Battle Rules:

10 Lines
No Crew/Hate Votes
No Recycling/Biting
No Dickriding/Feeding


Minimum posts to vote: 100

Check in by: 08-14-04 at 10:36 PM

Must drop verse in 1440 minutes after check in.

lyricalflowz23 has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-11-04 10:40 PM.

Mimesis has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-13-04 02:41 PM.

^ Dude. I just keyed this up.

Fuck prewriting, my first day of school was on Thursday.. and ive had homework both days..

I didnt write shit before hand..

Voted For: Mimesis

aight...this battle was average.. both of you were trying to hard it seemed lol...it felt forced..and both of you tried to make the link create ur punch..thelink just helped ur punch,but the punch has to be there in the first place... personals werent set up right in my opinion...

mem:lol...2 things.. dont sneak a peak at the opponents verse...thats y this battle systemw as created..and i know how u did it lol -___-.. and correcting him in ur battle verse is kinda bitch move... let the voters decide, or just post it after you post ur verse..and 2, stop making looong explanations.. you shouldnt need em, unless ur punchline has to do with like an old tv series, or shit the average joe woulndt know...

lyrical: i felt like your whole wordplays and punchlines wer eplayed.. you didnt being ur A game here.. i felt like i could predict ya punch..and what i predicted was it wasent gonna be to exciting.. iv seen much much much better from you..

last thoughts: iv seen better from both.. but in this particualr battle, mem had the upper hand..

ps:mem that structure was hideos lol..

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^ Thanx for the vote..

Uppin.

Leave a link and ill hit it up..

Voted For: Mimesis

ok lyrical you know what happened you slacked and this dude got you lyrical ok punches and vocab but your shit was streched you know that though still decent drop 4/10
mem good punches and hard personals but your shit sucks on structure and flow is way off unless you twista but good punches got you this battle

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^ Thanx for the vote.

2-0 me.

Uppin for some more votes..

Voted For: lyricalflowz23

ok first of all mimesis it was kinda feedin when u said what mimesis meant so ur not following ur own rules. anywho good battle people. im votin for lyricalflowz23 on this one for harder punches and better flow. this doesnt mean ur verse was bad mimesis. lemme explain "I mean, even in the first sig that LF's reppin..
..Tupac is lookin off the page!" u tried to keep it personal and u get props for that but keepin it personal made the punch too weak. also "But at least LF shows 'Ill Intentionz'..
..when he tried out after it got shut down!" altho its true, ur not REALLY dissing him if the crew got shut dowm, ur dissin the crew. but anyways i cant tell either of yall to elevate but mimesis, if ur gunna go personal the whole battle, its gotta be real good. no hate. -1-

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^ I wasnt dissing the crew..

I was laughing at him for tryin out for a crew that was shut down..

I didnt diss the crew at all..

Whateva though..

Uppin.

Voted For: Mimesis

lyrical

I'll be your number one "Memisis" when i slam u with lines,
ur shit makes no sense that why u have 2 explain your rhymes:
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=139285
1st line eeh, 2ed line ok personal..

you wanna be "ILL"? i'll envade ur cells as if i was the "FLU"
pretty good record, but if i d/r'd as much as u, id win to,
first line preety good, 2ed aint connect... weak

your just a bitch, dont even claim that your the nicest vet,
afraid ima blemish ur record, thats why u havent accept'd the battle yet.
^^ um so what ya doing now??? weak....

nobody dies a virgin, thats the truth, cuz my rhymes r bout to fuck u,
cats all over ur challenge "if u lose, u leave",cuz we've seen enough of u,
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=140442
personal ok but could of hit way harder...

only thing that is "hot" in ur life, is the "heat" of "Arizona"
u've been "burned" more times than the tire burns at "daytona
ending was ok..

noting stood out good in this verse a few ok lines u lacked hard punches ya flow was decent average creativeness
6.0

mimesis


Lyrical's constantly takin blows........ the way ima just rattle his flows
But at least lyrical's able to show good drive..
..to try and get this battle closed!*
ok start... could of word it better...

He saddles his hoes........ as i leave him caged to just contain his rage
I mean, even in the first sig that LF's reppin..
..Tupac is lookin off the page!
ha preety good personal made me laugh...

Ive shot the stage.. ima just rip this bitch.... and start to slowly stare
But hurry the fuck up and get the message..
..cause even in Poetry, 'Nobody Cares'!**
decent personal...

Im easily movin him, like rolling chairs.. and just brutally cut this clown
But at least LF shows 'Ill Intentionz'..
..when he tried out after it got shut down!***
ha another preety good personal

Whats around his shit?... Im the whole man, while hes screwed at half
But when the talk goes to the best here..
..all LF can do is laugh!****
decent ending...

had spme preety good personals decent diss flow good and creativeness was not bad...
8.0

vote.. mimesis just hit harder and had better personals...

Voted For: Mimesis

Memisis- Good Punches, I Hate That Type Of Structure But Makes Punches Hit Good, Flow Was Decent----

Lyrical Flows- Punches Didnt Hit As Hard, Had A Metaphor Or Too, Structure I Liked More-

Punches- Mimesis
Personals- Mimesis
Flow- Lyrical
Wordplay- Niether
Metaphors- Lyrical
Structure- Lyrical
Originality- Mimesis

Final Vote----Mimesis

Overal Harder Verse-----

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