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Check in by: 08-21-04 at 09:12 PM

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Sonofisis#1 has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-18-04 09:18 PM.

My flow's bad for yo health like Salami & Bacon From Swines
Only way u'll post a coo verse is if u Copied & Pasted My Lines
Jus Take It & Stride, I win, I can careless what u Fools Say
You're not invinsible, yo record still has two L's, like Cool J
Yo lines aren't in shape, like houses built by drunk Architechs
If u had to eat an MC like me to live, you'll Starve To Death
My spits will leave you in a pickle like remnants of Cucumbers
U got 15 wins, nice, but 14 of em are from merkin Newcomers
I Abuse Suckers, You're just a Light Wieght, About to Fold
"Pound for Pound" I wiegh up to Platinum, u're Pounds of Coal
Face it kid, you'll never be able to come up with a Witty Verse
I wouldn't even bite into what u say if what u say Bit Me First
I came out the wound, "rippin bitches" since Birth Bitch! (Rip!)
It's like you found tons & blocks "fools gold"..
Coz You Have a whole lot of damn "Bars" that ain't Worth Shit
Yo "Lines" wouldn't even connect if they were "T1" Circuits

T1 Internet line Connection explains last punch..

lyricalflowz23 has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-19-04 09:45 AM.

^nice, uppin this

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Voted For: lyricalflowz23

lrical damn on point here good ass punches and disses your structure and flow is a little streched fixed that but your punchlines hit real hard here you went for blood from the first bar and killed him7/10
son you also had some good punches but they aint hit as hard ad flowz shits did the starve to death was nice the ender was trash as fuck good flow but yours was also kinda streched this was a pretty good battle son =5/10
but flowz wins with harder hitting punches

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Voted For: lyricalflowz23

Lyrical Got This One:

LryricalFlowz.....Structure Was Good....Flow Was Werkin Too......Punches were solid and connected hard...personals were tight.....Liked these lines....:
a yo, this kid is tellin the truth, he really can "spit" it in sooooo many ways,
Maybe that could be the reason you started a thread intitled "Is eminem gay?" (Hahahahahaha yeah i read that thread)
I'm kind of like puttin 'coffee' in the freezer, cuz I'll str8 'feeze' ur heat,
I'm sorry "SON" but please tell me how it feels to recieve your "#1" (Nice Wordplay)

Vote: LyricalFlowz23

I guess..

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Voted For: lyricalflowz23

both had good drops on the real. heres the breakdown:

lyricalflowz23-good punches and metas. i like the wordplay also.your structure got a lil streched again tho man so keep workin on that.that eminem gay line was scik tho and was basically the only personal in either verse that stood out. 8.15/10

Sono- u had really good structure and flow which is definatly your expertise. the wordplay lacked a lil bit and the metas did too. decent punches and ur personals were ok. i dont like at all when people use personals that arent correct and u sayin "U got 15 wins, nice, but 14 of em are from merkin Newcomers" was reallly not true. he merks these so called "vets" all the time. no hate. 7.5/10

v//lyricalflowz23

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Voted For: Sonofisis#1

nice all around you guys, props to both you, but here's the verdict
sono's strengths-punches, structures, flow.
sono's weaknesses-the way the 4 or so lines flow, kinda confusing.
this was a good verse, i loved this line right here.
You're not invinsible, yo record still has two L's, like Cool J


lyrical-nice verse but not enough straightr punch. not enough to win
a yo, SONO could be "Nas" and still not be able to even get "ONE MIC" in the "source",
hot line.

but you don't get this one.

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