Demon Pyrokronix vs Elusiv G
 

Battle Rules:

10 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

For some reason the other battle was fucked up and I lost 5-0 for some reason. Maybe because you gave me 15 mins to post my verse, wtf? I was having dinner and when I came back I'd lost 5-0. WTF?

Anyway just copy your other verse in our wierd battle.

post 1 hr after check in.

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 08-21-04 at 08:33 AM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

Demon Pyrokronix has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-18-04 08:33 AM.

Elusiv G has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-18-04 08:39 AM.

Yo... yo... yo...

You need a lesson in elevation/ guess I can be your assistant,
Coz your skillz are like your record/ basically none existent,
"Hey I'm in Real Skillz", ya too busy frontin like you're a G...
To notice the only elusiv thing to you is victory, (Elusiv G)
You're too myopic to realize, but to the world it's aparant,
How can ya be a gangsta when you're fake as Chris Clarrent? (Tarrent lookalike),
But being bereft of talent you're bout to get downed like a tonic,
I mean you couldn't beat Merk, what chance you got gainst the Kronic?
Coz in relation to ya skillz, you're life is short and stumpy,
With you in my land, I'm shamed to be born in this country. (England)

Demon Pyrokonix thinks he and his rhymes are demonic
He must be truly fucked up, cos messin' wit me is psychotic
I'll stick a steak through his heart and watch him turn to dust
Ashes to ashes, earth to earth, all for kicking up a fuss
I've spent years training to slay beasts like you
Years of battling, rhyming jus to make sure in one shot ur through
Cos i dont like it when wars drag on, my intellectual rhymes
finish you, and leave u to cry
Only one more thing to say bitch and thats......bye bye

Ah his record is 1-0 now because of what I explained in "can you sort this out please", but back before that it was 0-0.

Myopic means blind and we are both from the same country.

This was feedback posted for Demon Pyrokronix
 

good verse demon, liked all of it to be honest lol, keep up the good work.

Voted For: Demon Pyrokronix

yo...nice verse demon, in my honest opinion you took this one...not a crew vote, just feed...Elisive G...did you not notice how it was supposed to be 10 lines, not 8 and a half...even if demon did terrible...he would still win by default because Elusiv's verse wanst long enough...but you did awsome demon...so therefore should have no problem merkin this bitch...good job

My bad man...I accidently hit vote instead of feed...i will tell the mods to clear that up...honest mistake...


Removed

Aight, Spek how come you ain't on msn?

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Hey y'all the original battle was 8-10 lines wen me n demon set it up. Anyway vote and vte porper we dnt want no dq'd votes aight. Peace

Voted For: Demon Pyrokronix

nice battle
punches-Demon
prsanols-demn evnt htogh they werent tha best
multis-dedmon
opener- tie
closer-demon
structure tie
aiight so emon got this one no hate he had better everythang man and that closer was wak elusiv come on man good battle tho.... return tha favor!!!!!!!!!!!111

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=142741

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=143613

Voted For: Demon Pyrokronix

hey man good rhymes ..................................8.7

Thanx for voting guys...

Uppin for more votes...

Uppin... c'mmon people vote god damn it...........!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Uppin c'mmon vote for fucks sake guys. 2 more votes and he's K.Oed

Voted For: Demon Pyrokronix

WACK BATTLE DEMON CAME HARDER WITH DA PUNCHEDS AND NICE PERSONALS

G U ONLY HAD FLOW WHICH IS GOOD BUT MAKE YO PUNCHES HIT AN LIL HARDER

Yo Demon Return An Favor In 4blood2hound Or One Of My Battles In Da Sig

~peace~

kk c'mmon guys 1 more vote for K.O.

UPPIN............................................. ...................................

This was feedback posted for Demon Pyrokronix
 

both were good. Demon had more and better punches and personals. "You need a lesson in elevation/ guess I can be your assistant,
Coz your skillz are like your record/ basically none existent," haha. Elusiv u werent bad, but just not as good as Demon. your rhymes were elementary. but still nice battle

Voted For: Demon Pyrokronix

ending the killing..... dp just str8 up took it....
he hit harder and vocab was alot stronger....nice metas....

elusive u had some nice stuff just need to word it better.... but just wasnt feeling it as much.....

v/ demon

no beef good battle \/\/ return favors