Poet vs ShackleS
 

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Check in by: 08-18-04 at 11:02 AM

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hours rofl..... *typo

I meant minutes...........

ShackleS has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-18-04 10:54 AM.

Poet has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-18-04 10:55 AM.

word....aiight, rippin this 'nobody' MC thats commin against me..

Its fact, that this love 'shack' aint meant to be hard.. hes lyrically mad wack..
generically bad n off track.. cat's like cards.... but hes short 51 in the pack..(stupid)
son.. your 'less' then good rap..u cant cope..n usin ~ symbols dont make ya dope..
too fuken simple..take note..this fagget newb'll be hung.. n poets here to 'show him the rope'..
like the pope.. your shits old n played.. but i admit..your a 'G'..*cough* as in 'gay'..
pics of pac n 50 with no shirt.. we know ya games.. u wishin u in that pic like a 4way..
fuken homo.. ya words me laugh.. diff is ya verse that i peeped..it makes me wanna sleep..
these....fakes be on the creep.. fuck this bitch MC.. 1-2..here, take another L from me..
ya failin please.. 1-3 is ya new shit.. ya teeth rattles in these shit battles..
i cant do a good personal... wait, yeh i can-> "who the fuck is this kid shackles?"

aiight quick explenations cuz im runnin outta time..
show you the rope(s) <-like sayin ill skool you
admit your a G = G-unit is why i said that.. (fiddy in his sig)
his recs 1-2
"who the fuck is this kid shackles" <- sayin hes nobody...

aiight vote bitches........

~Callin his mum a hoe he'd say it was tha truth~
~I'd drop a ingenius verse but i dun wanna get you to confused~
~Droppin rhymes that you'd think were riddles~
~Askin you to compete is a bit too much guys gettin played like a fiddle~

~Poet writin nursery ryhmes fo little school kids~
~Flows like a mountain punches WROTE BY FLIDS~ comin up short

~iMMA GIVE THIS GUY A BRAKE LET THIS GUY OFF~
~lIKE BUTTER AND WET CAKE GUYS GONE SOFT~

Lmao off good verse had to write mine quick didn't realis you set it for ten mins.............wrote that shyt in like 5 mins....................thnks for tha loss

aiight.. its all good... i came pretty wack on this one..

fuken writers block, but anyway, gluck with the votes n lets get this thing finished.

5 minutes? it said on mine there was like 3 minutes to go when i dropped. i thought i was about to miss it. oh well..

Yo wrote that in 3 mins shuddup man......lol.....well it was still a way better drop than mine.............

11:10 the verses needed to be in
11:07 is when i dropped..

and you dropped like 20 seconds after me.......but ay enough of the small talk lets get votes............................

uppin...............................
drop links when your done voting.....

Voted For: Poet

lmao...poet killed you man... he had the punch, the vocab, basicly everything...

Shackles...work on first writting as much lines as u can..cuz ur verse was to short..neone coulda beat'n u... also try to get personals or jst stronger punches...

vote: poet

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This was feedback posted for Poet
 

yo poet..im sinister... can u just vote in dis battle instead...

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=143261

thanx

no probs man..

uppin for more votes to finish this.

Voted For: Poet

ok shackles that sucked hard no good punches or disses that hit hard your flow was ok strture was streched 3/10
poet good diisses your vocab can use improvement but good wordplay and disses punches connected but i think you couldve worded um better 6/10
vote-poet

Voted For: Poet

Poet gets this easy. Shackles verse was horrible. Garbage dogg. Elevate. Your shit is way to basic. Although P had a bad structure, I think he definitly got Shackles in the overall content and disses in his verse. Poet wins this with harder punches. Good shit.

Vote-Poet

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Voted For: Poet

Opener - Poet...I thought it was good
Closer - Poet...kinda weak but a lot better than Shackles
Structure - Neither...both were horrible
Multies - Poet...he had them bustin lefrt an right
Metas - Shackles...Poet didnt really have any
Vocab - Shackles...Poet's was pretty basic

Both verses were pretty weak in my opinion but Poets was less weaker, although the formatting could use some help...

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Voted For: Poet

Aight im goin 4 Poet on this 1 because i felt his verse was stronger.

I think u came quite hard on this however ya stuck on the gay subject and it's kinda played but u used it to good effect playin on his sig n all...i feel thought the only thing ShackleS got ya on was the structure...flow was even both readable but the punches and personals went to Poet ShackeS an aight verse but aight never won the battle...u need to come harder with your punches and personals perhaps u need to take sum time to work on them and come back u'll hit harder and get mo wins but a nice try.

RTF on ma sig