platinum_ vs System Crasher
 

Battle Rules:

6 - 20 lines max
No Crew Votes
No Recyclin'
No Bitin'

Minimum posts to vote: 50

Check in by: 09-05-04 at 09:52 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

System Crasher has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-02-04 09:53 PM.

PlaTinuM_ has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-02-04 09:53 PM.

So,newb, You think your platinum? Well platinum, I'm gattin' em'
Well bitch your next, I have Muscles in mah chest, and bitch I'm strappin em!!
I'll rock your world with thunder and lightning,
I piss on your lines, because your flow is frightning,
Your pussy ass lyrics remind me of boney hoes,
I will diss on you for licking dicks like fallin Dominos!
I should shit in your mouth then wash it out,
You only drink cum cause ya' heard theres a drout,
You rape your grandpa and lick your gandmas chest,
I will add you to mah' Knock out list just like the rest!
I play your rhymes like your grandma does your pussy,
I am a sraight nigga, not gay!, don't get pushy!
Yeah I'm young.. im only twelve 12 But im merkin your ass!
But i didnt fuck the 7th grade teacher in the middle of calss,
Open your mouth bitch, Hear this diss, I need to piss,
I AINT PLAYIN you aint got lockjaw I hope you thirsty bitch!!

Thweresmah verse dawg!!..
Lets get votes on this battle!!

As son as you post your verse...... ... ** looks at his watch** any time now!

this boi is now an (official-hooker)makin fast cash
u no ur rhymez iz (Articial-Rooker)ill take u down wit one smash

you best be steppin-off cause you know you cant win
after im done wit you in the streetz youll be the one wit da fuked up chin

Why tha fuck is your name (System-Crasher?) doped out name
Ill be the one knockin u out cuz i could (Fist-u-Faster) no chance of fame

da fuk this guy is gay he callin his freind Ryan booty-hooty
nigga can evan get his mom to suk his nutz shyt he on hootchie-duty

This h0e is callin sk00l (Retarded-Teacher) he da one
damn this guy iz all bout been a (Gaurded-Creature) nigga ur shyt is undone

you tha only newbest rapper in da rapworld spray u wit ma Bear Mace
now ima let you go wit one slap of swirl on ya face

I heard that mace line some where before?... ...Hmmm..??? Well, not bad besides that bear mase line?.... Upin for votes people!!

yo i didnt bite ma shyt... im new hurr didnt explore da site yet.. uppin for votez...

Ok... its all good... Uppin for votes!!!

Ok :thumbup: ... its all good :cussing: ... Uppin for :shoot: votes!!!

Voted For: System Crasher

well this wasent a one sided battle but i seen better vocab in this verse so ya:
opener:3/10
closener: 5/10
metas:3/10
multi's: 8/10
punches: 9/10
v/S.C

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return the favour in my battla against mookie in my sig please and thanks peace

I voted on Ya' Battle... Uppin' for votes!!!!!!!

Crasher~~~~

Still uppin for votes people!!!!


Crasher~*~*~*~*~*~

Uppin for votes!!!!!! One vote! one Vote! la la la la la uppin uppin uppin Blah!....
tick tock suck my cock.... lol VOTES PEOPLE PLEASE!!!

Crasher~~~~

Voted For: PlaTinuM_

Imma Give This To Platinum ... His punches Were More Creative Then Systems ... System Maybe You Backed Off Coz You Thought He Was "New" ... Always Come Hard Coz You Never Know ... Platinum You Had Sum Nice Multies Goin On ...
System You Basically Talked Bout Yaself In Tha First Four Lines ... And Tha Rest Of Ya "Punches" Were Pretty "Wierd" ...
Wasn't A Great Battle But Platinum Get Ma Vote ...

Vote: Platinum

Voted For: PlaTinuM_

this kat had more got chas then tha otheer kat he had sum nice lyrics

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Geee i under stand you fully because of how good you explained your answer...... Dumb ass!

Uppin for votes@!!

Crasher!

Voted For: System Crasher

yo..tough ass battle 2 judge. I mean yaw niggas was going at it in this verse. Punches was there..not great but they was there. I gave u this verse cause of structure though. But don't get it twisted cause he was on dat ass system. Yaw was neck and neck, but I think you kinda pulled it out by a hair. Return da favor and peep my battles.

Fa' Sho' Dawg!!... thanx 4 the vote!.... Ill return tha fava!
Uppin for votes everyone!!

still uppin fa more votez....cmon yall wake up n vote......!!!

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Voted For: System Crasher

Aight Nice Battle...

I Think System Hit Harder With Nice Personals n Metas...Maybe Could Up Ya Punches, I've Seen U Post Alot Better Punches My Nigguh, But Nice Verse, U Should Have This Battle In The Nag...

Platinum, Ya Wordplay Was Nice But U Used Elementary Rhymes That Need Elevation In Ya Vocabulary...
Nice Try Tho
Keep Elevatin

Return The Favor

P E A C E

BBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBag I Meant

LMAO...WTF @ Nag

Thanx for tha vote Shotta... yeah I now ... that wasnt my best verse ever it wasnt that great .... but i should have it in the ned.... oh well.... Well uppin for votes people!!! Thanx!!

Crasher~~~~~~

Upping For Votes!!!
 

