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~Ku$tUm-Im@gE~ vs afropimp
Battle Rules:
6 - 12 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting NO DR NO BULLSHIT NO beaf Good luck Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 08-19-04 at 03:10 PM Must drop verse in 150 minutes after check in. |
~Ku$tUm-Im@gE~ has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-19-04 02:48 PM.
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afropimp has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-19-04 02:49 PM.
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Im battlin a newbee cat bout kustomize ur image
Im run yo ass like Marion Shirley does tha 100 yard scrimmage* no one expects u to win// u couldnt block this verse if ur cpu was on pimp defend we all no u aint hard but u could at least pretend// to cotend with tha lyrical controvery i spit// like a pearled blunt my shit hits** this mite blow ur mind// like smokin dro all da time my flow carries a certain type of complexity// tha shit that ends ur lifes expectancy u couldnt be hot if u were strung on extacy*** get on my level & u still couldnt be next 2 me u must not no im tha best there be *gold medalist in tha hundred meter dash **a pearled blunt is a nice rolled blunt that hits real good ***X raises ur body heat big time |
that last line was an accident man but its str8 ne way
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uppin for kustom
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yo here we go
Afro couldnt see Kustum Im@ge...|if he painted a picture, so ths bitch is finished...| becuz ur not getting a vote in this match like a presidental scrimmage...| 1 My flow is vintage/\...| K.I. is like a bail enforcer the way i cutting short ya sentence...| i'll leave pimp not gainin a yard like good defences...| my punches leave him more distorted than tornado touched fences....| 2 Im confussing him quick...|my verse leave ya scratchin ya head like a pube on ya dick...| you couldn't controll ''Image'' if u was abusin tha click...| 3 [t.v remote. think about it.] Afro not passing ''kustums'' like hes mexican...|u suck at audio so stick to text again...| u couldnt spit ill if u was digesting men...| 4 [cum] ~finisher~ my punches leave this pimp with more black eyes than peas on elephunk...|ur whack so dont post ya verse b/c it wont phase me chump...|b/c ya lines more played than all-star mcgrady dunks...| 5 ask me if u dont understand |
Voted For: ~Ku$tUm-Im@gE~
give it 2 K.I. his wordplay was tyghter n his flow was better n his punches hit harder n AFRO Marion Jones not Shirely dawg plus ur flow didn't really keep me interested it was alrite dough v/K.I. vote on my battles DRAG~ON[P-S-A] VS ECKO(CS) http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=142722 defnatfully(punchline) http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=142312 V0cab http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=141251 Jono http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=142463 |
uppin it was marion shirley too i just looked it up for that line man no hate
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uppin for them votes come on now
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1-0 still uppin thanx for vote ..... nice drop afropimp keep em votes coming
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Voted For: afropimp
YO HERES MY VOYE FOR BETTER PUNCHES AFROPIMP RETURN DA FAVOR http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=143733 Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Voted For: ~Ku$tUm-Im@gE~
Opener - Neither were punches Closer - Images was hard! afro's was self-glorified Punches - Images threw bombs, afro came weak Personals - Neither had any Structure - Images was really neat and clean, afros was a little sloppy and started new sentences in the same line as the ones before Vocab - definatly image, nothin special in afros Metas - Both used so many, tie Multies - Image busted left and right No hate afro, im just giving my honest opinion. I think you need to elevate Punches, structure, and vocab. You had some alright stuff inyour verse too, dont get me wrong...but I was feelin images a lot more. Image, very well done man, you had really hard punches, great structure and nice multies that flowed well. Only thing I can really say about yours is try using personals as well as hard punches...again, good job.... |
Yo, please give me an honest vote/feed as I have just done for you, help us close this thing... http://community.rapverse.com/showb...t=143096&page=2
Dont sleep... |
aight i will return a vote for all 3....thanx...for votes 2-1 still uppin
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still uppin stop sleepin drop some votes
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uppin for honest votes nice drop kustom ill holla at tha leader to see if u can join aiight?
