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20 GraND vs e-dubz
Battle Rules:
8 LINES (short mofo lol) No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 09-17-04 at 11:46 PM Must drop verse in 20 minutes after check in. |
e-dubz has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-17-04 11:17 PM.
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20 GraND has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-17-04 11:19 PM.
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ima rape this bitch........ and he wont hesitate to recieve it
cuz when im done grand on his knees like hes prayin for jesus i suggest throwin in the white flag before you get wrecked 20grand like pictures just takin, he aint even developed yet dubz could ruin the average rap..... from the averge cat im strapped wit tight sixteens like church shoes on shaq picked apart yo lines, still cant find a punch.. u not perfection ur flow grimey but inconsistant like tryin to piss wit erections |
Class is now in session... so shut the fuck up!
Hey kids.. ya im talking to u... Im gonna have to ask you to leave, i know its darastic// But ur a disease, you make the mother fuckn "class sick"// Battle'N 20 GraND so you can abosrb some of the wealth// Might as well stick ur dick in ur ass,cuz ur so "full of yourself"// Dub ur shit is "eZ" and you intent is soft// Your rhymes are like coupons, a high "percentage is off"// You couldnt beat me man, if u were the father rhyme// "watch" kid ur broken, battled me at the wrong "time"// |
ight good spit, lets vote
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good drop...uppin
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Voted For: 20 GraND
ima rape this bitch........ and he wont hesitate to recieve it cuz when im done grand on his knees like hes prayin for jesus ^^^^^^^^ nice opener homie nice i suggest throwin in the white flag before you get wrecked 20grand like pictures just takin, he aint even developed yet ^^^^^^^^^ ha yep lol nice punch homie dubz could ruin the average rap..... from the averge cat im strapped wit tight sixteens like church shoes on shaq picked apart yo lines, still cant find a punch.. u not perfection ur flow grimey but inconsistant like tryin to piss wit erections ^^^^^^^^ aight nice closa and wordplays and punches mayne nice Im gonna have to ask you to leave, i know its darastic// But ur a disease, you make the mother fuckn "class sick"// ^^^^^^^ ooooo personals,,,,,,, personals and punches Battle'N 20 GraND so you can abosrb some of the wealth// Might as well stick ur dick in ur ass,cuz ur so "full of yourself"// ^^^^^^^^^ aight nice punch Dub ur shit is "eZ" and you intent is soft// Your rhymes are like coupons, a high "percentage is off"// You couldnt beat me man, if u were the father rhyme// "watch" kid ur broken, battled me at the wrong "time"// ^^^^^^^^^^ aight nice closa nice punches yo i gots to give dis to 20 becuz he had da personal and punches and harder punches in his verse e-dubz u had great punches and wordplays but i didnt see any personals u could diss him about his krew and shit// but u had good punches but no personals i voted for 20 grand becuz of personals and punches ~peace~ |
Voted For: 20 GraND
Opener - 20, dubz was a little self-glorified Closer - 20, harder than dubz Punches - Tie, both were sickkk Personals - Neither used'em Multies - Dubz for havin one (rap, cat, strapped, shaq) Metas - Tie, both were so sikk again Structure - Tie, both were clean, organized, well layed out Vocab - Tie, Both used elevated vocab Wordplay - 20, had some absolutly dope lines in there Flow - Tie, both flowed very well Overall 20 took this one, but if I could give you both the vote I totally would. I actually enjoyed reading these verses. Both of you cam out hard and had whitty wordplay, very original and creative. I'd say you guys were both pretty closed to 10/10, but 20 took it for slightly better word play...no hate dubz, you did great man. Peace boys. Keep illin..... |
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uppin..
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up this shit..
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Voted For: 20 GraND
20 GraND - Yo punches were hard and they landed... Yo structure was pretty~decent & it didn't stretch~out (or nuttin)... Your flow mayn...it was pretty nice..it didn't fall once... And your vocab was pretty good...easy to read it & all... 4.7/10 e-dubz - Yo punches were hard to..pretty much they connected also... Tha structure was okay..hardly stretch'd out... Flow was pretty decent too...didn't fall... And your vocab was aight too... 3/10 Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Voted For: 20 GraND
20 grand got my vote lemme breakt it down punches=20 vocab=20 structure=20 basikly you could tell from here Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Voted For: 20 GraND
20 grand wins dis 1 he had harder punches alright cople pers alright battle 20 wins dis 1 pz out consider battle closed Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
UppN, can u guys be more detailed in your explanation plz. 1
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Voted For: 20 GraND
Aiiiiiight Grand Took This, Overrall Harder Hittin Punches... Dub ur shit is "eZ" and you intent is soft// Your rhymes are like coupons, a high "percentage is off"// ^^^ that bar did it for me, that shit was niiiiiiice.... keep em comin grand... dubz, ya flow lacked personals, ya didnt really test grand or go at him with any nice punches or personals, that let u down an thats the reazon i'm votin for grand... return the favor p e a c e |
uppin..
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UPPN dis SHIT FO REAL
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uppin..
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Whats up e-dubz i was thinkin do ya wanna battle mayne if u do holla at me on da pm ~peace~
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Voted For: 20 GraND
20 grand beating a vet holy shit im so suprised im gonna vote for him hones tto serious 20 grand out play e-dubz im given it to him for more then that lol heres what i came up wiht aiiiight: punches: 2o grand vocab: 20 grand metas: 20 grand multi's: e-dubs stucture: 20 grand flow: 20 grand wordplay: 20 grad by far:) opener: e-dubs closener: 20 grand man 20 grand elavaTED A hole fuckin lot!!! vote: 20 grad by far yo return the favour in my battle the links in my sig:) peace Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Thnx bro, I had to bust my SHIT out, u know..
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Voted For: e-dubz
holy shit both were hella good!!!!! but i'll give this to dubz cos his punches made me laff a lil...they were interessting...hius opner was tight too(7/10)..but 20 ur opner was a lil off yo....props to both...but dubs came up harder.. holla Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Uppn
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uppin..
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UppN
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uppin..
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Uppn
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damn noone votes on this shit.. uppin
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up...
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lets finish this battle off plz, UPPN
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dont sleep mayne, lets get this popN
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uppin this battle..
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uppin this battle..
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Voted For: e-dubz
Im gonna have to ask you to leave, i know its darastic// But ur a disease, you make the mother fuckn "class sick"// 5/10...played. Battle'N 20 GraND so you can abosrb some of the wealth// Might as well stick ur dick in ur ass,cuz ur so "full of yourself"// full of yaself shit is played too...5/10. Dub ur shit is "eZ" and you intent is soft// Your rhymes are like coupons, a high "percentage is off"// 5/10...weak You couldnt beat me man, if u were the father rhyme// "watch" kid ur broken, battled me at the wrong "time"// 5/10...watch shit has been said before... overall - 5/10...came played to fuckin death. ima rape this bitch........ and he wont hesitate to recieve it cuz when im done grand on his knees like hes prayin for jesus 5/10...weak. i suggest throwin in the white flag before you get wrecked 20grand like pictures just takin, he aint even developed yet 6/10...lol dubz could ruin the average rap..... from the averge cat im strapped wit tight sixteens like church shoes on shaq 5/10...weak, but funny picked apart yo lines, still cant find a punch.. u not perfection ur flow grimey but inconsistant like tryin to piss wit erections 5/10...gay shit. overall - 5.25...you edged this with one bar v/ e-dubz go return the favor..link in sig. |
uppin this battle..
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uppin this shit..
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