illuson vs LyRiKaLMiRiKaL
 

Battle Rules:

6 -10-20 lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 09-02-04 at 04:52 AM

Must drop verse in 60 minutes after check in.

LyRiKaLMiRiKaL has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-30-04 04:53 AM.

illuson has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-30-04 04:54 AM.

ya beein bein lyriikal
dawg thats histarical
i got gangsta meadle
this beef wont be settle
i know thugs from ya hood
ya wanna be like shug
if ya could
my rhymes neverll be understood
they 2 complex
they make obse
realize that im one of the best
fuck tha rest
my words ill have ya poundin on hells doors
ya cant escape ya or ya fuckin whores
if ya want me 2 stop
whip out ya gun and start to pop
im allergeaic to lead i alwasy take my medacine
"my words stick to ya like crazy gluebut when ya diss me the just bounce off me like bullets to fifty"said by eminem
ow its bein said again

2SHADY BITCH

whats takin ya so long r ya pre written ya shit
hurry up homie

This faggot’s so shook his fur stands up plus the hair-on-his-nuts//
Your verse is like starrin-at-sluts, It wouldn’t “suit” my needs even if it was wearin-a-“tux”//

Beating this lame kid, you’re just a “puss” like your “avys”-image// (his avatar)
Wack A**, youre finished, punch lines “pop” your “eyes”, no need to “grab-me-spinach”// ( Popeye)

My-laughter is because of ya lines-cracker, I’ll make ya spine-fracture//
Cuz I'm "mentally ahead" of you, like your running through my "mind-backwards"//

So how many names you had huh? Im sure this chumps-a-gimmick//
Youd never make the “step up”, like Forrest Gumps-lieutenant// (was in a wheel chair)

Bum, you’re finished, a diminished geek, so just let ya mind-dream//
While I leave ya frame played out, like them lines in your rhyme-scheme//

You will need-a-nurse, when these-disperse, left and rights never knowing which meets-him-first//
But honestly, do you think anyone is going to read-your-verse//

Your career disbanded, I mean this man, for instants//
We all know that illness stays out of your “bars” like good Christians//

Look at this kid tryin to spit, son I'm taking ya life with forces//
He's been around the “block” a few times, the one with "writer's" before it// (writers block......blah)

Man ya lines-atrocious, boy sign in again so you can find-some-voters//
Ill grab ya back and teach ya spine-aerobics, cos ya aint a “big deal” like a “midgets-signin-bonus”//

Now you see it plain-and-clean that what I contain-is-mean, ill sever ya head so I can stain-the-scene//
Its insane-to-see about how I’ve slain-the-queen, cuz I wouldn’t “feel” nothin if ya verse “brailed”-my-screen//

good luck......lol

it took me 40 minutes we have an hour to do a verse so dont try to choke me over the net.........
please kid, you got served

uppin for some votes do so and ill return the favor just send me the link

uppin for votes......if u want your battles voted on vote on mine

this kid has to tell people to win sayin he'll vote 4 ya if ya vot frorm him
pussy

first off i said HONEST votes and i honestly handed you your ass get over it u punk ass

Voted For: LyRiKaLMiRiKaL

lyrikal took this by far. he had a much better structure, flow, and he actually used punches in his verse.

illusion, your verse didn't really make sense, you didn't really plan it out well, coz you were just kinda freestyling and not using any punches. no hate

v/lyrikal

Voted For: LyRiKaLMiRiKaL

this vote goes ta lyrikal hands down his flow was tight his ryhmes was nice as hell n he had sum nice ass punhlines.
vote=lyrikal

Voted For: LyRiKaLMiRiKaL

aight well no challenge here...better meta's,punches structure could use a bit of work but this was a 1 sided battle the whole way through vocab n wordplay were both evident in this verse....pretty good job....
other verse you gotta fix your structure n the way you put your bars down....

lyrikal pm me if your lookin ta get into a crew,im sure we could help you elevate you style......

as far as the crew goes im down i switch styles by the mood im in if i wanna go complex i stretch it......if im feelin multies at the time ill structure it well.....etc....hit me up if u want me in ya crew.....uppin for votes peace

Voted For: LyRiKaLMiRiKaL

Aight, This Was A No Contest...

Lyrical Tore This Fool Up..

Better Structure, Punches, Metas, Better Everythin...An His Rhyme Actually Made Sense...

Yo illuson, Improve Ya Structre...n Well, Improve Everythin My Nigguh

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Voted For: LyRiKaLMiRiKaL

PUNCHES=LYRIKAL
FLOW=LYRIKAL
METAS=LYRIKAL
MULTIS=LYRIKAL
PERSONALS=LYRIKAL

LYRIKAL TOOK THIS N ALL AREAS ILLUSION DIDNT MAKE THAT MUCH SENCE HIS FLOW WAS OFF NO REAL PUNCHES ELIVATE!!!!!!!