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View Poll Results: LyRiKaLMiRiKaLvsILLUSON | |||
LyRiKaLMiRiKaL | 5 | 100.00% | |
illuson | 0 | 0% | |
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08-30-04, 04:52 AM | #1 | |
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illuson vs LyRiKaLMiRiKaL
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6 -10-20 lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 09-02-04 at 04:52 AM Must drop verse in 60 minutes after check in. |
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08-30-04, 04:53 AM | #2 | |
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LyRiKaLMiRiKaL has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-30-04 04:53 AM.
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08-30-04, 04:54 AM | #3 | |
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illuson has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-30-04 04:54 AM.
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08-30-04, 05:06 AM | #4 | |
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ya beein bein lyriikal
dawg thats histarical i got gangsta meadle this beef wont be settle i know thugs from ya hood ya wanna be like shug if ya could my rhymes neverll be understood they 2 complex they make obse realize that im one of the best fuck tha rest my words ill have ya poundin on hells doors ya cant escape ya or ya fuckin whores if ya want me 2 stop whip out ya gun and start to pop im allergeaic to lead i alwasy take my medacine "my words stick to ya like crazy gluebut when ya diss me the just bounce off me like bullets to fifty"said by eminem ow its bein said again 2SHADY BITCH |
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08-30-04, 05:15 AM | #5 | |
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whats takin ya so long r ya pre written ya shit
hurry up homie
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08-30-04, 05:17 AM | #6 |
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This faggot’s so shook his fur stands up plus the hair-on-his-nuts//
Your verse is like starrin-at-sluts, It wouldn’t “suit” my needs even if it was wearin-a-“tux”// Beating this lame kid, you’re just a “puss” like your “avys”-image// (his avatar) Wack A**, youre finished, punch lines “pop” your “eyes”, no need to “grab-me-spinach”// ( Popeye) My-laughter is because of ya lines-cracker, I’ll make ya spine-fracture// Cuz I'm "mentally ahead" of you, like your running through my "mind-backwards"// So how many names you had huh? Im sure this chumps-a-gimmick// Youd never make the “step up”, like Forrest Gumps-lieutenant// (was in a wheel chair) Bum, you’re finished, a diminished geek, so just let ya mind-dream// While I leave ya frame played out, like them lines in your rhyme-scheme// You will need-a-nurse, when these-disperse, left and rights never knowing which meets-him-first// But honestly, do you think anyone is going to read-your-verse// Your career disbanded, I mean this man, for instants// We all know that illness stays out of your “bars” like good Christians// Look at this kid tryin to spit, son I'm taking ya life with forces// He's been around the “block” a few times, the one with "writer's" before it// (writers block......blah) Man ya lines-atrocious, boy sign in again so you can find-some-voters// Ill grab ya back and teach ya spine-aerobics, cos ya aint a “big deal” like a “midgets-signin-bonus”// Now you see it plain-and-clean that what I contain-is-mean, ill sever ya head so I can stain-the-scene// Its insane-to-see about how I’ve slain-the-queen, cuz I wouldn’t “feel” nothin if ya verse “brailed”-my-screen// good luck......lol |
08-30-04, 06:19 AM | #7 |
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it took me 40 minutes we have an hour to do a verse so dont try to choke me over the net.........
please kid, you got served |
08-30-04, 04:05 PM | #8 |
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uppin for some votes do so and ill return the favor just send me the link
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08-30-04, 07:42 PM | #9 |
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IP: 3FCF 03A9
uppin for votes......if u want your battles voted on vote on mine
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08-31-04, 02:49 AM | #10 | |
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this kid has to tell people to win sayin he'll vote 4 ya if ya vot frorm him
pussy
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08-31-04, 02:55 AM | #11 |
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IP: 3FCF 03A9
first off i said HONEST votes and i honestly handed you your ass get over it u punk ass
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08-31-04, 06:37 AM | #12 | |
The Next Level
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IP: EC1A 9E76
Voted For: LyRiKaLMiRiKaL
lyrikal took this by far. he had a much better structure, flow, and he actually used punches in his verse. illusion, your verse didn't really make sense, you didn't really plan it out well, coz you were just kinda freestyling and not using any punches. no hate v/lyrikal |
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08-31-04, 12:40 PM | #13 | |
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IP: FB7D C93A
Voted For: LyRiKaLMiRiKaL
this vote goes ta lyrikal hands down his flow was tight his ryhmes was nice as hell n he had sum nice ass punhlines. vote=lyrikal
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08-31-04, 12:46 PM | #14 |
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Voted For: LyRiKaLMiRiKaL
aight well no challenge here...better meta's,punches structure could use a bit of work but this was a 1 sided battle the whole way through vocab n wordplay were both evident in this verse....pretty good job.... other verse you gotta fix your structure n the way you put your bars down.... lyrikal pm me if your lookin ta get into a crew,im sure we could help you elevate you style......
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09-01-04, 02:54 AM | #15 |
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IP: 3FCF 03A9
as far as the crew goes im down i switch styles by the mood im in if i wanna go complex i stretch it......if im feelin multies at the time ill structure it well.....etc....hit me up if u want me in ya crew.....uppin for votes peace
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