Eyvon vs sHoTTaBoY
 

Battle Rules:

6 - 10 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Shawty......
I DIDNT Even Wanna Battle You..
But Like A True Female, You Wouldnt Give Up n Nagged A Brother...
But After Its Done..
Me n You = :hump:

lol, Juss Playin, But G'Luck Sweetness, Do Ya Thang

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 09-25-04 at 08:16 AM

Must drop verse in 30 minutes after check in.

Eyvon has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-22-04 08:17 AM.

sHoTTaBoY has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-22-04 08:17 AM.

yo, if u think that im wack, then im tha wackiest rapper u'll ever meet/
i AM feminem, u tha weakest motherfucker ever to hit tha urban streets/
im not tha greatest rapper, i aint gonna lie bout shit like that/
but i got sum goodies and an ass thats phat/
u just wanna take advantage of me cause im a woman/
well bitch u mistakin, i guess u got another thing commin/
ur weak ass punches and pussy rhymes, u dont git tha detail/
o, u a man? i coulda swore i was battlin a female/
cause u c a world without me's like a mustart without tha Heinz/
i know i aint battlin no hardcore rapper, u just a Busta without tha Rhymes/
cause when i git heated, watch yo back cause i drop bombs/
my lyrics'll keep droppin yo ass off, i fight like i was in Vietnam/
so look at me, next time i c u, i wanna watch u run like u remember me/
u forget? ill jog ur brain around tha block 2 exersize ur memory/
so dont git me started, ill rattle ur skull like my spit is an earthquake/
tryin 2 battle eyvon and win is tha worst decision u could eva make!

Okay, Okay...This Femcees Cute n I Hate To Do This, But..
Uhummm, Okay, Check, Check, Okay...

Babygirl, Ya Rhymes Are Sumthin Like A ''Period''...
''Messy'' Nobody Likes Em, An Ya ''Spits'' Aint Nuthin But 'Fluid'..
Try Prezentin Ya Rhymes ''Naked'' You'd Get More 'Propps'...
If Ya Really Want ''Recognition'' Give Up Ya 'G-Spot'...
I Set This Up As A ''Plot'' To Whip Out My Dick n ''Shoot'' You With One ''Shot''...
Hey! An Then You Really Can ''Spit Sumthin Hot''..! (Haha)

This Girls Bendin Over Backwards Flauntin Her ''Pussy''..
We Didnt Have To ''Lyrically Flirt'' I Wouldda Fucked You Babe, I Aint ''Fussy'' :)

Seriously, Give Up Rappin You Can Be A 'Groupie' For ''Dopeness Defined''..
U My Baby n All, But The Whole RV Can Tap That Ass, 'I Dont Mind' :)

Upin................

Voted For: sHoTTaBoY

aiiighht ok battle....
opener - shot
closer - eyvon
flow - shot
punchez - shot
v/ shot, yvone i think u posted that rap sumwhere else, in the crew tryoutz or sum shit cuase i memba seein it somewhere there....

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Voted For: sHoTTaBoY

i think shotta took this he pretty much had better everything lol so im gonna give it to him sry but he came so hard you kno hes way better then this other cat im gonan give him everything pretty much heres what i came up wit:
punches: shotta
vocab: shotta
wordplay: shotta
metas: shotta
multi's: shotta
stucture: shotta
opener: shotta
closner: shotta
vote: shottaboy
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Voted For: Eyvon

eyvon won this. better flow and punches were so much on point

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upin....

uppin. damn will all ya vote quit bein dq'd? either post tha right way or dont post at all...

This was feedback posted for sHoTTaBoY
 

Shotta N Eyvon Both Nice Drop.. For Females Ha Ha Jp... Cant Vote On This 1 So Good Luck To Tha Both Of Ya...

HAHAHAH!!

Cocky bastard, i'ma e-slap u boy!

Lol @ Ur Net Threat Shut Up B4 I Send U A Virus :laugh: Good Luck In Ur Battles Son
Roflmmfao@All Tha DQ Votes Uve Recieved In This Battle

lol. aight now. uppin! im tired of all these dq's....

aight SHoTTa, much as i like talkin 2 u, u need 2 clear out ur inbox baby, cant send none til u do....

lol.....................

done!

may aswell up this shit while im here

upppin u fucks! haha

ya, well, uppin before i RAPE U! lol. im high.....

LOL
Rape me?

ya cant rape the willing sweetness........
haha

naw, i cant rape them cause they want me and it wouldnt b considered rape... just sweet, sweet luv. lol. uppin!

