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Phantom vs Ice Pick
Battle Rules:
12 - 16 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting No d/r, hate. due 1 hr after check in. Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 08-17-04 at 07:58 PM Must drop verse in 60 minutes after check in. |
Ice Pick has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-16-04 07:58 PM.
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I'm evictin'-ya-punches..best "hock ya' sPiT" for PENNIEZ at a Pawn shop
'dis Rook-ie so WEAK he couldn't "break" Knight{night} wit Bishopz on calm blockz battlin' PICKS dropz??.Phantom U pUUssy.."douche" ya' Raw sPiTz cause da only place U bringin' da FUNK bitch from is ya' Arm-Pitz assault U with Speed Stickz 'til ya' fate is a (Right) Guard-ed Secret like passwords I leave you like avy only its TUPAC spelled backwards Smash ur bladder-quick-into-waste. Corny ass style, half-tha-shit-ends-up-paste(d). Give u a window of opportunity and shatter-it-in-yo-face! kid My sik shotz produce-da-(blood)Stainz.."water" ya MELON..got Fruit-fa-Brainz but couldn't gain CLEARANCE.."infringe" upon ICE and i'll nuke-ya-frame recoup-da-LOOT-of-lamez who clearly aren't ready to "Pay-da-Price" in 'dis Community, i'm Godly..when we battle, U pray to- ICE Rip ya verse-on-will, u ain't a 3rd-my-skill. PICK curse-until blood is shed, got a thirst-4-kills.. Stop ridin my jock bitch..askin bout me, I'm type "person-ill." [personal] This hoe-disses-me.. man, theres no-escape-from-tha-kill.. Nunchucks like rotisserie when they "rotate-on-ya-grill." TUPAC SPELLED BACKWARDS TUPAC CAPUT |
Phantom has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-16-04 08:19 PM.
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you aint sick, ice prick, your names says your 'flows' are 'stiff'
keep grip and dont slip as i leave you hangin on an icy cliff this weak fuck freezes up when the beef heats up its hoes down g's up, so lay down and lemme put my feet up i pimp slap backwards this faggot ass rapper toss him out the window just like a candy wrapper you 'pick'-ed the wrong nigga to battle, your in deep trouble the heat that im puttin to to ya will leave u as a puddle you battle noobs for wins, you aint one of the best your weak, ribs shatter, lungs collapse, when you pound ya chest i didnt even merk you, this is a murder ya loser but its cool how your sig predicted ya future (skeleton) |
u had some nice wordplay but its hard for me to follow ur flow sometimes. i dont know how exactly to put it but its just a lil confusing....
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Voted For: Ice Pick
phantom them lines aint hit and your punches were weaker then jabs from a infant you need vocab and to reword alot of your disses still you had a good flow and strture so 3/10 ice good vocab your lines were kinda streched good ass wordplay and disses were slick your punches hit hard here also ending was whacked as fucked but you killed the rest of the verse 7/10 |
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Voted For: Ice Pick
Phantom- Good Flow, Good Structure Ok Punches Ice Pick- Harder Punches Ok Flow, ok Wordplay, And Ok Structure Punches- Ice Pick Flow- Phantom Wordplay-Ice Pick Metaphors- Phantom Structure- Phantom Originality- Ice Pick Final Vote-- Ice pick [b]Return Favor With Honest Vote: http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=142469 Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Voted For: Ice Pick
Yo...Ice Pick Lose The Quotations and Shit....Makes Your Verse Look Herbish....You Shouldn't Need To Point Out Ryhming Words and Punches.. But Besides That...Your Punches Were Pretty Hard and You Had Nice Wordplay. You Mos Def Killed This Cat. I'm Looking To Start A New Crew....So Holla At Me If Interested You Got Mad Potential and Skill. Vote - Ice Pick ~R~ |
Voted For: Ice Pick
ice pick won this....he had better word play an tha punches hit harder than phantoms Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
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Voted For: Phantom
