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AutoMATIK™ vs J DOt
Battle Rules:
6 - UNLIMITED Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 08-23-04 at 04:35 PM Must drop verse in 60 minutes after check in. |
J DOT has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-20-04 04:42 PM.
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AutoMATIK™ has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-20-04 04:43 PM.
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i spit acid, niggas cant stop the wrath of me
i dont need to come fully loaded, i'll win with just half of me its a catatrophy, how i autoMATIK'ly merk this coward but yo 'game's over' like 'flip', its time to hit da showers I'll devour ya lost dreams, put you on a merking team then lyrically rape this dude, get him off of this scene Im sick of these mediocre rappers, mainly this dude He sends one punchline, i'll send him a fistfull Your lines are more worn-out then homeless folks shoes And your brains more dead-weight than killers drinking boo's Your not convincing...say that shit in yo head My verbal scheme's will knock you out, prepare to call up the meds |
I Spit Fluently Wit Verbs Drippin From The ‘Veins Like Rain’
Demolishin J DOT Wit Swift Kicks To The Splein ‘Wit Over-Raged Pain’ Just Watch This Clown … I Beat Niggas With ‘Wide Open Violence’ Your Rhymes Don’t Compare To Mine.Beating Me? You Can ‘Just Die Only Tryin’ You’re Not An Emcee … Im Too Brutal I Beat Niggas and Steal ‘Triple The Heist’ ‘I’ll Ripple Ya Life’ And Battling Me You’ll Fall Quicker Than ‘Cripples On Ice’ You’ll Get ‘Wrapped Quick’ When I Make Yo Vision Blurry From My ‘Quick Page’ And You’ll Get Turned Like ‘Back Flips’ When I Reach In Yo Body And Pawn Yo ‘Rib Cage’ Im Sick You’ll Get Crunched. So The Cops Can Search Yo Body To ‘Find Notes’ You Hot? DOT Will Only Be Felt By Winning A Battle From ‘Blind Votes’ ** **His Name Is J-DOT. Dot-brail-blind votes? Get it ? ** |
no we dont get it...naw, sick drop...uppn
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Voted For: AutoMATIK™
ok: auto: nice verse, i liked your flow and your punches were strong here, you had good wordplay and some nice personals, liked your opener and your closing lines as well, you hit hard j dot: i liked your verse as well, but i dont think your punches hit as hard as auto's, but overall good job.... |
up!
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Voted For: J DOT
Punches- J-Dot Personals- Automatik... a few either way i just like the way automatik used die only tryin Flow- Neither Wordplay- J-dot...flip n game over was nice Multis- automatik Metaphors- neither Structure- J-dot Originality- J-dot Vocab- automatik |
aight good lookn for the vote, i'll return a HONEST one....c'mon people lets get some votes in here
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flip and game over is played,lol! but w/e ... 1-1 uppin
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Voted For: AutoMATIK™
Automatik get my full vote his was good he has very good punches and very nice personals that i understnd cos i read it about 6 times and your structure was a lil overstreched but it ok it was good jdot was ok but didnt come as hard he had some ok lines but automatik came harder |
Automatik you never return bvote please do
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...d.php?p=1502664 |
aight...i return a vote on your battle, even if you didnt vote for me, just cause you came in here, I return HONEST votes, dont worry...thatnx for voting....uppn this
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