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Voted For: afropimp
afro took this 1 easy punches hit harder srry it took so long dawg VOTE FOR AFRO kustom image ya did iight no hate but he took this 1 dawg ya had sum gd punches 2 Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Voted For: afropimp
yo kustum image elevate we expect newbs to be wack vote= Afropimp Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
break down votes more but for real dawg i would murk u
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uppin for honesty i return tha favors fa sho
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Voted For: ~Ku$tUm-Im@gE~
Aight this was a tight battles guys, good job on it. Afro Pimp: Nice verse, good solid opener and good flow as well. Dunno bout your closer though, weak as hell. Reminded me of Me and Rabbit when we where newbs. Kustom Image: Good solid verse as well. "Afro not passing ''kustums'' like hes mexican...|u suck at audio so stick to text again...| u couldnt spit ill if u was digesting men...| ". This was prolly the best line of the battle, good verse. All god bars and punches. Afro not passing ''kustums'' like hes mexican...|u suck at audio so stick to text again...| u couldnt spit ill if u was digesting men...Afro not passing ''kustums'' like hes mexican...|u suck at audio so stick to text again...| u couldnt spit ill if u was digesting men... V/ Kustom image because he just took this with harder punches. Afro lost it for me on his closer.... which was weak and played... |
Voted For: afropimp
Was pretty close, but I didn't like the fact that KI had a few broken lines.. Both were hittin' fairly hard, both had decent flow and structure.. I think ya'll could've came a little harder in those areas.. Was hard to call, but I'ma give this one to AFRO... he was a little bit more consistant, and that little bit makes a huge difference in a close battle.. much respect to both of ya'll tho.. v/AFRO |
good votes all 3-1 still uppin
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This was feedback posted for ~Ku$tUm-Im@gE~
Kustum Image Nice Punches And Flow And Personal Theres Nothin To It
Kustum-image Got Dis I Cant Raise Da Bar But Iam Lift And Feedback ~peace~ |
Voted For: ~Ku$tUm-Im@gE~
this was close but i was feelin K.I.'s flow more...he came harder with the punches and had more and better personals. Your structure was aight, but couldve been better...you had some creative lines in there that kept me thinkn and had my jaw droppin AP-yo verse was aight, but didnt come as hard as K.I.'s did, you lacked in personals, and your punches werent too good, but your all around flow was coo...i like how you got yo own lil style, its coo...good flow, but keep elevating drop votes on the below linked battles plz -1- |
man all yall half ass voters dogg that shit pisses me off if u gonna vote explane it a lil more dam man uppin
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Voted For: ~Ku$tUm-Im@gE~
Im battlin a newbee cat bout kustomize ur image Im run yo ass like Marion Shirley does tha 100 yard scrimmage* --ok opener, no real punch no one expects u to win// u couldnt block this verse if ur cpu was on pimp defend we all no u aint hard but u could at least pretend// to cotend --stretched, simple, no real punch with tha lyrical controvery i spit// like a pearled blunt my shit hits** --ehhhh,no! this mite blow ur mind// like smokin dro all da time --no again my flow carries a certain type of complexity// tha shit that ends ur lifes expectancy --ya killing me.. no punches at all u couldnt be hot if u were strung on extacy*** get on my level & u still couldnt be next 2 me u must not no im tha best there be --terrible closer, no punch, no personals,no metas, very limited multi's w/bad usage... structure was completely flawed 3/10 Afro couldnt see Kustum Im@ge...|if he painted a picture, so ths bitch is finished...| becuz ur not getting a vote in this match like a presidental scrimmage...| 1 --weak punch, but good setup line... plus it sounded too similar to the other dude's line My flow is vintage/\...| K.I. is like a bail enforcer the way i cutting short ya sentence...| i'll leave pimp not gainin a yard like good defences...| my punches leave him more distorted than tornado touched fences....| 2 ---this was going real good until the last line Im confussing him quick...|my verse leave ya scratchin ya head like a pube on ya dick...| you couldn't controll ''Image'' if u was abusin tha click...| 3 [t.v remote. think about it.] --again, good until the punch was thrown(last line)...we woulda never thought about a remote control if ya hadn't said something... make ya punches connect Afro not passing ''kustums'' like hes mexican...|u suck at audio so stick to text again...| u couldnt spit ill if u was digesting men...| 4 [cum] ---ya setups are good but once again ya end ya lines with a weak punch...not to mention it was played ~finisher~ my punches leave this pimp with more black eyes than peas on elephunk...|ur whack so dont post ya verse b/c it wont phase me chump...|b/c ya lines more played than all-star mcgrady dunks...| 5 ---Weak closer, ok structure throughout, work on punches, where's ya personals, overall better verse 5/10 both you guys still need to elevate but KI has got a lot more potential... i see him getting good real soon if he takes the advice of everyone that drops him some feedback |
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