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8 LINES (short mofo lol)
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 09-17-04 at 11:46 PM

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e-dubz has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-17-04 11:17 PM.

20 GraND has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-17-04 11:19 PM.

ima rape this bitch........ and he wont hesitate to recieve it
cuz when im done grand on his knees like hes prayin for jesus
i suggest throwin in the white flag before you get wrecked
20grand like pictures just takin, he aint even developed yet
dubz could ruin the average rap..... from the averge cat
im strapped wit tight sixteens like church shoes on shaq
picked apart yo lines, still cant find a punch.. u not perfection
ur flow grimey but inconsistant like tryin to piss wit erections

Class is now in session... so shut the fuck up!
Hey kids.. ya im talking to u...

Im gonna have to ask you to leave, i know its darastic//
But ur a disease, you make the mother fuckn "class sick"//
Battle'N 20 GraND so you can abosrb some of the wealth//
Might as well stick ur dick in ur ass,cuz ur so "full of yourself"//
Dub ur shit is "eZ" and you intent is soft//
Your rhymes are like coupons, a high "percentage is off"//
You couldnt beat me man, if u were the father rhyme//
"watch" kid ur broken, battled me at the wrong "time"//

ight good spit, lets vote

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Voted For: 20 GraND

ima rape this bitch........ and he wont hesitate to recieve it
cuz when im done grand on his knees like hes prayin for jesus
^^^^^^^^ nice opener homie nice

i suggest throwin in the white flag before you get wrecked
20grand like pictures just takin, he aint even developed yet
^^^^^^^^^ ha yep lol nice punch homie

dubz could ruin the average rap..... from the averge cat
im strapped wit tight sixteens like church shoes on shaq
picked apart yo lines, still cant find a punch.. u not perfection
ur flow grimey but inconsistant like tryin to piss wit erections
^^^^^^^^ aight nice closa and wordplays and punches mayne nice


Im gonna have to ask you to leave, i know its darastic//
But ur a disease, you make the mother fuckn "class sick"//
^^^^^^^ ooooo personals,,,,,,, personals and punches

Battle'N 20 GraND so you can abosrb some of the wealth//
Might as well stick ur dick in ur ass,cuz ur so "full of yourself"//
^^^^^^^^^ aight nice punch

Dub ur shit is "eZ" and you intent is soft//
Your rhymes are like coupons, a high "percentage is off"//
You couldnt beat me man, if u were the father rhyme//
"watch" kid ur broken, battled me at the wrong "time"//
^^^^^^^^^^ aight nice closa nice punches

yo i gots to give dis to 20 becuz he had da personal and punches and harder punches in his verse

e-dubz u had great punches and wordplays but i didnt see any personals u could diss him about his krew and shit//
but u had good punches but no personals

i voted for 20 grand becuz of personals and punches

~peace~

Voted For: 20 GraND

Opener - 20, dubz was a little self-glorified
Closer - 20, harder than dubz
Punches - Tie, both were sickkk
Personals - Neither used'em
Multies - Dubz for havin one (rap, cat, strapped, shaq)
Metas - Tie, both were so sikk again
Structure - Tie, both were clean, organized, well layed out
Vocab - Tie, Both used elevated vocab
Wordplay - 20, had some absolutly dope lines in there
Flow - Tie, both flowed very well

Overall 20 took this one, but if I could give you both the vote I totally would. I actually enjoyed reading these verses. Both of you cam out hard and had whitty wordplay, very original and creative. I'd say you guys were both pretty closed to 10/10, but 20 took it for slightly better word play...no hate dubz, you did great man. Peace boys. Keep illin.....

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up this shit..

Voted For: 20 GraND

20 GraND -
Yo punches were hard and they landed...
Yo structure was pretty~decent & it didn't stretch~out (or nuttin)...
Your flow mayn...it was pretty nice..it didn't fall once...
And your vocab was pretty good...easy to read it & all...
4.7/10

e-dubz -
Yo punches were hard to..pretty much they connected also...
Tha structure was okay..hardly stretch'd out...
Flow was pretty decent too...didn't fall...
And your vocab was aight too...
3/10

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Voted For: 20 GraND

20 grand got my vote lemme breakt it down
punches=20
vocab=20
structure=20
basikly you could tell from here

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