Battle Rules:

10 - 12 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Biting

Cause The Last Battle Fucked Up I'll Just Set It Up Again n Repost My Verse n Give Him Chance 2 Flow Back...

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 09-09-04 at 11:33 AM

Must drop verse in 25 minutes after check in.

sHoTTaBoY has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-06-04 11:33 AM.

I'ma Keep Ya Heart Pumpin Like The Reebok Sneekers../
I'm The Suregon n Bout To Operate On Your Facial Features../
I'm Pullin Out All The Stops To Defeat-Ya..

Open Up Your Chest n Expose Your HEART../
I Push Mad Brick n Only Thing Your Pushin Is A Walmart Shoppin-Cart..!

I Got Punchlines That'll K.O a HeavyWeight Champ..
Before I Murder You I'ma Leave You HOME(ie)Less Like A TRAMP..
After I'm Done Wit'chu Ya Gon Be Suckin Dick 4 A Food-STAMP..
This Mutha'Fucker So Gay He Went To A CockBar When His Momma Sent Him 2 CAMP..!!

Bitch, Your A Lil Lucky I Didnt Go 'ALL OUT'..
I Still Merked You n ''Thats The Way The Cookie Crumbles' For This Lil Boy SCOUT..!!!!!

LEazy has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-06-04 11:43 AM.

I spit sick barz text or PENCILS and cook up beef like I write wit kitchen UTENSILS//

Beat this cat down wit punches to da FACE, leave um in da hospital cause he ain't welcomed back like MASE//

To win this battle is NOTHIN...cause this cat couldn't type sick if he had a virus on his computer start BUTTON//

Spit fire to the face of this FAG...so watch me X out this so called star like a confederate FLAG//

Let's finish this off now!

Two guns strapped call um my TWINS, and since this dude thinks he's notorious i'll have him covered in blood like he's born AGAIN//

Niiiice Verse...

The Mase One Was A Lil Played Out...

But I Liked It

Good Luck

Uppppppin 4 Votes...!!!

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same here...ya shit was fire dog. I know it's played out, but I was at a rush for time and that damn song was blastin on the speakers as I was typin this. LoL...good luck too!

Voted For: LEazy

i like this rhyme i was feelin it mayn but tha other one was aiight but i like this one

lol, what the fuck?

man, i'm not sayin this cause he voted 4 you, but be honest here....

he aint explain shit, that vote should be DE'ED....
You know you'd hate it if somebody had an unexplaived vote for me...

i had votes in other battles dq'ed cause of unexplained votes, so this one she be too...

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SHE be? wtf, i mean SHOULD be...

hahah fuckin SHE BE...thats hella retarded on my part...
daaaaamn

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Voted For: sHoTTaBoY

LEazy:
I think that u could have done a little better with your punchlines and your delivery. Your structure needs work, too. I did like the confederate flag punchline, but that was it.

ShottaBoy:
U had good punchlines, good delivery, but u could have worked a little on your structure. I felt like u came a little hard (u usually come hard 100%). I like the last two lines...those were tight.
U got my vote.

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Voted For: sHoTTaBoY

blah what weak siht
Sohtt: your shit was kinda ok but it had some ok punches and ok personald also you had a lil elevting but nt enuf ya flow was poor and so was ya strucure

Leazy: yours was really weak no hate but u neda come more harder than that you had poor flow and poorstrucutre but yo ad some ok punches and perosnals

Vote is shotta boi

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Guess who?...

...Paramik Fuckin'...

...Owns You!

one of you please peep my open mic and comment about it
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=147094

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Guess who?...

...Paramik Fuckin'...

...Owns You!

I usually don't have my structure like that. But yaw niggas throw me off when u be like 10 lines. I do my shit by bars. So I had to throw it up there so it was in lines. Plus if the battle was weak we both did it in like 10 minutes.