[~*Lady Fiya*~] vs ~Sonofisis~
 

Battle Rules:

4 Lines (8 bars maximum)
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
No B/S
No Hate Votes/Unexplained will be removed..!

30 minutes after check in.. let's do this man... check in by 30 minutes...
good luck sonofisis! get at me,
~wun~

Minimum posts to vote: 300

Check in by: 09-28-04 at 07:35 PM

Must drop verse in 30 minutes after check in.

my error- typin fast 4 bars- 8 lines maximum sry.. bout that..

~Sonofisis~ has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-28-04 07:07 PM.

[~*Lady Fiya*~] has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-28-04 07:09 PM.

I'll Knock Yo ass Out, like too much of the Beer Hit Ya
Your talent is like this Photo, I never Got a Clear Picture
http://img78.photobucket.com/albums...graduation2.jpg
Flame hit you and burned you as soon as I Wrote Somethin
Beating You is Easy, espesially since i always Smoke "Dutches"
You're gonna feel the impact when i Throw Rhymes At Ya
u're a Princess? well u're gettin drove to yo death like Diana
I'mma tell you right now, you're goin no where wit ya raps
you'd think i was a vetrinarian the way I tale care of this cat
To see her win atleast once, u Have To Be Patient
She's gassed, So i'mma pump fluid in her like Gasoline Stations
So watch me kidnapp this bitch and hold her weav for Ransom
I would say that i ended your career, but geez, u never Had One

EXPLANATION FIRST..
*Isis- an egyptain goddess married to her brother (incest), hieroglyphics are symbols from Egyptian writing..
His name is sonofisis aka datruth29.. and he used to be in mindz collide..
inertia- a term used in physics to pull back and forth with force..*



~*MY VERSE*~
Ya incest born, test tube and cord as the son of Isis..
Fam n crisis cuz I tattoo this loss 2 the back of ya iris!! (eye)
Ya mind collided, now ya punches must strap on a compass!
Dqs make u win honest, identity covered but I table ya contents
Da truth's hidden, got voters 2 scan my verse like hieroglyphics!
y hypocrit mimesis? Ya record pull newbs like inertia n physics!
Name change per week, riders vote make ya losses word-perfect?!
you overrated? Yea, like rakin’ ice you only defeating the purpose!


..8 bars no more sry bout the typo again..
*get at me* and good luck, sonofisis aka datruth29..
pz uppppppppppin’ this shit, like…
~wun~

u did ten lines....... i told u that was a typo..!!!! dayum.. it's str8 but nice battle good luck....

oh, i'm sorry, i just got yo message PM, and i just saw your correction, shit, my bad, good verse tho..

I would of did a lot better, but i overdosed of these Vicodin pills, i had to rush this shit and rest, i'm dizzy as fuck, you're prolly gonna win..

Voted For: [~*Lady Fiya*~]

lol fiya killed dis shyt....it was a good battle but fiya knows her shyt.....she fuked up up she kno everything about u kid wtf did u battle her for...she smart as hell lol.....

Punches fiya
Structure fiya
opener and closer fiya
wordplay fiya

dis was 1 sided fiya merked it........

no hat return the favors in sigs tho...

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Voted For: ~Sonofisis~

close battle no hate to you fiya.. you just didnt come very hard on this one.. i was feeling sonofisis better on this one... he had harder punches... lady fiya i think u could have taken this if u came harder.. but sonofisis had good punches and flow.. and he just barely edged u out on this one.. no hate..

I STILL LOVE YA FIYA..

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Ofcourse she knows everything about me, i'm a legend on here.. but i won't complain coz i ain't a bitch, but next time judge on Punches, personals, flow, etc, not coz she knows my old name.. coz her verse was good, but you never explained why..

This was feedback posted for [~*Lady Fiya*~]
 

too close to vote on so just dropping feedback, ya structure was good and i'm loving the opener

Why didn't u Vote?