LOL
I want you now do i?

says who huh? :)

Oh yeah, an uhmm, UPPING

This was feedback posted for Eyvon
 

I CAUGHT A MOTHAFUCKIN BITER!!!!!!

cause u c a world without me's like a mustart without tha Heinz/
i know i aint battlin no hardcore rapper, u just a Busta without tha Rhymes/


U STOLE THAT FROM eMINEM IN 8MILE!!!!!

not a gd look sista u already got skills and u dun blackened ur ass and lost sum respect cos ur a biter!

Voted For: sHoTTaBoY

shottaboy won this one cuz eyvon no wonder you lose a lot of bAattles that is the same damn verse down to the same words that u used against me so i think your gona get DQ'ed on this one or seriously merk'd cuz thats all you do is bute off rhymes and moves :cough: 8mile :cough: with you busta w/out the rhymes line so idk why u would go and try to beat this man with the same verse you put up on me how many other ppl u plan to use it on...
but neway shotta nice lines lol i liked the style
[QUOTE]If Ya Really Want ''Recognition'' Give Up Ya 'G-Spot'...
I Set This Up As A ''Plot'' To Whip Out My Dick n ''Shoot'' You With One ''Shot''[QUOTE/]nice line man pretty tight but yeah your gona win cuz she used the same verse as she did against me so thats kewl i suppose cuz that just shows this girl cant make up her own rhymes

wow first vote that actually counted haha.... yea that dude wus rite she wus bitin... nice try but if u were guna bite(not encouragin to do so) bite from sum1 that not many ppl know... aiight gud luck to both of yall..

Upin this here ya'll....!!!!

Voted For: sHoTTaBoY

Punches-Shotta
Structure-Eyvon
Vocab-Shotta
Enjoyment-Shotta
Opener-Shotta
Closer-Shotta
Wordplay-Shotta

Overall Vote= Shotta

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o, shit..... im doin bad as fuck.... uppin i gues...

Voted For: Eyvon

cause u c a world without me's like a mustart without tha Heinz/
i know i aint battlin no hardcore rapper, u just a Busta without tha Rhymes/
ummmmm eminem from 8mile u forget? ill jog ur brain around tha block 2 exersize ur memory/
and that's eminem too. girl what the hell u gotta use eminems lines for in ur shit? ya done good other than that but he still beat yer ass sry

well i voted for eyvon on accident b/c i'm stupid n high i'm sorry ya'll but at least it gives ya a vote right? but imma have to say if i were in the right state of mind idda voted for shottaboy b/c like all those ppl said b4 i posted that (or read theirs) U USED EMINEMS GODDAMN LINE....n 2 of em..!!! damn!! but whatever

Upin Yall..

Dont sleep...
god damn you people!

uppin, im hopeless, but w/e....

Voted For: sHoTTaBoY

Shottyaboy had a better verse.. the structure was nice, the punchlines hit harder to me, like you put more thought into it.. the rhymes were on point as well, i also like the flow,, it was constant and steady, so good verses from both, but shottaboy gets it, punches win battles..

hit me back with an honest vote in this one, pz..

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=152255

Voted For: sHoTTaBoY

LMAO


Shotta NICE ASS LINES MAN

Funny as fuck!

>>>Seriously, Give Up Rappin You Can Be A 'Groupie' For ''Dopeness Defined''..
U My Baby n All, But The Whole RV Can Tap That Ass, 'I Dont Mind'
<<OWNED IT'

so look at me, next time i c u, i wanna watch u run like u remember me/
u forget? ill jog ur brain around tha block 2 exersize ur memory/
so dont git me started, ill rattle ur skull like my spit is an earthquake/
tryin 2 battle eyvon and win is tha worst decision u could eva make!
<<<Nice but, U never had a a good finisher

Vocab:Shot
Wordplay:Def.shot
Multi's:Both

Vote SHotta



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Eyvon

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Ay Shotta Im Jus Postin Here Kuz I Know Ull C This... Look @ My Sig... Its Jus An X In A Tiny Box! *Sigh* Aiight Wateva Gl Wif Ths Battle...

i got no idea whasup with it, diabolic, holla at me next time ya on an i'll ask who made it whats wrong, aight?

upin yall

pft.... u won, but fuck it.... uppin..............

Voted For: sHoTTaBoY

aight..eyvon...nice verse...u came alright wit some aight punches...flow was ok...could av had more personals...punches could have been a lil harder..overall..aight verse...

shotta..wit the name change...nice verse..u make LOL....some nice punches in there..flow was ok and structure was good..the last line was funny as fuck...overall good verse

my vote=dopeman