~{ExClusive}~ vs C.C.C.P.
 

Battle Rules:

6-12
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 09-28-04 at 07:34 PM

Must drop verse in 120 minutes after check in.

~{ExClusive}~ has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-23-04 09:42 PM.

if you dont understand wordplay the real way its done and punches then dont vote! and heres my verse:


C.C.C.P sounds like this wack kid is from Russia, now I laugh…
To much shit but I still think he’s wack, but that’s only from my behalf/
I would merk this wack faggot here with ease but still you need some relaxation…
I hope he has fun I just played him like the two one threes, occupation/
He probably thinks he came out with a hotter verse but naw he needs to embellish…
Ill run over him and make him feel soft like a sweet jar of relish/
I kno my verses make people think im a little hellish, but still C.C.C.P is wack…
Got them black gee’z up is me with my rhymes and the way I attack/
Even kno his voice comes out as a Russian I still say he needs elevation…
He hurt now I made him feel sad, even kno I won, it felt like a vacation/

C.C.C.P. has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-24-04 09:13 PM.

ok i'm up on this shit ready to spit soon and i'm feeling good sometin raw about to come

C.C.C.P.'s 12 lines for ~{ExClusive}~:
This bitch had his hot period but it ain't that time of the month no more//
you winner ha that shit never gonna happen like canada being in a war//
the boy make guns wit explosive tips so you better have a very hard core//
you had to change your subtitle cause you wasn't even a paper weight//
he told ya he carry rocks cause he gotta carve his rap in slate//
i'm been sitting here looking for one of his good lines but ain't gonna wait//
your ill style pukin up like mary kate, damn man it soon to becom your faith//
the way i kill you gonna make you news exclusive on every station//
my line kept you waitin but made you HORNy like satan//
you call me a clown cause i'ma throw some pies and fist in your face//
you couldn't pay the shoe so you tryed sporting a g-unit lace//
i'm fast like a bullet and brought 16 little friends just in case//

come on ya'll vote dis up

yer wack buddy haha Uppin

man dawg all you said in the hole rap was that i was wack no punches so sit your bitch ass down cause u taking a lose this time

ovesly you dont kno anything i was full of punches maybe 2 lines said you were wack and thats it try and elvate before you get koed by a true rapper thats 14

Voted For: C.C.C.P.

ohhhhhhh smack, CCCP (WTF does that mean?) took this the structure was nice streched in places but other wise nice. The punches were harder, the vocab was aight for both, but CCCP just connected more. PEACE

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^hahaha what a unexplained vote and hate vote to hahaha im d/qing that:laugh:
uppin for honest shit

^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^CAUTH A HATER and Also, i aint gonna get into a fuckin 1 full page discussion on why, i felt him mo. Man stop bitchin if u so sure ull win it dont matter or maybe u are not sure ull win? :evilgrin:

^you dotn make sence its gettin d/qed anyway no matter if you did vote honest you didnt explain it haha uppin

here is a link to "HOW NOT TO BE A BITCH ABOUT THE VOTES" http://community.rapverse.com/showb...419#post1613419

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shit wuz fire specially compared 2 that wack ass faggot C.C.C.P. i gotta battle against him comin up 2 but i can't vote ckuz wen in tha same ckrew so jus a little feedback work on flow i guess make tha barz relatively tha same length

yo honestly this shit iz explained like fuck itz gunna get DQed cuz it soundz like a hate vote but wut do i kno :laugh:

^haha thanks man ya i dont care about flow to much on battles cuz who cares unless you got multi's in yer verse i dotn care plus i KOed this bitch:laugh:
uppin

Voted For: C.C.C.P.

i prefered cccps flow and his punches hit better. eclusive some of the words you used were out of context and your flow just wasnt as good, but cccp you need to work on your vocabulary, exsteend your words. make everything more cheky!!!

