MjGrEeN vs sHoTTaBoY
 

Battle Rules:

6 - 8 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 08-30-04 at 07:23 AM

Must drop verse in 20 minutes after check in.

sHoTTaBoY has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-27-04 07:24 AM.

MjGrEeN has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-27-04 07:29 AM.

Yo its time for your final recognition
i grab your brain and make a partition
i'm a man on a mission and i've only got to do one thing
i gotta listen to your mom as she gets in extasy, she sing/

I'm a tazer, cuz when you diss me i shock you in defense
your getting pissed on dude, your looking a little tense
my prosperity brings reality to key geniality,
your a jacko gone wacko looking at little boy sacko/

Yo I'ma Teach This Kat The True Meanin Of MASSACRE../
Ya Better Call The US INfantry Cause SHOTTA Is BLASTIN-YA..

Yo' Lil Azz Better Run 4 Cover.../
I Got 2 'LETHAL WEAPONS' Like Mel Gibson n Dan GLOVER../
1 Is My Lyrics 1 Is My Gat, So You Gon Get MURDERD ''One Way Or ANOTHER''../

Its Plain n Simple I Dont Give A Fuck About Nobody, Not Even My Own TEAM../
I'm Similiar To Jim Carey The Way I'm Turnin White InTo GREEN../
You Can Come Step Up MJ But I'm Hardcore To The EXTREME!.....................Muh'Fucka!

(Turnin White InTo Green = Jim Craey As The Mask.....Meanin Turn Dope InTo Dollar)

Nice Verse GREEN.....Propps My Nigguh

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I'll Return The Favor

Voted For: sHoTTaBoY

I think that shottaboy had the overall better punchline and structure. he seemed a little bit more elevated and what he said hit harder, i was really juss feelin his verse better, ya know? djgreen, you need to elevate and come up with some tight rhymes and punchlines..

V/Shottaboy..

return the favor in my link right here cuz, thanx..
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=143643

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P E A C E

Voted For: sHoTTaBoY

VOTE SHOTTA

much better wordplay , creativity, descent punches,

mjgreen , you need to elevate dude, use a larger vocab, learn how to lay a proper punch,


I'm a tazer, cuz when you diss me i shock you in defense
your getting pissed on dude, your looking a little tense
my prosperity brings reality to key geniality,
your a jacko gone wacko looking at little boy sacko/
This was completely wack and well pointless if you ask me


YOU BOTH NEED SOME PERSONALS BUIT ITS ALL GOOD

Voted For: MjGrEeN

mj green has this battle his words were bigger and they made sense and at the end of his battle he didnt have to explain what he meant like shottaboy did at the end of his battle

Voted For: MjGrEeN

Ok both of you need work on your structure and wordplay, but Mj came with more punches that stayed consistent. Shotta, at times your drop didn't even seem directed at Mj, which is key in a battle. Mj, you had some aight multis in your drop too, but there's always room for improvement. No hate...
Vote - MjGrEeN

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Voted For: sHoTTaBoY

Yo' Lil Azz Better Run 4 Cover.../
I Got 2 'LETHAL WEAPONS' Like Mel Gibson n Dan GLOVER../

dis line came hard sHoTTaBoY got better pl's den MjGrEeN to me sHoTTaBoY ur struture still needs work but wuz easy to get da meledoy had a few metta's but jus came harder

MjGrEeN u had a nice flow but didnt hit dat many pl's and da whole gay thing is gettin hella tired and real fast too but ur structure wuz good but not enough lyrical content to win but good sheit from da both of ya'll

i always vote and give honest feed back vote on mai battle wit turnheads i think i killed him tho he still hasnt wrote and i checked in after him

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Voted For: sHoTTaBoY

sHoTTaBoY
dont put the /s at the end of ur lines.. its newbish.. structure is ok.. some of ur lines were stretched though.. flow is on target.. no multis.. wordplay was pretty good.. none of ur punches connected.. no good personals..

MjGrEeN
structure is good.. flow is on target.. no multis.. no wordplay.. none of ur punches connected.. no good personals..

Overall
MjGrEeN had the better structure.. both had good flow.. neither had multis.. neither had connecting punches.. neither had good personals.. sHoTTaBoY had better wordplay.. so basing off of that.. wordplay is more important then structure.. so sHoTTaBoY gets my vote..

VOTE - SHOTTABOY

Please return the favor with an honest vote here.. cause some of the votes were DQed, so it just got re-opened..
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=136172
Thanx.

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Voted For: sHoTTaBoY

Yo shotta owned dis
punches=shotta
metas=shotta
mutlis=shotta NEED MORE
?v?=???? SOTTA BOI ????