flow2crazy vs ProVerse
 

Battle Rules:
*Topical battle*
15 - 30 lines max
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting


topic:earning respect in the rap game

spit due in about 2days

i can spit quicker then that i jus got school comin up
and shit so i gotta do a couple thangs, for my freshman year

so its gotta be 2days -agree?


Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 08-25-04 at 01:57 AM

Must drop verse in 2880 minutes after check in.

ProVerse has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-22-04 02:01 AM.

flow2crazy has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-22-04 02:03 AM.

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_(connects with next word)

-i rap subconcious- sleep spitin and rhymin-rhymin and spitin-
-sticking to hidin-my fear- hopin they listen--open your mind-
-listen to the lyrics- see me as if i was grown-
-working with only the known-only those who have blown-
-sympethey not neccecery-i will crawl through the game_
prone-even on my stoamch i hope i meet the standards-
-answers seem to be gvin in riddle-they try to expand words-
-still I toil- awake late nights- pushin school to the side-
-this is it- if i don't make it here-then my family was right-
-never that- there wrong- when i'm rappin i'm home-
-you can't take that away- go that-a-way-leave me alone-
-while creating my music- i smile- unlike around town-
-its not even been a while sinced i frowned- anything it takes_
to for you to feel me- even if it means releasin every track
i'm my cd- you gonna see me- even if it kills me-

ok dats my verse

hope you felt it

~1~ i just spitted early to avoid school trouble

is u gonna spit or WHAT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

tell me u not gonna no show plzzzzzzzzzzzz

yo shouldn't he be dq'd?

he no showed so i should get the win den right?

no nikka u said 2 days and 2 days isnt here yet imma write this shit now...

Chillin in my room listenin to a new cd~
By a rapper who just made it... sayin thats gona be me~
Next day im wit my homeboys freestyling on the block~
Never running outta rhymes like i got hundreds on stock~
Did that for a while then i started to write tracks~
Dreaming that someday i could be gettin those plaques~
As i aged i started battling at all the local clubs~
Eatin emcees like their all just some subs~
Now me and my homeboy had our own schemes~
I rhymed and he had the beats that was our dreams~
We made hot songs and our mixtapes sold out~
Then he got shot right after our first tryout~
They called my house and said that they wana see me~
They told me "u got potential kid n u write ur rhymes deeply"~
The funeral arrived and i prayed to my boy up above~
Told him imma do this for you and do it wit love~
Went to the studio to record my first track~
It was a crazy ass song i called Outta the Pack~
Asking why my boy got shot and not me~
Released my album and it debuted at numba 3~
Peeps was respectin me now n i was makin a video~
Watched it rise up the countdown like a hot newshow~
10 years later... now ive matured quite a bit~
Still writin for my boy...they neva found the culprit~
Now im one of the best n i just released a new cd~
Wonderin if someone is listenin 2 it sayin thats gona b me~

uppin~ay i didnt even know u had dropped until 2nite

Voted For: flow2crazy

im gonna have to give this shit to you becuz i like how oyu started it and ened it..that shit was cool...damn kid you wrote that shit deeply..like if it really had happened.......other guy you was coo but your shit was too hard to read...but you got potiential...good topical

uppin another time/.......................................
................................. pleeeeeease vote iight???????

uppin... votes is needed i will return the favor

uppin... dont sleep on this now

This was feedback posted for flow2crazy
 

nice job flow2crazy. crew so cant vote...just checkin the poll

upping for votes................ wow really slept on battle here

Voted For: ProVerse

wow, this was hard to judge but heres my verdict:
you both had great flow and styles all your own, both rode the topic well............
flow~your verse was good, you told a nice story type verse and nice rhyme skill as well, keepin it on track, nice job overall
Proverse~your verse was kind of short, but not short on detail and imagery with your words, nice job squeezing content into a short space,shows skill, i liked your ending and the rhyme scheme you used.............both did very well on this, much respect for you both, no hate whatsoever, i just love reading topicals, but i vote for^^^^

Voted For: ProVerse

ok this is funny cuz your name is flow but pro had the flow here pro this is the best i ever saw from you good ass wordplay vocab and flow here a really hot verse structure was up to par as well 8/10
flow your shit was good too nice vocab and i liked your imagery here but vocab was not as good as pros nor was flow or wordplay he had that and that made his verse better7/10
no hate a real nice battle close here but i think pro had a better verse return the honesty

iight uppin for some more votes^^^

thax for the ones i already got

k uppin yet another time

hope i get soem votes this time

Voted For: ProVerse

Not bad, both yall.

Pro had it, It flow'd a little better, His rhyme scheme was good, It was more interesting.

The opener was good in flow's, but most of ur verses were too simple, and some lines lost me for a while.

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Voted For: ProVerse

proverse got it...betta overall content...betta flow...and betta punches...

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^^wat the hell there isnt any punches in a topical...

Voted For: flow2crazy

no hate on proverse cuz i battled flo 2

but y0o i was feelin flo ya shit wasnt relli that great wen it came ta rhymin but ya flow was off the hook and the story line was nice it went from u sayin damn that could b me to sayin another kid was sayin it lookin up to u like u did to sum rappa it was hott and i felt it nice drop

proverse ya shit was more street and there was no real story line ya rhymin was hot but wen u battle on topic it has ta have a story of sum sort thas y im givin it to flo

vote=flow2crazy

thanx uppin...

Voted For: ProVerse

man thats some hot shit on both sidez......far out nice battle.
man u both had mad rhymes but i connected with pro's more..... " its not even been a while sinced i frowned- anything it takes_
to for you to feel me- even if it means releasin every track
i'm my cd- you gonna see me- even if it kills me- " love that shit man reat battle
v/ pro - flow man u were so close i give u huge propz homie...

^thanx for votin dawg

uppin for more votes

Voted For: ProVerse

ProVerse
structure is good.. flow is on target.. tight multis.. imagery was decent.. could have been better, though the topic didnt allow for much.. emotion was pretty good.. like in the last line.. good shit.. this topic didnt allow you to go at it in a creative way, but u still managed it well..

flow2crazy
structure is good.. flow falls off a little.. u had a few multis.. imagery wasnt very good.. cause as i said previously, this topic doesnt allow for much.. u attempted to put in emotion, but it didnt come out right.. even though the topic couldnt get made into a creative way, u werent able to manage a dope verse..

Overall
Both had a good structure.. both had decent imagery.. ProVerse had the more stable flow.. more multis.. better emotion.. and he went about the topic better.. so basing off of that.. ProVerse gets my vote..

VOTE - PROVERSE

^thanx for votin dawg

uppin for some more votes

Voted For: flow2crazy

vote flow...

feel in to it....flow
flow: flow (lol)
thought into it: flow
i could relate to flows in a way thats why he won

proverse..you really need to work on ur structure...thats wut killed you..n nest time make urs longer

overall: your verses were both good, its just i liked flows alot better....good luck.. i could see its 4-4 now

This was feedback posted for flow2crazy
 

gud battle.......stay up both

This was feedback posted for flow2crazy
 

Just scouting for talet....The Council

Voted For: flow2crazy

lol..we ain't crew nemore so i could vote...

flow, your shyt was good, it made alot of sence and i could feel yours alot better, your structure is alrite, but its flowed good enough for me.

proverse..your pretty good, but not sure if you could be a topical battler... u could elevate then u'll do good so u have some potential, but u should stick with text, but that doesn't mean u should give up on topicals cuz topicals are more fun to read for me then text...

vote: flow