chose winners verse.... you aint sick, ice prick, your names says your 'flows' are 'stiff' keep grip and dont slip as i leave you hangin on an icy cliff nice opener....good wordplay 7/10 this weak fuck freezes up when the beef heats up its hoes down g's up, so lay down and lemme put my feet up aight punch....kinda played 5/10 i pimp slap backwards this faggot ass rapper toss him out the window just like a candy wrapper basic punch...could of made it more interesting5/10 you 'pick'-ed the wrong nigga to battle, your in deep trouble the heat that im puttin to to ya will leave u as a puddle decent punch....needs better wordplay6/10 you battle noobs for wins, you aint one of the best your weak, ribs shatter, lungs collapse, when you pound ya chest nice punch....keep 'em coming7/10 i didnt even merk you, this is a murder ya loser but its cool how your sig predicted ya future (skeleton) dope closer....nice personal8/10 v/phantom http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=143293 please return favor^^^ |
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Voted For: Ice Pick
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[quote=Phantom] you aint sick, ice prick, your names says your 'flows' are 'stiff' keep grip and dont slip as i leave you hangin on an icy cliff ->>nah...weak opener this weak fuck freezes up when the beef heats up its hoes down g's up, so lay down and lemme put my feet up ->>this was filler...you gotta hit him hard esp in a battle this short i pimp slap backwards this faggot ass rapper toss him out the window just like a candy wrapper ->>this was filler too...get personal you couldve said this to anybody you 'pick'-ed the wrong nigga to battle, your in deep trouble the heat that im puttin to to ya will leave u as a puddle ->>you already did the ice/heat connection earlier in this battle...fillerish you battle noobs for wins, you aint one of the best your weak, ribs shatter, lungs collapse, when you pound ya chest ->>nah... i didnt even merk you, this is a murder ya loser but its cool how your sig predicted ya future (skeleton) ->>first decent personal in your verse...this was my fav bar out of yours ->>real average verse here...read the tutorial about personals...you have to come harder than that unless youre gonna battle noobs...it was a nice try but it just wasnt enough for the win here |
Voted For: Phantom
my vote is for phantom: hes was better to understand and as better word play. Ice Pick u need to work on ur flow ALOT! |
yeah on the real this was the first battle where i used this style i.e. sacrificing good punches for multis. obviously it doesnt work for me....
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ill punches+wack multies destroys ill multies+wack punches...stick with your original style...you gotta focus on the punch and if the multi wants to fit there then let it but dont force it. if it hits hard enough people ignore multis totally. they really only impress newbs.
ha just my two cents...ill peep some of your other shit i didnt mean to imply you were new it just looked like you were |
Voted For: Ice Pick
wordplay metahs tah ice def some parts was choppy but that had no effect on yah verse though i liked how the wordplay was though could use more personals though for both .... phantom you verse seemed simple compared tah pick's even though i like yours use of decent multis and some metahs his hits just came at yah harder... stay up stay active and VOTE often aight battle for both... |
Voted For: Phantom
phantom-good personals and nice play his name, ur punches could have been better but they hit hard enuff and ur flow was good ice pick-u had some iight punches and personals but ur verse was hard to follow with all the () ' and shit, ur flow could have been better..no hate v/phantom |
Voted For: Ice Pick
Punches - Ice picks wre more creative and oroginal, made me feel em more.. personals - neither of you had any good personals... vocab - Ice pick had some nice words that complimented his flow better then phantom.. flow - a tie i guess, flow was on point for both.. structure - phantom had less stretched lines and it was more solid.. Wordplay - Ice pick had more complex and steady rhymes.. overall - ice pick won because of better punches, better rhyme scheme, better vocab and a nice verse overall that over shadowed phantoms.. RETURN FAVOR WITH A VOTE IN MY BATTLE RIGHT HERE, THANK YOU.. http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=143487 |
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