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08-05-04, 09:56 AM | #1 | ||||||
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SONIC vs Ice Pick
IP: E198 D20B
Battle Rules:
6 - 10 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 50 Check in by: 08-08-04 at 09:56 AM Must drop verse in 25 minutes after check in. This Battle Is Now Closed
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08-05-04, 09:56 AM | #2 | ||||||
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IP: 6F6F 02B6
Ice Pick has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-05-04 09:56 AM.
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08-05-04, 09:58 AM | #3 | ||||||
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IP: E198 D20B
SONIC has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-05-04 09:58 AM.
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08-05-04, 10:09 AM | #4 | |||||
GoD LiKe
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IP: 6F6F 02B6
Visional "SONIC"? Ha, I'll give yu some "adivce"... Kiss my left cheak...
My disses so "far ahead of ya tyme" itz like i ripped you "last week"... dont bring tha "beef" to me cause dogg i "spoil it", You keep "slippin on ya tounge" like tha it was an "oil slick"... Sonic talks so much "shit", hiz "mouth could clogg my toilet". I leave yu passed out cause ya verse iz "ass out" like a "jay lo porn"... Say no more, I must be "Neutering dis homo", cause i leave his "gay flow torn"... Ya "abandoned" stylez like an "orphan", Son nobody "cares bout you"... Tha heat of this verse is only a portion, my real verse would ruin ya whole crew... Only problem im havin in dis battle is deciding how many ribs ta shift... You dissin me??? Might as well "call me constapated" cause "i dont give a shit".... |
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08-05-04, 10:20 AM | #5 | |||||
GoD LiKe
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IP: 6F6F 02B6
You gonna drop soon
time is running out on ya --------------------
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08-05-04, 10:22 AM | #6 | ||||||
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IP: E198 D20B
Yo rhymes are like dull Magnets, It ain't Attractive
I'm Ill while You're just "Sick"... Sick of Sayin Whack Shit I Spit the right shit, Stay on u and come for blood Like Ticks Flow Tight like Vice Grips, rhymes "sharper" than any "Ice Pick" Aim precise, hit you with more Accuracy than Tactical Archers U only win against Newbs, it's like Soldiers Attackin da Farmers No Fair, that's why yo wack shit is goin No Where In person U "Choke" on mics, Like the atmosphere had No Air So there bitch, you'll need some Aid Just to Stop Me Coz u couldn't give me a "Sick Punch" if u had Aids n U Socked Me |
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08-05-04, 10:24 AM | #7 | |||||
GoD LiKe
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IP: 6F6F 02B6
Nice u got it up in time
Sharper than any ice pick , DAMN I GOTTA CHANGE MY NAME OR SUM SHIT 50 times ive herd that so far
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08-05-04, 11:05 AM | #8 | ||||||
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IP: E198 D20B
ofdido
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08-05-04, 11:17 AM | #9 | |||||||
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This was feedback posted for Ice Pick
IP: CEF5 716F
I like the pic you painted, it was koo
structure: Icepick flow" Icepick harder punches ice pick return fav to me vs ghost
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AT ANY TIME MONSOON COULD ERUPT, YEAA YOU CREATE THAT, ITS LIKE THROWIN GUNPOWDER IN A PITBULLS FOOD AND WATCHIN IT REACT !!! LYRICAL TERRORISM monsoon vs pictaperfect2 monsoon vs big tissle RETURNED FAVS |
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08-05-04, 11:23 AM | #10 | |||||
GoD LiKe
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IP: CEC2 D817
VOtes please
Feedback is good as long as it has votes with it
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08-05-04, 11:33 AM | #11 | |||||||
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IP: E198 D20B
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STUCTURE! ARE YOU FUCKIN CRAZY, NO OFFENSE, BUT HIS STUCTURE WAS NO WHERE NEAR GREAT.. I DON'T KNOW ABOUT THE PUNCHES BUT STUCTURE? I CAN'T CALL IT DICK RIDE COZ HE DIDN'T VOTE BUT DAMN.. |
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08-05-04, 11:35 AM | #12 | |||||
GoD LiKe
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IP: CEC2 D817
Dick Ryde
I Have A Battle Going Against Him Right Now So Why Would He Dick Ryde Notice I Said Vote And Leave Ya Vote Explain Ya Votes Bttere As Well I Hate Newbish Votes
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08-05-04, 12:01 PM | #13 | |||||
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IP: C1DA C961
Voted For: SONIC
Icepick- Wordplay Was Ok, Some Parts Played, Flow Was Decent, And Punches Connected... Sonic- Begging Line Was Good, Flow Was Good, And Punches Hit, Also Structure Was Better... Punches- Sonic Personals- Tie Flow-Tie Wordplay- Icepick Metaphors-Tie Structure- Sonic Originality- Tie.... Final Vote----- Sonic..... Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.
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08-05-04, 12:23 PM | #14 | |||||
GoD LiKe
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Sonic
Dont Cry About The Structre Its Like That Because The Lines Wouldnt Fit But They Did Befor I Posted It Kronuz You Ar A Fag< Always Voting Against Me Wanna Battle You No Dick Bitch
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08-05-04, 12:25 PM | #15 | ||||||
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IP: E198 D20B
It wasn't that, it's just that, I don't see how he could of said that your stucture was better, that's all..
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