Voted For: [~*Lady Fiya*~]

AAight good battle...
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Opener-Lady
Closer-Sonofisis
Personals-Lady
Punches-Lady
Multies-lady
Metas-Sonofisis
Structure-Sonofisis
Overall Best Verse-Lady
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aaight great battle i really dont have any advice for yall exept work on yalls structure a lil more...and sonofisis work on your word play.........please return the favor wit an unbias vote on my sig.........Vote/Lady

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uppin......................................

Voted For: ~Sonofisis~

k im gonna narrow this down a lil easy:

Lady Fiya:
no hate but you got beat in this the only thing i real notived you had better were vocabulary and a closener but mostly i think sonfisis won he had better shit.

Sonofisis:
k you clearly won bein honest you hd everything else but you didnt havent stucture whitch you dont realy need to win anything lol so im given him the vote nice shit yall.:D

VOTE: Sonofisis

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Voted For: ~Sonofisis~

I'll Knock Yo ass Out, like too much of the Beer Hit Ya
Your talent is like this Photo, I never Got a Clear Picture
right there thats what took it. real personal
Da truth's hidden, got voters 2 scan my verse like hieroglyphics!
y hypocrit mimesis? Ya record pull newbs like inertia n physics
i appreciate vocab but u coulda did a punch that dont need a dictionary

So watch me kidnapp this bitch and hold her weav for Ransom
I would say that i ended your career, but geez, u never Had 1

grimey!!

Name change per week, riders vote make ya losses word-perfect?!
you overrated? Yea, like rakin’ ice you only defeating the purpose!


best punch in ya verse. really hot

overall fiya took vocab son took punches personals equal cuz fiyas was a little too deep. son was straight to the point no explanation needed fiya had to start her verse wit one
vote/sonofisis

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Voted For: ~Sonofisis~

Ok, this was a close one. Both of you had good structure and punches, and some nice wordplay too. Lady Fiya I liked your opener, but the 3rd and 4th lines didn't really hit that hard. The next 2 lines were good, nice personal too, and I like the way you played off his name Datruth. Then your closer I wasn't too satisfied with. It was set up like it was gonna hit hard, but you could've used a lot more things than "rakin' ice" to make the line more effective. Sonofisis your opener was aight, nothing too special, but you made up for it with the next bar, with a good play off the whole "dutchess of metaphors" thing. The next bar about Princess Diana was the highlight of your verse, good job there. The next 2 bars were alright, the "gasonline" line could've been better I felt but it didn't really take anything away from your verse. You closer was aight too, as your last line is a little old, but the line about kidnapping her weave made me laugh.
Vote - ~Sonofisis~

Return the vote, honest explained votes only...
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...624994&posted=1

uppin....................

Voted For: ~Sonofisis~

Lady, you said at the bottom of your verse that you did the max of 8 bars, you only did lines, 8 bars is 16 lines, not hatin just wanted to make sure you knew..anyways...

Opener - Sono, Lady seemed to be trying to rhyme too hard which threw off the whole opener, (didnt make much sense)

Closer - Sono, hit hard, nice closer, ladys again was kinda wack but not too bad, just didnt hit as hard

Punches - Sono, his verse was longer which alloud him to throw more of his hard punches

Personals - Lady, she actually had some alright ones whereas sono didnt really use any

Metas - Tie, both verses had equally hard metas that were used

Multies - Lady, she tried to use some in there unlike sono didnt have any

Structure - Sono, I like verse better when theres only your verse and thats it, makes it neater and easier to read, Lady had stuff onto and underneith her verse

Vocab - Lady, more complex verse than sonos

Flow - Sono, I was feeling your flow, Ladys was kind of off cause some of the larger words didnt fit in

Creativity - Tie, I think both verses were equally creative as you both used 1 link each within your verse and both had some kool ideas to spit about

Overall, as you can see above, sonofisis took this one. Althought it was a pretty good battle, you can only have one winner and im sure the votes will show that sonofisis took this one, Lady, elevate on structure/flow of your verse, yours was good but if it Props to both, no beef, just an honest vote in my opinion, payce..