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Intellekt vs Premanition
Battle Rules:
6 linez No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 60 Check in by: 09-27-04 at 05:06 PM Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in. |
Intellekt has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-24-04 05:07 PM.
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Premanition has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-25-04 05:46 AM.
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Compress ur tongue slow....make it impossible for ur 'spit' to flow....
the fact ur planning to show...proves that ur total 'intellekt' is actually low... put the knife to ur neck in a rush....laugh as the blood evacuate in a gush... cos wen it come to battlin this 'dick' is the opposite to 'bush'....(*) ur name contadicts but you sayin you got the 'stroke of a genius?'.... ha...well dawg the only time you hearin that, is from ya boy wen ya strokin his penis.... |
(*) = dick opposite to bush and this dick (intellekt) is opposite to george bush wen it comes to battling, very scared!!!!
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i spit grit with science, disconfigure your matter till ur no more//
u show no complience, last 10 min ull be torn down ya center core// separate ur brain, give you a headache along wit a half// aint it a pain, just able to do half the things on my behalf// kids a virgin, he thinks hard and tries but comes up blank// premonitions flow is useless like $19.00 in his bank// |
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i typed up the wrong words so its sorta confusing instead of comes i wanted to put up draws as in drawing outta a bank teller and the next line states that he has 19.00 in his bank so he cant draw out anything....you can only draw out sets of 20s...sorry for the confusion :thumbup: |
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come on y'all hit this wiv votes uppin.............. |
Voted For: Premanition
funny one man i loved it you straigt merked him in this battle i never seen anybody get merked so bad in 6 linez man that was great peace return the favor http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=151021 insane16 (up 2-0) http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=149715 Lil-Youngstah (up 3-0) |
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uppin come on y'all don't sleep on this...............
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Voted For: Premanition
intellek was tryin too hard to be complex to me.. i like an easy read, even tho i understood it all, it wasn't witty, just a use of words.. premanition had better punches which stuck more from the opener on.. i like the style, your flow was on point and i liked the easy rhyme scheme.. overall, pemanition tool it with better subtance that i was feelin.. no hate tho, seriously, premanition just put more thought into his.. return an honest vote in this one plz, 1.. |
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Voted For: Premanition
voted for premanation aight leme break it down on thsi battle it was tough premantion-nice structure and flow was consistant you had some real nice multi's and personals were off the hook, punches were pretty good and you had okay wordplay work on that some but nice drop man intellekt-aight man you had real nice punches but you lacked in personals and multis which brought u down..nice wordplay and structure..but your flow wasnt that great..work on flow multis and harder personals.. opener-premanition punches-intellekt multis-premanition metas-none flow-premanition structure-intellekt closer-premanition best lines premanition-Compress ur tongue slow....make it impossible for ur 'spit' to flow.... the fact ur planning to show...proves that ur total 'intellekt' is actually low... ur name contadicts but you sayin you got the 'stroke of a genius?'.... ha...well dawg the only time you hearin that, is from ya boy wen ya strokin his penis.... intellekt-i spit grit with science, disconfigure your matter till ur no more// u show no complience, last 10 min ull be torn down ya center core// please return the favor links are in my signature honest votes only |
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uppin 2 votes |
Voted For: Premanition
Intellekt had lots of punches, but none of them were strong. There was not a single time reading his verse when I thought "Wow." Prem, on the other hand had some really nice punches. The last line had me rolling on the floor. Prem took this with his punches and wordplay |
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Voted For: Premanition
Damn, close battle, intresting to see what the count is, this one goes to premanition cause of more complexity. Intellect although your bar structure made it easy to read, so do multii's and in this area Preman had you owned this was probably the deciding factor, you have good ideas though just eliavte on them Return the Favour!!! Do It |
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