AutoMATIK™ vs J DOt
 

Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 08-23-04 at 04:35 PM

Must drop verse in 60 minutes after check in.

J DOT has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-20-04 04:42 PM.

AutoMATIK™ has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-20-04 04:43 PM.

i spit acid, niggas cant stop the wrath of me
i dont need to come fully loaded, i'll win with just half of me
its a catatrophy, how i autoMATIK'ly merk this coward
but yo 'game's over' like 'flip', its time to hit da showers
I'll devour ya lost dreams, put you on a merking team
then lyrically rape this dude, get him off of this scene
Im sick of these mediocre rappers, mainly this dude
He sends one punchline, i'll send him a fistfull
Your lines are more worn-out then homeless folks shoes
And your brains more dead-weight than killers drinking boo's
Your not convincing...say that shit in yo head
My verbal scheme's will knock you out, prepare to call up the meds

no we dont get it...naw, sick drop...uppn

Voted For: AutoMATIK™

ok:
auto: nice verse, i liked your flow and your punches were strong here, you had good wordplay and some nice personals, liked your opener and your closing lines as well, you hit hard
j dot: i liked your verse as well, but i dont think your punches hit as hard as auto's, but overall good job....

Voted For: J DOT

Punches- J-Dot
Personals- Automatik... a few either way i just like the way automatik used die only tryin
Flow- Neither
Wordplay- J-dot...flip n game over was nice
Multis- automatik
Metaphors- neither
Structure- J-dot
Originality- J-dot
Vocab- automatik

aight good lookn for the vote, i'll return a HONEST one....c'mon people lets get some votes in here

Voted For: AutoMATIK™

Automatik get my full vote his was good
he has very good punches and very nice personals that i understnd cos i read it about 6 times and your structure was a lil overstreched but it ok it was good
jdot was ok but didnt come as hard he had some ok lines but automatik came harder

Automatik you never return bvote please do
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...d.php?p=1502664

aight...i return a vote on your battle, even if you didnt vote for me, just cause you came in here, I return HONEST votes, dont worry...thatnx for voting....uppn this

Voted For: AutoMATIK™

Was pretty close.... but I didn't like the fact that JD had a few broken lines.. Both were hittin' fairly hard, both had decent flow and structure.. I think ya'll could've came a little harder in those areas.. Was hard to call, but I'ma give this one to Auto... he was a little bit more consistant, and that little bit makes a huge difference in a close battle.. much respect to both of ya'll tho..

v/Auto

Voted For: AutoMATIK™

Damn I have to give it to you Auto, you took this. Some solid punches in there... J Dots was aight as well... just didn't come acros as hard.

I don't think I'm wrong in thinking J Dot's in my crew so I'm not voting.. just feedbacking

Guys can you cancel that vote please? I meant to click on feedback but instead clicked on vote... damn... someone sort it out.

Voted For: AutoMATIK™


i spit acid, niggas cant stop the wrath of me
i dont need to come fully loaded, i'll win with just half of me
5/10
its a catatrophy, how i autoMATIK'ly merk this coward
but yo 'game's over' like 'flip', its time to hit da showers
4/10
I'll devour ya lost dreams, put you on a merking team
then lyrically rape this dude, get him off of this scene
5/10
Im sick of these mediocre rappers, mainly this dude
He sends one punchline, i'll send him a fistfull
5/10
Your lines are more worn-out then homeless folks shoes
And your brains more dead-weight than killers drinking boo's
4/10
Your not convincing...say that shit in yo head
My verbal scheme's will knock you out, prepare to call up the meds
5/10

Punches were played and simple and ya wordplay wasent really there u could elevate and use some complexity in ya verse and that will make it 10 times better


I Spit Fluently Wit Verbs Drippin From The ‘Veins Like Rain’
Demolishin J DOT Wit Swift Kicks To The Splein ‘Wit Over-Raged Pain’
6/10
Just Watch This Clown … I Beat Niggas With ‘Wide Open Violence’
Your Rhymes Don’t Compare To Mine.Beating Me? You Can ‘Just Die Only Tryin’
6/10
You’re Not An Emcee … Im Too Brutal I Beat Niggas and Steal ‘Triple The Heist’
‘I’ll Ripple Ya Life’ And Battling Me You’ll Fall Quicker Than ‘Cripples On Ice’
7/10
You’ll Get ‘Wrapped Quick’ When I Make Yo Vision Blurry From My ‘Quick Page’
And You’ll Get Turned Like ‘Back Flips’ When I Reach In Yo Body And Pawn Yo ‘Rib Cage’
5/10
Im Sick You’ll Get Crunched. So The Cops Can Search Yo Body To ‘Find Notes’
You Hot? DOT Will Only Be Felt By Winning A Battle From ‘Blind Votes’ **
8/10

Some punches were played that ive heard a million times but ya wordplay and complexity was alright now ya best drop seen alot better from u but it was enough 2 get the job done
nice structure and choice of vocab