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traxik vs SLicK~SKiLLz
Battle Rules:
5-15 lines No Crew Votes,dr,hate No Recycling No Biting,feeding Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 08-17-04 at 12:37 PM Must drop verse in 20 minutes after check in. |
SLicK~SKiLLz has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-17-04 12:08 PM.
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knock, knock, knock!
who is it? bang bang bang! ~trax~ what was u thinkin dont u know ill hang ur body on the fag ~racks~ sayin ur takin this shit over ~soon~ (in his profile) ill make u get merked more then kenny on the south park car~toon~ ill run ur little world over with a tonka ~toy~ even though hes 16 he still raps like a lil white ~boy~ my rymes are spittin sharp ~objects~ kill ~faggots~ slayin ~rejects~ standin on the street sayin WHOS ~NEXT!~ hey cat ur wastin my ~time~ dont u know im sicker the the ~lime~disease iller then eatin raw ~steak~ wastin this nigga so fast he wants a ~break~ ur ~fake~ this is a e-z win ima ~take~ i dont even need a heat ill stick u in the oven a ~bake~ your wannabe ~ass~ heres a lil advice quit rappin and go back to fishing for unexisting ~bass~ |
its supposed to say stick u in the oven to back not a bake my bad bro gl man peace
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what the hell
right im confused but yeh, im gonna accept in like 5 mins cos im off 2 get my lunch gud battlin bro |
Traxik has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-17-04 12:29 PM.
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20 minutes, just think, destruction that fast,
theres no contest here, this aint even a clash, Now if you dont understand that, you's illiterate bitch, I dont care anyways, wastin time battlin this snitch, So you a medium build? thats internet talk for Fat Fuck, And you from hell? thort that heat would burn that ass off, But hey man all's fair in love and war, but this aint war, Its called bullyin, bitch run yo ass back out the door |
Fuck that, lol keyed it up in 5 minutes, Good luck man I came weak so neva mind
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Voted For: SLicK~SKiLLz
No really ood punchlines in this battle or personals, so as far as disses and rhymes slick took it.. he had better wordplay and better disses.. traxik didn't rhyme sometimes, like Fat fuck and ass off doesn't rhyme.. slick came with some nice lines too that dissed him harder so slick gets my vote.. return favor with a vote in my thread, thAnx... here http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=143024 |
fat fuck and ass off do rhyme
think about it bein rapped |
This was feedback posted for Traxik
sorry, but your vocab was a bit basic to me like - "door n war" and "snitch n bitch". try to up your vocab man. no beef, just advice.
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Voted For: SLicK~SKiLLz
Slick Skills Took This With Harder Hittin Punches and Better Wordplay. Lose The Quotes and All That Shit....Its Herbish To Point Out The Rhyming Words and Punches. Besides That Just Elevate ...You Got Potential. Traxik....You Just Need To Quit Rapping. Vote - Slick-Skills ~R~ |
lol I suck, so fuck off and get a job
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thnx for the votes keep-em comin and im free agent i need a crew lol if u can hook me up
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Voted For: Traxik
give it 2 TRAX his structure was better which made his flow better no real punches but ok battle v/TRAX vote on my battles DRAG~ON[P-S-A] VS ECKO(CS) http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=142722 definatfully(punchline) http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=142312 V0cab http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=141251 Jono http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=142463 Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
yo uppin for voted everybody come on i'm makin it 50 with all text, yo good goin Slickz
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Voted For: Traxik
both i wasn' feelin to be honest but SS's verse felt like a chorse reading and rhyme skeem was played and elementary traxik punxhes werent good wither but i like his flow and struc so he wins vote/traxik Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
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uppin dis shite worrrrd::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::
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Voted For: SLicK~SKiLLz
traix no real disses or punches flow was hard to ctach and strture was ok3/10 slick good disses alot of them and some ok punches structure is streched flow is ok that hurt you but your punches and disses pulled you along5/10 Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
are you havin a fuckin joke, vote fuckers :cussing:
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vote vote vote vote vote vote vote vote vote vote vote anyone, someone, even tho you cant read this.............................. |
Voted For: Traxik
i gotta give it to traxik because for 1 he had a easier verse to read, and it was maad nuff easier to read. Alsobecause traxik hadharder punches, and slicks had u tryin to figure wat is he rhymin this with. and oh yea traxik we da hell did u getback. As u can see im doin big things now that Lethal sinz finished. PAUSE |
Voted For: SLicK~SKiLLz
give it 2 SLICK he had a better flow yo structure could use work but it was koo Traxik ur verse was lil 2 basic so i didn't give u da vote but keep flowin dawg vote on my battles in my sig |
Voted For: Traxik
SLICK: verse was hard to catch the flow, and rhyme sheme was MAD basic, no hard punches no metas, rookie type verse TRAX: wasnt all that great but it had a better flow and harder punches then your opponent ...some one has to win p.s. http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=144426 ^^ check that |
uppination station, check my bad self blaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah
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Voted For: SLicK~SKiLLz
he got sum bangin ryhems he flows dats a 10/10 n punchllines kickin tight dis all goin ta slick skills so holla |
Voted For: SLicK~SKiLLz
I gotta give this guy this battle because i think he had this battle overall a better vers eand wordplay was pretty good...the stuc was off but the punches made up for themn....i think trax had a good verse but i do not think it was good enough to win this battle...to many fillers...i think slick own this |
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