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damn both of ya'llsuck cock scared as shit that i beat ya'll and now u bitching out and d/qing votes fuck yall and what you talking abot a couple lines look at this shit:
C.C.C.P sounds like this [b/]wack[b] kid is from Russia, now I laugh…
To much shit but I still think he’s [b/]wack[b], but that’s only from my behalf/
I would merk this [b/]wack[b] faggot here with ease but still you need some relaxation…
kno my verses make people think im a little hellish, but still C.C.C.P is [b/]wack[b]…
and you call "sweat as a jar of relish" a punch? lolololololol

i bet u don't even no what k.o. means lololol

and to think i wanted to be in n.o.k. but now that i no 2 people are wack in it i'm guessing the hole crew is so FUCK YALL

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Can't vote on this one, just checkin' the count...

that mistic guy i dont know what you think rap is but you jsut got caught dick riding i KOed this guy lol if you dont understand anything i said then get lost and elavate before you vote on my battles or vet battle im almost good enough to be a vet so get lost fucker and cccp you wack im nto scared i d/qed them cuz there hates unexplained and the works so fuck off yer wack as hell!
uppin for 5 votes

shut up damn i don't no how much more of this i can take cause all you faggits do is talk

Voted For: ~{ExClusive}~

this gotta go to exclusive,
his wordplay was way better,
his punches hit harder,shit was kinda goofy too,
the ccp watever made no sence for real though,
but both structures were good
ex had a good flow to his though

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cccp- noooooo, horrible rhymes scheme and everything thing was off. check some of my battles if u wanna see dopeness and get better, no punches man, no punchs.....1/10

x- well you were aight, def coulda been touched up but for a newb yu did good. work on punches and wordplay and personals ya dig?.....5/10

return the favor.....trigga or 9th degreee...pz.

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Just Checkin Da Battle

Ex U Short Yo Rhymes A Lil But Its Cool Tight Verse Mayne

C.c.p.

Good Flow But Didnt See No Punches

Dis Just An Feedback

aight ill vote honest tho but ya man im nto realy a newb tho but i dotn care im young 14 to be exact lol but ya thanks for the vote and ya i didnt even put my soul into my verse whitch you need to do that to have a dope verse when you battle put yer soul into it:D
uppin

hell no mother fuck i swear to god you a bitch all that dqing shit god damn and phantom i seem your shit and i don't like it and really you bitch ass ain't gonna say shit cause even though you beat me i'm still better than u so 1111111111111111111. uppin for another 5 vote so they can get dqed by the bitch of all bitches

Voted For: ~{ExClusive}~

Exclusive-Decent verse. A few punches...but I like the first bar. and the second....jar of relish line was decent...and nice wordplay I had to say. but fix your structure and better your flow....but okay spit...

CccP- some of your lines were to damn long....but in your verse their were no hard hitting punches....nothing stuck...or made me say damn...and up your vocab or lyrical content.
To bring punches come with the setup in the first line then the punch in the second line....I just see alot of filler...especially the last line....

Voted For: ~{ExClusive}~

Exclusive won.. His personals killed.. even tho ya structure was off, your disses were on point, the emphasis of him a russia was funny to me.. nice battle from both, flow was about the same, and so were the rhymes so this was really close and shit, i liked this battle.. Exclusive won tho with his disses and a more enjoyable verse, no hate..

return honest vote in my battle right here..
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=152255

oh, and P.S, do you have Adobe Audition 1.5 yet? coz i do need a Sig cuz, hook me up, i was tryna tell you, i guess my message fucked up.. hit me on AIM Torment29

Voted For: ~{ExClusive}~

~{ExClusive}~
structure is stretched.. flow falls off due to the stretchness.. u had a few multis.. wordplay was alright.. a few of ur punches connected.. alright personals.. u focused to much on the Russian shit though..

C.C.C.P.
structure is also stretched.. flow also falls off due to the stretchnes..u had a few mults.. wordplay sucked.. none of ur punches connected.. no good personals..

Overall
both had a wack structure.. both flows fell off.. both had a few multis.. Exclusive had better wordplay, more connecting punches, and better personals.. so basing off of that.. Exclusive gets my vote..

VOTE - ~{EXCLUSIVE}~

Voted For: ~{ExClusive}~

c.c.c.p ok first bar wack canada been in wars but anyways also gun lines are played there is a thread about that in the lyrisist lounge and you did it twice punches weak as well as disses structure and flow ok vocab also ok a 4/10 cuz ive seen much worse

exclusive opener weak ender was ok your punches and disses were better then Cs shit but you need to work on those still also good vocab and you tried alot of personals structure is ok needs a little work ok verse your slightly better punches got you this battle 4.5/10

Voted For: ~{ExClusive}~

exclusive easly took this battle he KOed this bad fuck he took this with hes he hit with hard punches and vocab he had some but overall liked his verse
Vote eclusive

cccp why do russians try to rap lol that makes me laugh no hate tho honest vote ps.