Uppin for votes ya'll..... I just wanna end this battle.... Bla Bla Bla...... Votes votes votes!!!~~~~~~ :thumbup: ..... ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Upppin Uppin Uppin... For for for ~>~>~>~>~>~>~>~>~>~> votes votes votes I need votes!!! :shoot:

I will return tha fava!! Will ~~~~~ Return~~~~~ tha~~~~~~ Fava~~~~~

GOD DAMNIT :cussing: GIVE ME VOTES!!! lol ... :laugh: .....

Im uppin!!! For voteS!!!!

Cr4sher~~~ :banghead:

I got bored /\ /\ /\ :thumbup:

Voted For: PlaTinuM_

all n all dis was a weak battle

Punches - platinum...he only had like 1 or 2 decent punches in the entire battle...lol that was more then SC even thot about...SC was jus writin down garbage talkin bout grandmas n shyt...makin NOOO fuckin sense

Personals - Platinum...weak but u had more then that kid did

Wordplay - tie...both verses was simple...kinda borin 2

Creativity - tie...lol like i sed ^^^

Enjoyment - Platinum...he had that 1 punch about da fucked up chin dat made me laff lolol...everything else in this battle was garbage...yall needa up ur shyt

Vote - Platinum...simple because at least his shyt was make some sense...he had a couple decent punches 2...dat took da cake...~1~


return da favor on da battle in my sig....~1~

Voted For: PlaTinuM_

Platinum merked this kid!!!!! He had better flow multis punches structure and metas!!! System needs to elevate and think of real concepts instead of the pussy shit

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Hey.... I like your streak!!!!... HA HA HA~~~~

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I will return tha fava!! Will ~~~~~ Return~~~~~ tha~~~~~~ Fava~~~~~

GOD DAMNIT GIVE ME VOTES!!! lol ... .....

Im uppin!!! For voteS!!!!

Cr4sher~~~

yo wassup rhx fo da votez.....but when da fuk iz diz battle gon close??? lol takin fuking long......well keep em votez comin PEEEEEEEEEEECAH!!!

Uppin For Votes!!~~
 

Uppin for votes ya'll..... I just wanna end this battle.... Bla Bla Bla...... Votes votes votes!!!~~~~~~ ..... ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Upppin Uppin Uppin... For for for ~>~>~>~>~>~>~>~>~>~> votes votes votes I need votes!!!

I will return tha fava!! Will ~~~~~ Return~~~~~ tha~~~~~~ Fava~~~~~

GOD DAMNIT GIVE ME VOTES!!! lol ... .....

Im uppin!!! For voteS!!!!

Cr4sher~~~

I got bored /\ /\ /\

Voted For: System Crasher

lol dawg i like da flow of your rap expeciaually ill piss on your lines lol

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Thanx for tha vote!!.... Uppin for votes people!!!!

Voted For: System Crasher

System got this one.......he merked the fuck out ou......ya want beef with me cuz you talkin about me in ya verse....set a battle up bitch and Brad thinkin you can beat me this time? set a battle up

Punches-The most important thing of all.....simply you can see Crasher ook it....with Platinum's wack punches.....my grandma could weave that shit...it was weak

Wordplay- I liked Crashers a lot better.....Platinums whole verse was boring.....you can plinly see Crasher took this one

Mettas- Not to be all over Crashers dick but he got this too....don't get me wrong......both of you can elevate.....alwayz room for elevating....but Crasher took this

Structure- Both of your structures was good but Crashers was a little better

Flow- Crasher's verse flowed better than Platinum's did....but Crasher could elevate in this a lot......so can Platinum

Vocab- Platinum......you got this one......but Crasher's verse was all around better than yours....weak battle over all

V/ System Crasher

return the favor......here is the link to my battle

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just copy and paste that into your adress bar where you type www.whatever.com lol

Platinum.......want another flipped 7 on your record? (7 flipped is an L 7L) talkin shit about me.......you talk about me.....watch what comes out ya mouth......i'll merk the shit out of you......set a battle up......no how about me and Crasher here against you and whoever you choose.....i fnno......what ever ya want.....but i'll merk you either way......so keep my name ou ya rhymes unless you glorify me.......bitch........sorry for freepostin Brad

upppin for votes!!!

LMAO u voted for him cuz your juz his freind.....n what tha fuk iz yo name anytwayz? OHHHH your probably his freind Ryan
LMFAO da gay fagz...
well i could take this battle to strobe if i wanted to but i aint gon do dat.. well peeeeeeeece nuccaz

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I will return tha fava!! Will ~~~~~ Return~~~~~ tha~~~~~~ Fava~~~~~

GOD DAMNIT GIVE ME VOTES!!! lol ... .....

Im uppin!!! For voteS!!!!

Cr4sher~~~

Voted For: PlaTinuM_

Im Votin For PlaTinuM_, Cuz His Punches Were Harder, Flow Was Aight, Structure Pretty Decent, Both Of There Rhymes Were Okay But GPlaT Came A Lil Harder With It Tho

Voted For: System Crasher

system, i think you took this one, some ok punches, but you need to stop dissin him about sex and his family. . .its not workin ! both of y'all flows were off . . .platinum, in parts, your verse didn't make sense. your flow and structure were all over the place, system, owards the end of your battle, you were starting to lose it, some weren't really making sense either. but i think you had harder hitting punches than platinum, but both need to elevate. no hate

v/system