LEazy vs sHoTTaBoY
 

Battle Rules:

10 - 12 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Biting

Cause The Last Battle Fucked Up I'll Just Set It Up Again n Repost My Verse n Give Him Chance 2 Flow Back...

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 09-09-04 at 11:33 AM

Must drop verse in 25 minutes after check in.

sHoTTaBoY has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-06-04 11:33 AM.

I'ma Keep Ya Heart Pumpin Like The Reebok Sneekers../
I'm The Suregon n Bout To Operate On Your Facial Features../
I'm Pullin Out All The Stops To Defeat-Ya..

Open Up Your Chest n Expose Your HEART../
I Push Mad Brick n Only Thing Your Pushin Is A Walmart Shoppin-Cart..!

I Got Punchlines That'll K.O a HeavyWeight Champ..
Before I Murder You I'ma Leave You HOME(ie)Less Like A TRAMP..
After I'm Done Wit'chu Ya Gon Be Suckin Dick 4 A Food-STAMP..
This Mutha'Fucker So Gay He Went To A CockBar When His Momma Sent Him 2 CAMP..!!

Bitch, Your A Lil Lucky I Didnt Go 'ALL OUT'..
I Still Merked You n ''Thats The Way The Cookie Crumbles' For This Lil Boy SCOUT..!!!!!

LEazy has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-06-04 11:43 AM.

I spit sick barz text or PENCILS and cook up beef like I write wit kitchen UTENSILS//

Beat this cat down wit punches to da FACE, leave um in da hospital cause he ain't welcomed back like MASE//

To win this battle is NOTHIN...cause this cat couldn't type sick if he had a virus on his computer start BUTTON//

Spit fire to the face of this FAG...so watch me X out this so called star like a confederate FLAG//

Let's finish this off now!

Two guns strapped call um my TWINS, and since this dude thinks he's notorious i'll have him covered in blood like he's born AGAIN//

Niiiice Verse...

The Mase One Was A Lil Played Out...

But I Liked It

Good Luck

Uppppppin 4 Votes...!!!

same here...ya shit was fire dog. I know it's played out, but I was at a rush for time and that damn song was blastin on the speakers as I was typin this. LoL...good luck too!

Voted For: LEazy

i like this rhyme i was feelin it mayn but tha other one was aiight but i like this one

lol, what the fuck?

man, i'm not sayin this cause he voted 4 you, but be honest here....

he aint explain shit, that vote should be DE'ED....
You know you'd hate it if somebody had an unexplaived vote for me...

i had votes in other battles dq'ed cause of unexplained votes, so this one she be too...

SHE be? wtf, i mean SHOULD be...

hahah fuckin SHE BE...thats hella retarded on my part...
daaaaamn

Voted For: sHoTTaBoY

LEazy:
I think that u could have done a little better with your punchlines and your delivery. Your structure needs work, too. I did like the confederate flag punchline, but that was it.

ShottaBoy:
U had good punchlines, good delivery, but u could have worked a little on your structure. I felt like u came a little hard (u usually come hard 100%). I like the last two lines...those were tight.
U got my vote.

Voted For: sHoTTaBoY

blah what weak siht
Sohtt: your shit was kinda ok but it had some ok punches and ok personald also you had a lil elevting but nt enuf ya flow was poor and so was ya strucure

Leazy: yours was really weak no hate but u neda come more harder than that you had poor flow and poorstrucutre but yo ad some ok punches and perosnals

Vote is shotta boi

one of you please peep my open mic and comment about it
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=147094

I usually don't have my structure like that. But yaw niggas throw me off when u be like 10 lines. I do my shit by bars. So I had to throw it up there so it was in lines. Plus if the battle was weak we both did it in like 10 minutes.

Upppppin