Cant Stand Up To Handle Business...The Pussy's You.
Check Their Forum For Bordem, Its Time To Put Ends To This Fam.
IDK How Their Shit Hits Fans? Your Beef Aint Even Beef...Its Spam.
Strippen n Tear, My Fingers Flippen n Scare. Voters Bring Sail To The Rips.
Gees, Getta Grip. Aint Got Time For Crew Battles...
Plant Fear n Hearts While Its Mere Depart. Ill Just Jot Down Rings.
JDot's Thoughts In A Blur...Just Block Out Things, n Fold Your Hand Before I Drop An Ace, And Have To Knock Out Kingz.


Ma Ma Ma....Merked.

I 'abuse'd this cat once, thought he got the message
He underrated me, when he gunna stop the guessing
Imma Take you out like old garbage, wrap the bag around yo head
Then take you to yo home and place you in yo bed
You'll die in yo sleep, cause of the words out of your mouth
'Verball'ly 'Abuse' pricks like you ass i council(cancel) em out
When you learn, you dont want it dawg, I'll chalk you up
Ill erase you, pat em together, have you coughing up dust
you aint respected, you own crew making me sigs
you still wouldnt 'Roc-A-Fella' if you was a Dipsett Kid
so stop yo act, you'll never be hard with yo fist
I sonned you twice, tell yo crew to put me on they Respect List

why everytime i get a link from yo group, then when i go back to it, the threads deleted...?!?...thats twice already

uppn this shit.......... lets get some votes...and vote on the bottom, weeks shameful rapper battle...thanx

upppn this shit peoplessssssssssssss

Voted For: Verbal Abuse

didn't care for verbal's structure but the personal's were hittin:

I Scowered Roster To Roster, For JDOT's Tollerable Lyrics. Theres Few In The Mood.
No Wonder His Sig Dont Rep His Family Fued, These Members Have Crews In Their Crew.

Check Their Forum For Bordem, Its Time To Put Ends To This Fam.
IDK How Their Shit Hits Fans? Your Beef Aint Even Beef...Its Spam.

don't get me wrong.. j dot's rhyme was cool but it didn't seem personal enough that's why i'm giving it to VA... both need to add more wordplay and multi's, metas... good shyt... VA barely got this

Voted For: J DOT

J Dot had some good personals, I like the line about his crew makin' you sigs. Verbal Abuse, you had some ok punches, but none really stood out to me. You should work on structure too, but no hate. Good battle to the both of you.
Vote - J Dot

Return the favor, honest votes only:
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Voted For: Verbal Abuse

verbal abuse:your verse was strong here, you had nice punches and multies, i liked the choice of creative and imaginitive words in this verse, i mean that it is different from what i'm used to seeing in frontlines, i can tell you know what your doing, i liked you opening lines and the personals against your opponent, i thought the spam line and your closer were best.....nice job
j dot: your verse had nice flow and structure, i just dont think it was as strong as verbal's verse, although i did like your last 3 lines, they were the strongest
Vote:verbal abuse due to wordplay,punches and strong vocab

Voted For: Verbal Abuse

real nice flow and very good punchlines u got this one man really good job
uppin 4 votes
CODEE vs. Slick Skillz
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=143034

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

GOOD LOOKN PEOPLE...uppn this battle...i remember everybody who vote for me, i return HONEST votes...i aint forgot bout yall...uppi this

Voted For: J DOT

ok this was close. so im gonna have to break it down.

verbal abuse:
Sprinkling Hate n Herbs to Steak My Terms. It Would Bite To Have A Tie.
Its Bad To Lie. If You Ever Text A Veteran Verse, Be Sure To Prep Your Alliby.
a little long but i liked it.

jdot:
You'll die in yo sleep, cause of the words out of your mouth
'Verball'ly 'Abuse' pricks like you ass i council(cancel) em out
hot word play.

verbal abuse:
Check Their Forum For Bordem, Its Time To Put Ends To This Fam.
IDK How Their Shit Hits Fans? Your Beef Aint Even Beef...Its Spam.
again u should have flowed it better but it was funny, played but still funny.

jdot:
When you learn, you dont want it dawg, I'll chalk you up
Ill erase you, pat em together, have you coughing up dust
i didnt see that comin...thas a good thing.

