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LEazy vs sHoTTaBoY
Battle Rules:
10 - 12 Lines No Crew Votes No Biting Cause The Last Battle Fucked Up I'll Just Set It Up Again n Repost My Verse n Give Him Chance 2 Flow Back... Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 09-09-04 at 11:33 AM Must drop verse in 25 minutes after check in. |
sHoTTaBoY has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-06-04 11:33 AM.
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I'ma Keep Ya Heart Pumpin Like The Reebok Sneekers../
I'm The Suregon n Bout To Operate On Your Facial Features../ I'm Pullin Out All The Stops To Defeat-Ya.. Open Up Your Chest n Expose Your HEART../ I Push Mad Brick n Only Thing Your Pushin Is A Walmart Shoppin-Cart..! I Got Punchlines That'll K.O a HeavyWeight Champ.. Before I Murder You I'ma Leave You HOME(ie)Less Like A TRAMP.. After I'm Done Wit'chu Ya Gon Be Suckin Dick 4 A Food-STAMP.. This Mutha'Fucker So Gay He Went To A CockBar When His Momma Sent Him 2 CAMP..!! Bitch, Your A Lil Lucky I Didnt Go 'ALL OUT'.. I Still Merked You n ''Thats The Way The Cookie Crumbles' For This Lil Boy SCOUT..!!!!! |
LEazy has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-06-04 11:43 AM.
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I spit sick barz text or PENCILS and cook up beef like I write wit kitchen UTENSILS//
Beat this cat down wit punches to da FACE, leave um in da hospital cause he ain't welcomed back like MASE// To win this battle is NOTHIN...cause this cat couldn't type sick if he had a virus on his computer start BUTTON// Spit fire to the face of this FAG...so watch me X out this so called star like a confederate FLAG// Let's finish this off now! Two guns strapped call um my TWINS, and since this dude thinks he's notorious i'll have him covered in blood like he's born AGAIN// |
Niiiice Verse...
The Mase One Was A Lil Played Out... But I Liked It Good Luck Uppppppin 4 Votes...!!! |
same here...ya shit was fire dog. I know it's played out, but I was at a rush for time and that damn song was blastin on the speakers as I was typin this. LoL...good luck too!
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Voted For: LEazy
i like this rhyme i was feelin it mayn but tha other one was aiight but i like this one |
lol, what the fuck?
man, i'm not sayin this cause he voted 4 you, but be honest here.... he aint explain shit, that vote should be DE'ED.... You know you'd hate it if somebody had an unexplaived vote for me... i had votes in other battles dq'ed cause of unexplained votes, so this one she be too... |
SHE be? wtf, i mean SHOULD be...
hahah fuckin SHE BE...thats hella retarded on my part... daaaaamn |
Voted For: sHoTTaBoY
LEazy: I think that u could have done a little better with your punchlines and your delivery. Your structure needs work, too. I did like the confederate flag punchline, but that was it. ShottaBoy: U had good punchlines, good delivery, but u could have worked a little on your structure. I felt like u came a little hard (u usually come hard 100%). I like the last two lines...those were tight. U got my vote. |
Voted For: sHoTTaBoY
blah what weak siht Sohtt: your shit was kinda ok but it had some ok punches and ok personald also you had a lil elevting but nt enuf ya flow was poor and so was ya strucure Leazy: yours was really weak no hate but u neda come more harder than that you had poor flow and poorstrucutre but yo ad some ok punches and perosnals Vote is shotta boi |
one of you please peep my open mic and comment about it
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=147094 |
I usually don't have my structure like that. But yaw niggas throw me off when u be like 10 lines. I do my shit by bars. So I had to throw it up there so it was in lines. Plus if the battle was weak we both did it in like 10 minutes.
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Upppppin
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uppin..can we get some votes people? I vote on everybody's battle if i can.
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Uppppppppppppppppppppin
Leave Ya Links n I'll Return The Favor |
Voted For: sHoTTaBoY
the only line that made me laugh *This Mutha'Fucker So Gay He Went To A CockBar When His Momma Sent Him 2 CAMP..!! shoutout boy gets it punches were stronger rymhed better 2 the way i read it anyway. |
Yo Upppppin 4 Votes.....!!!!!!
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Cuzz Mayn Shottaboy U It Was Tight But Nigga Yall Be Usin Tha Same Old Rhymes Come Up Wit Rhymes That Hardly Bin Used Before Naw Im Sayin Sun
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Uppppppppppppppin Ya'll
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Upiiin Ya'll...
Hit Us Up Wit An Honest Vote n We'll BOTH Return The Favor p e a c e |
Voted For: LEazy
hmm pretty close battle. structure is a tie, punches go to LEazy cuz he had more and his hit hard every time, metas go to EAzy, flow is a tie. no personals at all. "To win this battle is NOTHIN...cause this cat couldn't type sick if he had a virus on his computer start BUTTON//" haha thats good. "Open Up Your Chest n Expose Your HEART../ I Push Mad Brick n Only Thing Your Pushin Is A Walmart Shoppin-Cart..!" that wuz good. good punch. v/ LEazy peace |
Voted For: LEazy
My vote goes to LEazy, for a couple of reasons... flow ~ y'all were even structure ~ they were pretty well even too, but when Shottaboy came back on the 4th line with another line about the heart, it flawed it up a little bit fo' me... No hate, just try a lil more complexity next time punches ~ i thought it was close, but I gave it to LEazy for originality personals ~ shotta, you killed on some personals dawg, but it wasn't enough to take my vote for the battle... much love to both of y'all on deez tho'... VOTE: LEazy |
Voted For: LEazy
man you took this battle no problem, your closer was good, even though it was a forced rhyme. but overall i hitnk you got this no problem, you hit hard and keep goin mayn................. |
Voted For: sHoTTaBoY
ight, opener goes to leazy it was tight opener..but then the lines all dropped n it took away you shoulda saved it i guess then.. punches, metas, personals, structure, flo all came together for shottah tho props it was topped off with a closer.. The way a battle should be, shouldnt drop n get worse, anything like this battle a weak opener leading to a awesome finish is all your gonna need, props to both tho, peace |
Upppppin Ya'll...!!!
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uppin 4 votes...we tied..i will return da favor just drop a link.
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yo...can we get one more vote on this thing? I return da favor and will peep ya battle. I'm just tryin to get dis thread closed!..
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Voted For: sHoTTaBoY
man good match hard deision here but ma vote gose to shotta close 1 tho shotta get my vote becoz sturture puches nearly everything little weak part mianly ok tho thanx peace out v/ shotta |
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