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Sonofisis#1 vs G
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6 - UNLIMITED Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 120 Check in by: 08-23-04 at 04:48 AM Must drop verse in 30 minutes after check in. |
Sonofisis#1 has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-22-04 01:52 PM.
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I told this bitch to take ten paces & draw, but he Ran Away
No Wonder, you ain't a gangsta, the "G" must Stand For Gay Have any of ya'll even seen a fuckin Clown Fight? Yo Punches are like left jabs to da ear, they dont 'Sound Right Infinite rhymes, like long distant call plans, I'm Unlimited U cant fit in my shoes if you were the Old Lady who Lives In It This is just me basically tellin you that you're Not The Dopest The way I "Close In" on him, he'll scream if he's Clostrophobic There is no way that this bitch can ever Stand Worthy I would slap your face, but I'd rather not get my Hands Dirty No matter what you try to do kid, I really Am Harder I'll Pull out the Shank and cut ya face like a Bad Barber You're gassed up with More Wins, But I'll Damage U Severly Yo streak will be more Short Lived than Canibus' Career G You know that i'll win this Thing At This Pace I jus hold G's head back & all his punches miss as he Swings At My Face 3rd bar - there was a fairy tale about a little old lady who lived in a shoe, and i said he couldn't fit in my shoes if he was her.. http://www.porterfieldsfineart.com/...ladyinashoe.htm |
G has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-23-04 03:23 AM.
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I defeat this bitch quick and easy...Sonofisis has lost-this,
I scuffle his brain, make him "dyslexic"..so on this battle, I put a "cross-criss".* Carve his complexion into a sphere, and thrust his eyes out with a spear, break his "face" like a "mirror", cuz "the punches are closer than they appear". I "cease his remarks" swift, like a "brief discussion", cuz like drums, he gets "beat continually", like "re-percussion". Lyrically decapitate you…bury you in a thick-plateau, and put “X’s on your name”, like I was playin tic-tac-toe!** Your "punches ta me or nothin"...this "reject"ion "lacks-thee-jab", I make him "get off the corner***"…like “givin directions in a taxi-cab”! He rhymes "nervously"...like he looks "unsure", but hes "full of more bullshit", than "a book on manure"! “Sonofisis” couldn’t drop a “hot jam” if he “heated his jelly”, You?..”#1”!?…Yeah, sure…and so is Nelly!**** Sick ass bitch, he fucks his sister’s son, he must really be close to family…sayin his nephew is #1. (Son of sis #1) I bash your body on the side of the street, and make your bones start sparking, so your remains and blood can douse the curb red, for “zones for no parking”. *Dyslexic people talk backwards. Puttin a "X" (criss-cross) or crossin this battle out quick. **The little ‘#’ sign in his name looks like a tic-tac-toe thing. ***Ex: "[Get off at this corner] of 36th and Callan.".....givin directions...get it. ****Remember that gay song by Nelly?…Nelly - Number One. |
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Good shit, Good Battle.
-Ahah. Thanks mayn you too. Mah bad for comin home late..but I told you I would spit. I was typin hella fast. I'm tired as hell. |
Voted For: G
YO NICE BATTLE FROM BOTH// G NICE MANYE WORDPLAY PUNCHES AND PERSONALS NICE SONOFISIS YO PUNCHES WERE GOOD AND X-WORDPLAYS MAYNE NICE THE SHOE THANG IT WAS SIK TO ME// BUT SONO YO PUNCHES DIDNT COME HARDER DAN G'Z SO WORK LIL ON THEM PUNCHES DEN U BE IN AN GREATER LEVEL ~PEACE~ Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Yo Sono Or G Can Yall Vote 1 Of My Battles In Da Sig
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This was feedback posted for G
G got this with better wordplay... Son just came too basic and had too many played lines and concepts...s also had a weak structure... lines were shorter than they shoulda been... G, the manure line was trash... never use that again....sister's son line was just as bad... but still ya had an overall beter verse
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yo that was supposed to be a vote for G and not feed back... i accidentally pressed the button while i was typing... make sure he gets the vote... one
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Voted For: G
ok g takes it cuz he obviously put more thought in his punches and personals were creative, son verse was good straight to the point but it lacks substance needs more creativity too overall g takes this on his personals and punches http://community.rapverse.com/showb...35&page=2&pp=15 ay vote on this an explain ya votes please already 3 votes 4 me dq shouldnot take long its a 4 line battle Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
I light wieght agree, G came kinda sick, i should of steped my game up..
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Voted For: Sonofisis#1
yo i liked the battle Sonofisis#1-best line I told this bitch to take ten paces & draw, but he Ran Away No Wonder, you ain't a gangsta, the "G" must Stand For Gay Have any of ya'll even seen a fuckin Clown Fight G-best line I put a "cross-criss".* Carve his complexion into a sphere, and thrust his eyes out with a spear Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
This was feedback posted for G
I think G got this one
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Voted For: G
this is a very good abttle that was close G: you have good strong personals and you punches were good and some lines i found funny you had good wordplay but ya structre was kindaa messed and so was ya flow but your was good Snono: your shit was good and made it competitive , you have nice punches and ok p epersonals and ya flow ans strcutre was iight but some of your lines were3 a lil not as good vote G for a lil better verse |
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Voted For: Sonofisis#1
look kid i dont really mind the facty that i lost to you now.you got heat kid..you kinda remind me of me when i was a young gun on rap battles......brings tears to my eyes...j/k but forreal i was feelin the meta4s.....aye kid you got a spot in class sic............G you need to elevate..but good spit tho Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
^Thanx cuz, i appreciate that..
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Voted For: Sonofisis#1
G-your structure was not good this time mayn. punches were so-so; some were great, some were horrible. good multis the personals were decent even tho some were kinda fake. but you did have real nice wordplay so......8/10 Sonofisis#1-you had much more consistent structure and punches than G. multis were coo, wordplay was real nice. vocab was off da hook just an overall great verse. my fav line was "Yo Punches are like left jabs to da ear, they dont 'Sound Right" cuz it had everything in it and was funny.......9/10 v//sonofisis#1 (no hate) |
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Voted For: Sonofisis#1
sonofisis wins this battle barely just bcuz his punches were way easier to understand and the structure was better. Both punches were hittin and personals were good. but sonofisis wins this bcuz he didnt have to explain just about all of his punches with is kind of annoying but good battle holla at me http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=144623 |
This was feedback posted for Sonofisis#1
SON OF ISIS IS SONIC
CHECK THEIR IP ADDRESS IN MY BATTLE AGAINST SONIC THEIR THE SAME http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=139894 |
^Get off my dick son and quit harrassing me.. you pmed me like 5 times too..
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Voted For: Sonofisis#1
yo close battle..... both had good punches...but son was fuckin relentless ever line was a punch punches: son by a lil personals: tie both had good personals multis: g metas: tie creativity: tie shit was close...... vote..... son just cuz of his none stop punches no beef \/\/ check links Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
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