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6 - 12 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
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NO DR NO BULLSHIT NO beaf
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Check in by: 08-19-04 at 03:10 PM

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~Ku$tUm-Im@gE~ has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-19-04 02:48 PM.

afropimp has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-19-04 02:49 PM.

Im battlin a newbee cat bout kustomize ur image
Im run yo ass like Marion Shirley does tha 100 yard scrimmage*
no one expects u to win// u couldnt block this verse if ur cpu was on pimp defend
we all no u aint hard but u could at least pretend// to cotend
with tha lyrical controvery i spit// like a pearled blunt my shit hits**
this mite blow ur mind// like smokin dro all da time
my flow carries a certain type of complexity// tha shit that ends ur lifes expectancy
u couldnt be hot if u were strung on extacy***
get on my level & u still couldnt be next 2 me
u must not no im tha best there be



*gold medalist in tha hundred meter dash
**a pearled blunt is a nice rolled blunt that hits real good
***X raises ur body heat big time

that last line was an accident man but its str8 ne way

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uppin for kustom

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yo here we go


Afro couldnt see Kustum Im@ge...|if he painted a picture, so ths bitch is finished...| becuz ur not getting a vote in this match like a presidental scrimmage...| 1

My flow is vintage/\...| K.I. is like a bail enforcer the way i cutting short ya sentence...| i'll leave pimp not gainin a yard like good defences...| my punches leave him more distorted than tornado touched fences....| 2

Im confussing him quick...|my verse leave ya scratchin ya head like a pube on ya dick...| you couldn't controll ''Image'' if u was abusin tha click...| 3 [t.v remote. think about it.]

Afro not passing ''kustums'' like hes mexican...|u suck at audio so stick to text again...| u couldnt spit ill if u was digesting men...| 4 [cum]

~finisher~

my punches leave this pimp with more black eyes than peas on elephunk...|ur whack so dont post ya verse b/c it wont phase me chump...|b/c ya lines more played than all-star mcgrady dunks...| 5

ask me if u dont understand

Voted For: ~Ku$tUm-Im@gE~

give it 2 K.I. his wordplay was
tyghter n his flow was better
n his punches hit harder
n AFRO Marion Jones not Shirely dawg
plus ur flow didn't really keep me
interested it was alrite dough
v/K.I.
vote on my battles
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http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=142312

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http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=141251

Jono
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=142463

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uppin it was marion shirley too i just looked it up for that line man no hate

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uppin for them votes come on now

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1-0 still uppin thanx for vote ..... nice drop afropimp keep em votes coming

Voted For: afropimp

YO HERES MY VOYE FOR BETTER PUNCHES AFROPIMP
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Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

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DUn duN dUn.......

Voted For: ~Ku$tUm-Im@gE~

Opener - Neither were punches
Closer - Images was hard! afro's was self-glorified
Punches - Images threw bombs, afro came weak
Personals - Neither had any
Structure - Images was really neat and clean, afros was a little sloppy and started new sentences in the same line as the ones before
Vocab - definatly image, nothin special in afros
Metas - Both used so many, tie
Multies - Image busted left and right

No hate afro, im just giving my honest opinion. I think you need to elevate Punches, structure, and vocab. You had some alright stuff inyour verse too, dont get me wrong...but I was feelin images a lot more. Image, very well done man, you had really hard punches, great structure and nice multies that flowed well. Only thing I can really say about yours is try using personals as well as hard punches...again, good job....