verbal abuse
Just Block Out Things, n Fold Your Hand Before I Drop An Ace, And Have To Knock Out Kingz.
i play poker, so i was feelin that.

jdot:
so stop yo act, you'll never be hard with yo fist
I sonned you twice, tell yo crew to put me on they Respect List
wasnt a punch but i thought it was a good way to end it.

verbal abuse:
besides that i feel like u had some filler but it still didnt flow that well. ur lines were streched.

jdot:
u had filler to but at least it flowed. n there wasnt as much.

personels::jdot
meta::VA
flow::jdot
punches::jdot
content::tie
wordplay::jdot
verbal could've got this wit betta flow. so watch out jdot
dont slack.
JDOT GETS THA VOTE

jus thought i should point out im not a dick rider cuz i voted for j dot
i broke that shit down.
no hate
no dickridin
good battle

lets get some votes
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...511487&posted=1
ice pick vs typical

good lookn, forget verbal abuse, he trippn, thats just like me saying everybody who votes for him is d/r, stop whining VB....lets get some EXPLAINED votes in here

Voted For: J DOT

verbal you had a nice drop but your lines seemed streched out and the made the verse choppy and hard tah flow...
your punches were unformed like you set them up but they didn't really hit though some of them connected but some seemed play'd like the spam line...
Jdot your verse was simple punches were clearer even though some were weak...
some lines had streched rime like you tried tah force it still got what you was sayin...
not the best battle but all the same ...
Stay up Stay active VOTE often...

Uppn make these mutha fuckas understand...aiyo, this is too good of a battle to get slept on, lets get some votes in here...lets go people

i return honest votes

must not be too sorry...aiyo, V.B. you used to be a cool cat, wuts up, why u bitchin now, if every vote i gets a dick ride to u, then my dick would have prolly broke off...stop bitchin, let the people vote...i aint askn none of these people to vote for me...once again stop bitchin...and its 2 more dick riders, i guess ill correct you...lol...c'mon people, lets sit this bitch to rest...need some votes on this battle

This was feedback posted for Verbal Abuse
 

stretched lines...they were really stretched..but was a good verse..

we dont need feedback, oh nevermind theres a 100 post block on there....aight, well thanx for checkn it out...uppn this, c'mon people, we need some votes on this

uppn this...we need some votes on this battle

Voted For: Verbal Abuse

Damn! you roasted the fuck out of this motha fucka..

Struture - this is all you lost on verbal, yo lines were really stretched and unappealing, j dot's weren't..

punchlines - you came out way harder than him, hias opener was weak as fuck, you came out strong..

wordplay, you have a lot more multies and rhymes were better, his were dr. suess basic...

personals, none stuck out, i guess that this i a tie..

vocab - every word you said had more meaning into it and on average was more scholoarly and sounded better with more syllables..

flow.. your multies helped you to take it, j dot's flow was basic, yours was smooth and sounded nice..

overall.. verbal abuse killed the shit out of this guy and i feel bad for him.. naw, on the real though, verbal, you took it, you had better flow, vocab and bpunchlines that were more creative, j dot, you need to elevate, a lot..

return favor in my thread, will you, thanx..
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=143487

yo,yo...im up, up, and lemme take this shit already

Voted For: J DOT

J DOT gets my vote...he had a Litte~bit on harder punches that connected...tha flow that was good wit it..and the structure was ok too..
Abuse....yo punches wasn't as hard J DOT's..the flow was ok...and same wit tha struct.
my vote goes to J DOT...peace...

good lookn....uppn this one...round 2 put to rest with the same results...hopefully...lets go

Voted For: Verbal Abuse

ok j-dot had a better flow and punches and disses were ok plus the council line was dope the verse was ok 4/10
verbal had hard ass punches and the ender was dope as fuck too good wordplay strture was a little streched and that hurt ya flow beef aint beef its spam lol that hit hard most of verbs shit hit real hard and thats why he gets my vote7/10

Voted For: Verbal Abuse

Verbal has this one! J dot you win on structure.... you both had good punches.... Verbal got wordplay and flow.... Verbal had more multis, And i thot i saw some good mettas in Verbals too.....

V/ Verbal Abuse

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