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J DOt 1 16.67%
AutoMATIK™ 5 83.33%
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Old 08-20-04, 04:35 PM   #1
AutoMATIK™
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From: Chapter 4
AutoMATIK™ vs J DOt

IP: 23CC 11AC

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Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 08-23-04 at 04:35 PM

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Old 08-20-04, 04:42 PM   #2
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J DOT has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-20-04 04:42 PM.
 
Old 08-20-04, 04:43 PM   #3
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AutoMATIK™ has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-20-04 04:43 PM.
 
Old 08-20-04, 05:03 PM   #4
M-Eazy
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From: Mackamento
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i spit acid, niggas cant stop the wrath of me
i dont need to come fully loaded, i'll win with just half of me
its a catatrophy, how i autoMATIK'ly merk this coward
but yo 'game's over' like 'flip', its time to hit da showers
I'll devour ya lost dreams, put you on a merking team
then lyrically rape this dude, get him off of this scene
Im sick of these mediocre rappers, mainly this dude
He sends one punchline, i'll send him a fistfull
Your lines are more worn-out then homeless folks shoes
And your brains more dead-weight than killers drinking boo's
Your not convincing...say that shit in yo head
My verbal scheme's will knock you out, prepare to call up the meds
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Old 08-20-04, 05:21 PM   #5
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From: Chapter 4
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I Spit Fluently Wit Verbs Drippin From The ‘Veins Like Rain’
Demolishin J DOT Wit Swift Kicks To The Splein ‘Wit Over-Raged Pain’
Just Watch This Clown … I Beat Niggas With ‘Wide Open Violence’
Your Rhymes Don’t Compare To Mine.Beating Me? You Can ‘Just Die Only Tryin’
You’re Not An Emcee … Im Too Brutal I Beat Niggas and Steal ‘Triple The Heist’
‘I’ll Ripple Ya Life’ And Battling Me You’ll Fall Quicker Than ‘Cripples On Ice’
You’ll Get ‘Wrapped Quick’ When I Make Yo Vision Blurry From My ‘Quick Page’
And You’ll Get Turned Like ‘Back Flips’ When I Reach In Yo Body And Pawn Yo ‘Rib Cage’
Im Sick You’ll Get Crunched. So The Cops Can Search Yo Body To ‘Find Notes’
You Hot? DOT Will Only Be Felt By Winning A Battle From ‘Blind Votes’ **

**His Name Is J-DOT. Dot-brail-blind votes? Get it ? **
 
Old 08-20-04, 05:37 PM   #6
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no we dont get it...naw, sick drop...uppn
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Old 08-20-04, 06:33 PM   #7
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Voted For: AutoMATIK™

ok:
auto: nice verse, i liked your flow and your punches were strong here, you had good wordplay and some nice personals, liked your opener and your closing lines as well, you hit hard
j dot: i liked your verse as well, but i dont think your punches hit as hard as auto's, but overall good job....
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Old 08-20-04, 07:44 PM   #8
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up!
 
Old 08-20-04, 10:46 PM   #9
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zzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
 
Old 08-21-04, 09:08 AM   #10
Acuity
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Voted For: J DOT

Punches- J-Dot
Personals- Automatik... a few either way i just like the way automatik used die only tryin
Flow- Neither
Wordplay- J-dot...flip n game over was nice
Multis- automatik
Metaphors- neither
Structure- J-dot
Originality- J-dot
Vocab- automatik
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Old 08-21-04, 10:23 AM   #11
M-Eazy
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aight good lookn for the vote, i'll return a HONEST one....c'mon people lets get some votes in here
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Old 08-21-04, 12:02 PM   #12
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flip and game over is played,lol! but w/e ... 1-1 uppin
 
Old 08-21-04, 12:54 PM   #13
Abraxas
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Voted For: AutoMATIK™

Automatik get my full vote his was good
he has very good punches and very nice personals that i understnd cos i read it about 6 times and your structure was a lil overstreched but it ok it was good
jdot was ok but didnt come as hard he had some ok lines but automatik came harder
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Old 08-21-04, 12:55 PM   #14
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Automatik you never return bvote please do
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...d.php?p=1502664
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Old 08-21-04, 01:45 PM   #15
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aight...i return a vote on your battle, even if you didnt vote for me, just cause you came in here, I return HONEST votes, dont worry...thatnx for voting....uppn this
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